Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be careful with grammar (use correct verb forms and articles) and avoid repetition. Keep answers concise (max 5 sentences) and add one clear supporting detail using a linking word. Pronunciation of brand/type words should be clear (e.g., "T-shirt").

例: I prefer well-fitting, comfortable clothes because they make me feel confident and relaxed. For example, when I go out with friends I usually wear casual jeans and a T-shirt, as they are easy to move in and suit the relaxed atmosphere.

提案: Fix errors in subject-verb agreement and article usage; avoid repeating words ("I personally I"). Use a linking word to connect reason and example. Provide one specific context to support your preference.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they help me relax and suit my daily routine. For example, at weekends I usually wear jeans and a T-shirt so I can move freely when I meet friends or run errands.

提案: Reduce hesitations and filler words (umm, uh). Use correct adjectives ("relaxing" not "relaxful") and plural forms. Give one clear, coherent reason with a linking word.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and versatile. For example, they work well for casual outings or layered under a jacket for a smarter look.

提案: Improve sentence flow by removing fillers and using correct prepositions/articles (e.g., "on shopping", "sites like Taobao"). Use a linking word to connect cause and effect and be specific about time saved.

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes. Since online shopping sites like Taobao became popular, I can quickly compare styles and prices and usually decide within a few minutes.

提案: Correct pronoun/use ("I" not "our"); fix vocabulary errors ("professional parents" unclear, likely "appearance" or "presentation"); use correct nouns ("jeans" not "gyms"); keep to two sentences max, with a linking word to contrast weekday and weekend styles.

例: Yes. On weekdays I wear more professional clothes, such as shirts and trousers, because my job requires a smart appearance; on weekends I prefer casual clothes like jeans and T-shirts for comfort and meeting friends.

提案: Avoid repeating words ("complexion complexion"). Use concise language and one linking word if adding an effect. You could add a brief example of an item in that color.

例: I like bright colors, especially green, because it feels fresh and energetic. For example, a green shirt suits my complexion and often makes me feel more confident.

× For example when I out with my friends I usually wear casual jeans and AT shirts since they are they are easy to move in and suit relaxed atmosphere.

✓ For example, when I am out with my friends I usually wear casual jeans and T-shirts since they are easy to move in and suit a relaxed atmosphere.

Missing verb 'am' after 'I' (therefore use present continuous 'I am out') and incorrect preposition/phrase 'out with' requires verb 'be' to be grammatical in this context; 'AT shirts' seems incorrect brand/abbreviation so changed to 'T-shirts'; duplicated 'they are' removed; 'suit relaxed atmosphere' needs indefinite article 'a' before 'relaxed atmosphere'. Suggestion: include appropriate auxiliary verbs (am/is/are) and articles, and correct common terms like 'T-shirts'.

× I personally I prefer wear comfortable casual clothes because they make me feel relaxed and they are more practical for my daily activities.

✓ I personally prefer to wear comfortable casual clothes because they make me feel relaxed and are more practical for my daily activities.

Redundant 'I' and missing 'to' after 'prefer' (verb pattern: prefer to do something) cause grammatical error. Also 'they are' can be shortened to 'are'. Suggestion: remove repeated pronoun and use correct verb pattern 'prefer to + verb'.

× For example, at weekends I usually choose jeans and AT shirt because allow me to move freely and feel comfortable.

✓ For example, on weekends I usually choose jeans and a T-shirt because they allow me to move freely and feel comfortable.

Use 'on weekends' rather than 'at weekends' (both can be correct regionally, but 'on weekends' is standard in many varieties); missing article 'a' before 'T-shirt'; missing subject 'they' before 'allow'. Also 'AT shirt' corrected to 'T-shirt'. Suggestion: include the correct article and subject and use 'on weekends' for consistency.

× I like wearing T-shirts and because, umm, it's very, uh, relaxful and uh, umm, flexible in different kind of, uh, situation.

✓ I like wearing T-shirts because they are very comfortable and versatile in different kinds of situations.

'Relaxful' is nonstandard; use 'comfortable'. 'Flexible' is better as 'versatile' for clothing. 'it's' must agree with plural 'T-shirts' so use 'they are'. 'different kind of situation' needs plural 'kinds' and 'situations'. Suggestion: match subject number and use standard adjectives.

× And it's my daily, uh, suit, Yeah.

✓ And it's my everyday outfit.

'Daily suit' is incorrect collocation; 'everyday outfit' is natural. Remove filler words and incorrect punctuation. Suggestion: use common collocations for clothing (everyday outfit).

× Umm, already I don't spend too much time on choosing clothes umm Since online shopping became popular, especially online site like Taobao, I can quickly compare styles and price and usually decide to within a few minutes.

✓ I don't spend much time choosing clothes. Since online shopping became popular, especially sites like Taobao, I can quickly compare styles and prices and usually decide within a few minutes.

Awkward adverb placement 'already' removed; 'spend time on choosing' should be 'spend time choosing'; run-on sentence split into two. Use plural 'sites' and 'prices'. 'decide to within' incorrect — remove 'to'. Suggestion: simplify sentences, use correct collocations and plurals.

× Yes, our weekdays are usually wear for more work attire such as shirt and trousers because my job requires a professional parents.

✓ Yes, on weekdays I usually wear more formal work attire such as shirts and trousers because my job requires a professional appearance.

'our weekdays are usually wear' is ungrammatical — subject and verb must agree; change to 'I usually wear'. 'work attire' should be 'formal work attire' or 'more formal work attire'. 'shirt' pluralized to 'shirts'; 'professional parents' is nonsensical — likely intended 'professional appearance'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb alignment and correct word choice for meaning.

× On weekends, I prefer casual clothes like gyms and AT shirt because they are more comfortable for relax for relaxing and meeting friends.

✓ On weekends, I prefer casual clothes like jeans and a T-shirt because they are more comfortable for relaxing and meeting friends.

'gyms' is a misspelling of 'jeans'; 'AT shirt' corrected to 'T-shirt' with article 'a'; 'for relax for relaxing' redundant — use 'for relaxing'. Suggestion: check spelling and remove duplicate words.

× I like bright colors, especially green, because the color green feels fresh and vigorous to me.

✓ I like bright colors, especially green, because green feels fresh and energetic to me.

Repeat of 'the color green' is redundant; 'vigorous' is less natural for feelings—'energetic' fits better. Suggestion: avoid redundancy and choose collocations that match meaning.

× It suits my complexion complexion and often makes me feel more energetic and confident when I wear it.

✓ It suits my complexion and often makes me feel more energetic and confident when I wear it.

Duplicate word 'complexion' removed. Suggestion: proofread to remove repetitions.