Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Use linking words for coherence and avoid redundancy. Focus on correct verb forms and word order (e.g., "clothes that make me feel comfortable"), and replace vague phrases like "act activities to flexible" with "move easily" or "do activities comfortably."

例: I prefer clothes that make me feel comfortable. For example, I like loose trousers and soft T-shirts because they allow me to move easily when I study or exercise.

提案: Answer directly with a clear preference sentence, then give a specific reason and an example. Correct grammar: use "prefer to wear" and "because it is more convenient". Use cohesive devices like "for example" and avoid repetition. Keep to 2–3 sentences total.

例: I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes because they are more convenient for my daily activities. For example, when I go to sports with friends at school, I wear a tracksuit so I can move freely.

提案: First, answer the yes/no question clearly: "Yes, I do." Then explain briefly why, with specific contexts. Avoid unrelated words like "teachers" and correct collocations: "T-shirts make me feel comfortable" and "go with my jeans." Keep sentences concise and coherent.

例: Yes, I do. T-shirts are comfortable and easy to wear; for example, I often pair a plain T-shirt with jeans when I go to school or hang out with friends.

提案: Begin with a clear topic sentence stating frequency, then give a contrasting detail for special occasions using linking words like "but" or "however." Use correct verb tenses and collocations: "I don't spend much time choosing clothes" and "for special occasions I spend more time on my outfit."

例: I don't spend much time choosing clothes in my daily life because I usually prefer simple, casual outfits. However, for special occasions like parties or interviews, I spend more time picking a suitable outfit.

提案: Answer directly and clarify whether styles differ, then give a reason. Use correct prepositions and vocabulary: "on weekdays and at weekends" and "comfortable clothes." Avoid unclear phrases like "comfortable office to house me action." Keep to two sentences with a linking word like "because."

例: Honestly, I don't wear very different styles on weekdays and weekends because I prefer comfortable clothes all the time. For example, I usually wear jeans and a T-shirt whether I'm studying at school or relaxing at home.

提案: State your favorite colour clearly, then explain why with specific reasons. Use correct nouns and phrases: e.g., "I prefer black, especially for jackets or jeans, because it matches most outfits." Avoid unclear words like "dessert" and improve grammar for clarity.

例: I prefer black, especially for jackets and jeans, because it matches most other clothes and is easy to keep clean.

× I often choose clothes where makes me feel comfortable and I can act activities to flexible.

✓ I often choose clothes that make me feel comfortable and allow me to move flexibly.

The original has incorrect relative clause and word order. 'where makes me' is wrong; use 'that make me' for clothes (plural) so verb should be 'make' (subject-verb agreement). 'I can act activities to flexible' is ungrammatical; express ability and manner as 'allow me to move flexibly' or 'let me move easily'. Use plural agreement and proper verb collocation.

× Sure, I prefer were comfortable and casual clothes because it helps me more convenience in my activities.

✓ Sure, I prefer wearing comfortable and casual clothes because they make my activities more convenient.

'were' is incorrect form; use 'wearing' after 'prefer' for the gerund. 'It helps me more convenience' is ungrammatical: use 'they make my activities more convenient' to match plural 'clothes' and correct collocation ('make...convenient'). Subject-verb agreement requires 'they make'.

× For example, I often go to sport with my friend in school, so I I would choose a casual clothes to more action.

✓ For example, I often go to sports with my friends at school, so I would choose casual clothes that are better for activity.

Use plural 'sports' and 'friends' if more than one; 'in school' is more natural as 'at school'. 'a casual clothes' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove 'a' and use 'casual clothes'. 'to more action' is incorrect; express purpose as 'that are better for activity' or 'for doing activities'.

× Surely teachers also make me feel convenient and comfortable in my daily life and for example, I can wait to go to school or in at home or go anywhere I want and it helps me fit with with my jeans.

✓ I also feel comfortable in my daily life; for example, I can wait to go to school, stay at home, or go anywhere I want, and my T-shirt fits well with my jeans.

The sentence is confused: 'teachers also make me feel convenient' is wrong; likely meant 'I also feel comfortable'. 'I can wait to go to school' unclear—keep as 'wait to go to school' if intended, or 'go to school'. Fix prepositions ('at home'). 'helps me fit with with my jeans' should be 'my T-shirt fits well with my jeans'—correct noun and remove duplicate 'with'. Use clearer subject and verbs.

× In daily life I'm not spending a lot of time to choosing clothes because I will priority the casual clothes but in the special day I will spend more time to choose my outfit.

✓ In daily life I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I prioritize casual clothes, but on special days I spend more time choosing my outfit.

Use simple present 'don't spend' for habitual action rather than 'I'm not spending'. Remove 'to' before 'choosing'. 'I will priority' is incorrect word form—use verb 'prioritize'. Use plural 'days' and 'on special days' for correct preposition. Keep consistent present tense for habits.

× To be honest, I'm not really toward different styles even if the weekdays or weekends because it's a casual days and I will choose the comfortable office to house me action easily.

✓ To be honest, I don't really change styles between weekdays and weekends because they are casual days, and I choose comfortable clothes that let me move easily.

'I'm not really toward different styles' is incorrect—use 'I don't really change styles'. 'even if the weekdays or weekends' → 'between weekdays and weekends'. 'it's a casual days' must match number: 'they are casual days'. 'comfortable office to house me action' is meaningless; probably 'comfortable clothes that let me move easily' conveys intended meaning.

× From my perspective, I will priority the black dessert or jeans because it's a easy colour to cannot fit anywhere anyone the other outfits.

✓ From my perspective, I prioritize black shirts or jeans because black is an easy color that matches other outfits.

'priority' is incorrect form—use 'prioritize'. 'black dessert' is wrong word; likely 'black shirts' or 'dresses'—choose 'shirts' here. 'it's a easy colour' → 'black is an easy color' and use 'an' before vowel sound. 'to cannot fit anywhere anyone the other outfits' is garbled; intended meaning is 'matches other outfits' so use 'matches other outfits'.