Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and correct word choice (e.g., 'close casual' → 'casual clothes').

例: I usually wear casual clothes, mainly jeans and T-shirts, because they are comfortable. For example, I often choose jeans and a cotton T-shirt when I go out with friends or run errands.

提案: Give a clear direct answer first (which you prefer generally), then contrast with context using linking words like 'however' or 'but'. Fix tense and phrasing (e.g., 'I prefer both of them in cafes or summers' → be specific).

例: I generally prefer casual clothes because they are comfortable; however, I wear smart clothes at university. For instance, in summer or when I go to a café I choose jeans or a simple dress, but at university I wear my uniform.

提案: Good concise answer with an example. Improve slightly by varying vocabulary and adding a linking word to show reason. Correct small phrasing issues (e.g., 'in the street' → 'out').

例: Yes, I enjoy wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable for informal occasions. For example, I usually wear a cotton T-shirt when I go for a walk or meet friends.

提案: Clarify and reorganize. Start with a direct statement about how much time you spend, then give specific reasons using linking words. Avoid unclear or incorrect phrases ('stand in front of my future', 'best race').

例: Yes, I spend quite a lot of time choosing clothes because I want to look appropriate for the whole day. For example, I often try on several outfits and compare them to find the most comfortable and suitable one.

提案: Clear and relevant answer. Improve fluency by combining sentences and using linking words like 'because' and 'however'. Correct small grammar (e.g., 'it's our mandatory' → 'it's mandatory').

例: Yes. On weekdays I wear smart clothes — a black-and-white uniform — because it is mandatory at my university. However, at the weekend I prefer casual outfits such as T-shirts, jeans or simple dresses.

提案: Be more concise and avoid filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence naming preferred colors, then give a reason using linking words and a brief example. Reduce repetition of 'actually' and 'because'.

例: I prefer dark colors such as black and brown because I don't like attracting attention. For example, I usually choose black or dark brown jackets instead of bright yellow or red ones.

× Actually in my daily life I like to close casual, for example jeans and T-shirts because they are comfortable and practical for daily life with hanging out with my friends and going somewhere.

✓ Actually, in my daily life I like to choose casual clothes, for example jeans and T-shirts, because they are comfortable and practical for hanging out with my friends or going out.

Used wrong verb 'close' instead of 'choose' and 'casual' needs to modify 'clothes' (word order). Also 'for daily life with hanging out...' is ungrammatical; restructure to 'comfortable and practical for hanging out with my friends or going out.' Improve by using correct verb, placing adjectives with the noun they modify, and using parallel prepositional phrases. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Actually I prefer both of them in cafes or summers.

✓ Actually, I prefer both types in cafes or during summer.

Use 'both of them' is less precise; 'both types' or 'both styles' is clearer. 'Summers' is incorrect in this context; use 'during summer' or 'in summer' for season. Maintain present simple tense. Improve by choosing correct noun and preposition for time expressions. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Not really smart, I'd like to wear casual clothes like jeans and simple dresses.

✓ Not very smart; I'd rather wear casual clothes like jeans and simple dresses.

'Not really smart' is informal and incomplete; use 'Not very smart' or attach to sentence with semicolon. Use 'I'd rather' to express preference. Maintain correct adverb and clearer structure. Grammar problem type ID:26

× But at my university I always wear smart clothes like uniform.

✓ But at my university I always wear smart clothes like a uniform.

Countable noun 'uniform' requires an article 'a' (or 'the' if referring to a specific uniform). Keep present simple 'always wear'. Grammar problem type ID:22

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable for casual occasions.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable for casual occasions.

Sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. (No errors matching the provided problem types.) Grammar problem type ID:0

× For example, I often choose a cotton T-shirt when I go for a walk or meet my friends in the street.

✓ For example, I often choose a cotton T-shirt when I go for a walk or meet my friends on the street.

Use preposition 'on the street' rather than 'in the street' in many contexts of meeting people outdoors; both can be acceptable regionally, but 'on the street' is more common here. No tense change required. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Yes, absolutely. I spend a lot of time to choose clothes that suits me the best.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I spend a lot of time choosing clothes that suit me best.

Use verb + -ing after 'spend time' (problem type 8). Also subject-verb agreement: 'clothes' (plural) takes 'suit' not 'suits'. Remove unnecessary 'the' in 'the best' when using 'best' with 'suit me best' is idiomatic. Grammar problem type ID:8

× I'm I always stand in front of my future and really have a difficulty to choose the one best race that suits me for a long day.

✓ I always stand in front of my wardrobe and really have difficulty choosing the best outfit that suits me for a long day.

Original sentence has many issues: 'I'm I' is ungrammatical (remove extra 'I'm'). 'Stand in front of my future' is incorrect word choice; likely 'wardrobe' or 'closet'. Use 'have difficulty' not 'have a difficulty'. After 'have difficulty' use the -ing form 'choosing'. 'One best race' is wrong; replace with 'best outfit'. Ensure subject-verb agreement 'suits me' is fine for 'outfit' (singular). This addresses sentence structure (26), incorrect word choice (11/13) and verb forms. Grammar problem type ID:26

× On the weekdays I always wear smart clothes like uniform, black and white because it's our mandatory for our university to wear this kind of clothes.

✓ On weekdays I always wear smart clothes like a uniform in black and white because it is mandatory at my university to wear this kind of clothing.

Remove 'the' before 'weekdays' (not needed). Use 'a uniform' for countable noun. 'Black and white' should describe the uniform (add 'in'). 'It's our mandatory' is incorrect: use 'it is mandatory at my university'. Use 'clothing' as uncountable noun rather than 'clothes' after 'this kind of'. Grammar problem type ID:22

× But in the weekend I don't wear smart clothes, I always wear casual clothes like T-shirts, jeans or dress.

✓ But on the weekend I don't wear smart clothes; I always wear casual clothes like T-shirts, jeans, or dresses.

Use 'on the weekend' or 'at the weekend' depending on variety; 'on the weekend' is acceptable. Use semicolon to join independent clauses or split into two sentences. 'Dress' should be plural 'dresses' to match 'T-shirts, jeans' list. Maintain consistent plural forms. Grammar problem type ID:1

× Oh, that's the good question.

✓ Oh, that's a good question.

Use indefinite article 'a' with the phrase 'good question' rather than 'the'. 'The good question' implies a specific previously mentioned good question which isn't the case. Grammar problem type ID:22

× Actually I like to wear kinda dark clothes like brown, black or something like that because I don't want to wear bright clothes like yellow, red or green because they attract a lot of attention.

✓ Actually, I like to wear kind of dark clothes like brown or black because I don't want to wear bright colors like yellow, red, or green since they attract a lot of attention.

'Kinda' is informal slang; use 'kind of' or 'rather'. 'Colors' is better than 'clothes' when listing colors. Remove redundant 'or something like that'. Use 'since' instead of repeating 'because' for variety. Maintain plural/parallel lists. Grammar problem type ID:13

× Actually I want to avoid this kind of color clothes.

✓ Actually, I want to avoid clothes of this kind of color.

Word order and noun phrase is awkward. Better: 'I want to avoid clothes in these colors' or 'I want to avoid clothes of this color.' Use plural 'colors' if referring to multiple bright colors. This fixes sentence structure and noun phrase order. Grammar problem type ID:26