Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence about what you like, then give a concise reason. Use correct pronouns and avoid vague references (e.g. "their clothes"). Keep to 1–3 sentences and use linking words if adding details.

例: I prefer wearing woolen clothes because they keep me warm and comfortable. For example, in cold weather I choose wool sweaters since they retain heat better than cotton.

提案: Answer directly: state your preference in a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (because/so). Correct grammar: subject-verb agreement and natural expressions ("I feel confident" not "in confidence in that clothes").

例: I prefer comfortable casual clothes because they help me feel relaxed and confident. For instance, I usually wear jeans and a soft sweater for meetings where I want to be at ease.

提案: Keep it natural and avoid repetition. Begin with a direct yes/no and then add a brief specific example (when or why you wear them). Use linking words like "because" or "for" to connect ideas and correct small errors ("on a daily basis", "to the gym").

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. I wear them on a daily basis and especially when I go to the gym because they are comfortable and easy to move in.

提案: Make your answer simpler and organize reasons logically. Start with a clear topic sentence (No, I don't), then explain briefly why using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid confusing details and irrelevant information.

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because my relative owns a clothing shop and usually recommends items to me. So I can buy what I need quickly without searching around.

提案: Respond directly and structure your reply: state whether you change styles, then give a clear contrasting detail using linking words (but/however). Avoid repetition and ensure tense/word choice are correct.

例: I usually wear the same casual style on weekdays, but on weekends I dress more stylishly for social events. For example, I wear smart shirts and nicer shoes when I go out with friends on Saturday.

提案: Be specific and explain your reason clearly. Start with a topic sentence naming the colours, then provide a short explanation of why they suit you, using natural phrasing ("because they suit my skin tone").

例: I prefer dark colours, such as navy and charcoal, because they suit my skin tone and look smart. For instance, navy shirts make my complexion appear clearer and are easy to match with other clothes.

× I would like to wear woolen clothes because I feel uncomfortable in their clothes.

✓ I would like to wear woolen clothes because I feel uncomfortable in my clothes.

The speaker used 'their' to refer to their own clothes; the correct possessive pronoun for the speaker is 'my'. Use 'my' when referring to something that belongs to the speaker. Suggestion: Replace 'their' with 'my' to match first-person possession.

× Well, I prefer some casual and more prefer comfortable clothes because I will feel not nervous and in confidence in that clothes.

✓ Well, I prefer casual, comfortable clothes because I will not feel nervous and will feel confident in those clothes.

Problems: redundant phrases ('prefer some casual and more prefer'), incorrect negation order ('will feel not nervous'), incorrect preposition and pronoun ('in confidence in that clothes'). Corrections: use a single clear verb 'prefer' with adjectives in correct order, place 'not' before the verb 'feel', use 'feel confident' (adjective) and plural demonstrative 'those clothes' for plural noun. Suggestion: Simplify the sentence to 'I prefer casual, comfortable clothes because I will not feel nervous and will feel confident in those clothes.'.

× Yes I do like wearing T-shirt. I wear T-shirt on daily basis also and gym and gym and workout also.

✓ Yes, I do like wearing T-shirts. I wear T-shirts on a daily basis and when I go to the gym or work out.

Problems: article/number agreement with countable noun ('T-shirt' should be plural when speaking generally), missing comma after 'Yes', missing article in 'on a daily basis', repetition 'gym and gym', and awkward coordination 'and workout also'. Corrections: pluralize 'T-shirts', add 'a' in 'a daily basis', and use 'when I go to the gym or work out' for clarity. Suggestion: Say 'I wear T-shirts on a daily basis and when I go to the gym or work out.'.

× No, I do not spend much of time on on slacking clothes because I know why my relative shop were there of clothes only because they suggest me clothes and I get cloth from there in a short of time.

✓ No, I do not spend much time choosing clothes because my relative owns a clothing shop, so they recommend clothes to me and I can get them quickly.

Multiple errors: 'much of time' should be 'much time'; repeated 'on on'; 'slacking clothes' is unclear—likely meant 'choosing clothes'; incorrect clause 'my relative shop were there of clothes only' should be 'my relative owns a clothing shop'; 'they suggest me clothes' should be 'they recommend clothes to me' (wrong word order and pronoun use); 'get cloth' should be 'get them' or 'get clothes'; 'in a short of time' should be 'quickly' or 'in a short time'. Corrections simplify and fix subject-verb agreement and word choices. Suggestion: Use clear verbs like 'choose' and correct possessive/construction: 'my relative owns a clothing shop' and 'they recommend clothes to me'.

× Well, not on weekdays. On weekends also weekend or weekends I will wear stylish clothes.

✓ Well, not on weekdays. On weekends I wear stylish clothes.

Tense and redundancy issues: mixing future 'I will wear' with general habit; repeating 'weekend or weekends'. When talking about habitual actions use present simple 'I wear'. Also use plural 'weekends' or singular 'the weekend' consistently. Suggestion: Use present simple for habits: 'On weekends I wear stylish clothes.'.

× I like dark colors because it refers to my skin tone also.

✓ I like dark colors because they suit my skin tone.

Problems: pronoun agreement ('it' does not agree with plural 'colors'), incorrect verb 'refers to'—colors do not 'refer' to skin tone; use 'suit' to express compatibility. Also 'also' is unnecessary. Suggestion: Use 'they suit my skin tone' for clarity and correct agreement.