Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Combine sentences to avoid fragments and give a brief reason with a linking word. Use more natural phrasing (e.g. “pairs of trousers” → “trousers”). Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes such as T-shirts and trousers because they allow me to move easily and feel relaxed throughout the day.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence and one clear reason with coherent linking; avoid unclear phrases like “nature of walk” and finish the sentence. Mention context (working from home) succinctly.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes because I work from home most of the time, so I value comfort and practicality.

提案: Answer directly with a complete sentence and a concise, specific reason. Remove unclear fragment “Would every office.” Use linking word to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and versatile, though I avoid them for formal office meetings.

提案: Keep the answer natural and concise: one topic sentence plus one specific reason or example. Avoid repetition and vague statements like “more than I can imagine.”

例: Yes, I do spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I like to coordinate colors and styles carefully—for example, I sometimes try on several outfits before leaving the house.

提案: Provide a clear comparison between weekday and weekend clothing with a coherent example. Avoid confusing details like “many on Wednesday.” Use a linking word to show contrast.

例: Yes, I wear different styles: on weekdays I usually wear smart casual clothes for work, while at weekends I prefer relaxed casual outfits like jeans and hoodies.

提案: Give a direct answer and one concise reason or example. Combine fragments into one or two natural sentences and avoid repetition.

例: My favourite colour is purple, so I often choose purple clothes because I find the shade stylish and it suits my skin tone.

× I prefer comfortable and casual clothes such as T-shirts and pairs of trousers. Because they are really easy to move.

✓ I prefer comfortable, casual clothes such as T-shirts and trousers because they make it easy to move.

The original uses two short sentences with a fragment ('Because they are really easy to move.'). Combine into one complete sentence and change 'pairs of trousers' to 'trousers' (adjectival use). Use 'make it easy to move' for natural adverbial meaning rather than 'are really easy to move.' Suggestion: connect clauses and use natural collocations.

× I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because of my nature of walk. Since I am working from home, I don't need always to.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes because of the way I walk. Since I work from home, I don't always need to.

'Nature of walk' is incorrect phrase; use 'the way I walk.' 'I am working from home' can be acceptable but simple present 'I work from home' fits habitual meaning. 'I don't need always to' has incorrect adverb placement; place 'always' before the verb: 'I don't always need to.' Suggestion: use natural noun phrases and correct adverb placement.

× I'll always like wearing T-shirts because obviously they are very comfortable and they can be worn. Would every office.

✓ I always like wearing T-shirts because they are very comfortable and can be worn at any office.

'I'll always like' is future tense and inappropriate for a general preference; use simple present 'I always like.' Fragment 'Would every office.' is incorrect; replace with 'can be worn at any office.' Also remove redundant 'obviously.' Suggestion: use simple present for habits and combine fragments into one coherent sentence.

× Yes, definitely. I'll always spend a lot of time choosing clothes, more than I can imagine. Actually I don't have any idea why I need to take more time to choose.

✓ Yes, definitely. I always spend a lot of time choosing clothes, more than I can imagine. Actually, I don't know why I need to take so much time to choose.

'I'll always spend' uses future; use simple present 'I always spend' for habitual action. 'I don't have any idea' is wordy; 'I don't know' is natural. 'Take more time' -> 'take so much time' is clearer. Suggestion: use present tense for routines and tighten expressions.

× Yes I do. I always wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends, for instance many on Wednesday. I wear casual clothes.

✓ Yes, I do. I wear different styles on weekdays and weekends; for instance, on Wednesdays I wear casual clothes.

'I always wear different styles of clothes' is fine but streamline to 'I wear different styles.' 'for instance many on Wednesday' is unclear — specify 'on Wednesdays.' Ensure plural 'Wednesdays' for habitual action. Combine into one sentence for clarity. Suggestion: use plural day names for habitual statements and clear clause order.

× My favorite color is always Violet, so of course I choose. Purple colours for clothing. Most of the time.

✓ My favorite color is violet, so I usually choose purple clothes most of the time.

'Favorite color is always Violet' misuses 'always' with a superlative preference; use simple 'is violet.' Fragments 'so of course I choose. Purple colours for clothing. Most of the time.' should be combined: 'so I usually choose purple clothes most of the time.' Use 'purple' (adjective) and 'clothes' (plural noun). Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments and place adverbs ('usually', 'most of the time') correctly.