Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more direct and specific. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Avoid extra words like “well” and keep it to at most 3–4 brief sentences.

例: I prefer casual clothes for everyday wear because they are comfortable and easy to move in. For special occasions I sometimes wear smart outfits like a shirt and blazer to look more professional.

提案: Use a clear topic sentence and correct grammar (subject-verb agreement). Add a concise reason and one specific example linked with a linking word (because/so). Avoid repetition.

例: I prefer casual clothes because they are more comfortable. For example, when I go out I often wear jeans and a hoodie since they let me move freely and suit most activities.

提案: Make your answer grammatical and coherent. Give a direct statement, then a clear reason and one short example. Use linking words and correct verb forms; avoid fragments.

例: Yes, I like wearing cotton T-shirts because they make me feel relaxed and allow me to move easily. For instance, I often wear a cotton T-shirt when I exercise or run errands.

提案: Be concise and relevant. Give a direct yes/no with a short explanation and a specific example. Remove unclear fragments and filler words. Use singular/plural correctly.

例: Yes, I often spend more time choosing clothes for special occasions because I want to look appropriate. For example, I usually pick a nicer dress or shirt before a friend’s birthday party.

提案: Answer directly and stay on topic. State the difference between weekday and weekend styles, give a reason and one example. Avoid repeating words and asking the examiner questions back.

例: Yes, I wear different styles. On weekdays I wear smart or business-casual clothes for work, such as a shirt and trousers, while on weekends I prefer comfortable jeans and T-shirts for relaxing or meeting friends.

提案: Be concise and grammatical. Start with a clear statement of your favorite colors, then explain why you like them with a brief example. Avoid asking rhetorical questions and incomplete sentences.

例: I like wearing blue and black because they are versatile and easy to match with other items. For example, a blue shirt looks good with jeans, while black works well for more formal outfits.

× I like to wear casual and formal well because it's comfortable for me.

✓ I like to wear casual and formal clothes because they are comfortable for me.

The sentence misuses 'well' and omits the noun 'clothes'; also 'it's' refers to a plural idea (casual and formal clothes), so use 'they are'. Use adjectives before the noun and match pronoun number. Suggestion: include the noun 'clothes' and use plural pronoun 'they'.

× I prefer to wear is casual clothes, it's more comfortable for me to wear and especially when I'm going outside.

✓ I prefer to wear casual clothes; they are more comfortable for me, especially when I go out.

The original has an extraneous 'is', a comma splice and awkward phrasing. Remove 'is', make subject-pronoun agreement ('they are'), and use simple present 'I go out' for routines. Use a semicolon or split into shorter sentences to fix run-on.

× Yes, exactly. I like wearing T-shirts like cotton because it's feel that I'm relaxed and easy to move in and. Compatible when I'm doing.

✓ Yes, exactly. I like wearing cotton T-shirts because they make me feel relaxed and easy to move in and are comfortable when I'm active.

Problems: word order ('cotton T-shirts'), wrong verb 'it's feel', missing subject agreement, sentence fragments ('Compatible when I'm doing'). Replace with 'they make me feel' and 'comfortable when I'm active' to form complete, grammatical sentences.

× Yes, probably. I spend a lot of time choosing clothes, especially when I'm going outside and then have a special occasions like birthday. Cancel what?

✓ Yes, probably. I spend a lot of time choosing clothes, especially when I'm going out or have a special occasion like a birthday.

Use 'going out' rather than 'going outside' in this context. 'Have a special occasions' mixes singular/plural and lacks articles: use 'a special occasion' and 'a birthday'. Remove extraneous 'Cancel what?'.

× I want different styles of clothes when in weekdays and weekends. When it comes to weekdays I wear the the the work, work, work, work, work, work, work, work work hours and the weekends is I won't. Are you home now?

✓ I wear different styles on weekdays and weekends. On weekdays I wear work clothes for work hours, and on weekends I usually stay at home or dress more casually.

Original contains repetition, unclear fragments and a question unrelated to topic. Use clear contrast: 'on weekdays... on weekends'. Replace 'I want different styles' with 'I wear different styles' and clarify activities. Remove irrelevant 'Are you home now?'.

× Nice question, the color of clothes do I like? Is the color blue, pink, blacks? It's going to cute when I'm wearing that color of.

✓ That's a nice question. The colors I like are blue, pink and black. They look cute when I wear them.

Fix word order and question form: change to a statement. Use plural 'colors' and correct 'black' not 'blacks' for color names. 'It's going to cute' is ungrammatical; use 'They look cute when I wear them.' Ensure pronoun agreement with plural 'colors'.