Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be clearer and more natural: start with a topic sentence, correct vocabulary, avoid repetition, and add one specific detail. Use linking word to connect reason.

例: I usually wear simple, practical clothes such as jeans, trousers and plain blouses. For example, I often choose a pair of dark jeans and a cotton blouse because they are comfortable and easy to mix and match. Therefore, I find getting dressed in the morning quick and stress-free.

提案: Combine sentences into one coherent answer and add a brief supporting detail using a linking word. Mention when or where you wear smart clothes to be specific.

例: I prefer to wear smart clothes because I want to look elegant in public; for instance, I usually wear a blazer and tailored trousers to work and formal events to make a good impression.

提案: Fix contradictions and unclear phrases, reduce redundancy, and provide a specific example or reason. Use linking words and correct grammar.

例: Yes, I love wearing plain T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to layer. For example, a cotton crew-neck T-shirt is my go-to at weekends since it pairs well with jeans and trainers.

提案: Clarify meaning and correct grammar. Give a concise topic sentence, then explain briefly how or why you spend time choosing clothes with a specific criterion and an example.

例: I do spend quite a lot of time choosing clothes because I look for items that are comfortable, durable and affordable. For example, I check fabric quality and read reviews online before buying a jacket.

提案: Avoid repeating 'weekdays' and keep structure clear: state the contrast, then give a specific detail about each. Use a linking word to show contrast.

例: Yes, I wear different styles: on weekdays I dress smartly in shirts and blazers to look professional, whereas at weekends I prefer simple, comfortable outfits like T-shirts and jeans for relaxing.

提案: Clarify the term 'bright nude' and avoid awkward phrasing. State the preferred colours clearly and give a reason with a brief example.

例: I prefer neutral, light colours such as beige, cream and pale grey because they look elegant and versatile; for example, a cream sweater can be dressed up with trousers or down with jeans.

× I usually prefer simple outfits such as trousers, blouses, jeans, simple lacrosse.

✓ I usually prefer simple outfits such as trousers, blouses, jeans, and simple lacrosse shirts.

The sentence lists clothing items and then uses 'simple lacrosse' which is unclear and missing a noun; treat this as a noun/word-choice error related to plurality and noun presence. Add the noun 'shirts' and include 'and' before the final item for correct list structure. Also ensure items are parallel (all plural nouns). Suggestion: use consistent noun forms and add conjunctions in lists. Grammar problem type ID:1

× I prefer this because it's easy to wear and it's really available in.

✓ I prefer this because it's easy to wear and it's readily available.

The phrase 'available in' is incomplete and the adverb 'really' is awkward here; use 'readily available' as the correct collocation and remove the trailing preposition. This fixes sentence completion and idiomatic usage. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Because I want to look elegant in public.

✓ I prefer to wear smart clothes because I want to look elegant in public.

The original sentence is a sentence fragment beginning with 'Because'. Combine it with the previous sentence or make it independent by removing 'Because'. Here we attach it to the main clause to form a complete sentence. Ensure no sentence fragments. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I love wearing T-shirts with simple designs. I prefer T-shirts because it is easy to wear and it is readily available in the market.

✓ I love wearing T-shirts with simple designs. I prefer T-shirts because they are easy to wear and readily available in the market.

T-shirts is plural, so the pronoun and verb must agree: use 'they are' rather than 'it is'. Also 'readily available in the market' should drop the redundant 'in' before 'the market' or keep 'in the market'; here 'readily available in the market' is acceptable, but ensure pronoun-verb agreement. Grammar problem type ID:2

× It is uncomfortable and gives me.

✓ They are comfortable and suit me well.

The original sentence is unclear and incomplete ('gives me' needs an object). Likely the student intended the opposite of 'uncomfortable'. Correct to a clear, complete sentence that matches the context: plural subject 'T-shirts' requires plural verb 'are'. Provide an object phrase 'suit me well' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I usually spend a lot of time in choosing collect because I wrote comfortable, durable, and less pricey clothes.

✓ I usually spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I want comfortable, durable, and less pricey items.

Remove unnecessary preposition 'in' before 'choosing'. 'Collect' is the wrong word; use 'clothes' or 'items'. 'I wrote' is incorrect; likely 'I want' is intended. Fix verb choice and word order for a coherent sentence. Grammar problem type ID:11

× I wear smart clothes during weekdays because I want to look professional and confident in public, and on weekdays I prefer simple, comfortable casual outfits such as T-shirts and jeans.

✓ I wear smart clothes during weekdays because I want to look professional and confident in public, and on weekends I prefer simple, comfortable casual outfits such as T-shirts and jeans.

The sentence incorrectly repeats 'on weekdays' when contrast is intended; change the second occurrence to 'on weekends'. This fixes tense/temporal reference and logical contrast. Ensure parallel structure and correct time expressions. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I prefer bright nude colours because I want to appear smart and elegant in public without. Showing much colours.

✓ I prefer bright neutral colours because I want to appear smart and elegant in public without showing too many colours.

'Nude' may be intended as 'neutral' and 'without. Showing much colours.' is a broken fragment. Combine into one sentence and use 'showing too many colours' (correct quantifier and word order). Use 'neutral' for clearer meaning and correct 'much' to 'too many' with countable 'colours'. Grammar problem type ID:13