Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a clear topic sentence and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid contractions and minor grammar errors. Mention occasions or materials to sound more natural and informative.

例: I prefer wearing T-shirts and jeans at home because they are comfortable and easy to move in. For example, I often choose a cotton T-shirt and stretchable jeans when I relax or do chores around the house.

提案: Start with a direct answer, then give a reason and a specific example. Pay attention to article use and word choice; avoid repeating the same words. Use linking words like "however" or "when" to connect ideas.

例: It depends on the occasion: I usually wear comfortable clothes for daily activities, but I dress smartly for events. For instance, I wear T-shirts and jeans when I go shopping, however I choose a shirt and chinos for a formal dinner.

提案: Answer directly in present tense and correct grammar. Use linking words to list reasons and be more concise. Replace vague phrases with concrete descriptions of comfort.

例: Yes, I do. I usually wear T-shirts with jeans at home because they are breathable and comfortable, so I can relax and move freely.

提案: Combine short fragments into full sentences and clarify the point about footwear. Use linking words like "because" and "but" correctly to make the response coherent.

例: Not really, because I like to keep my wardrobe simple and practical, so I usually choose a T-shirt with shorts or jeans. However, I spend more time choosing shoes because they need to match the outfit and be comfortable.

提案: Give a clear contrast between weekdays and weekends, avoid repeating the same phrase, and correct vocabulary mistakes. Provide specific examples of outfits for each period and use linking words like "while" or "whereas."

例: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear casual and practical clothes such as T-shirts and jeans for work or classes, whereas at the weekend I prefer slightly dressier outfits like a top with a skirt or a casual dress for meeting friends.

提案: Answer directly, correct grammar, and explain specifically why you prefer that color. Use linking words to add a brief reason or example.

例: I prefer black because it complements my skin tone and looks neat. For example, I often wear a black shirt when I want a simple, fresh look for going out.

× I like wearing T-shirts, jeans at home 'cause it's very comfortable.

✓ I like wearing T-shirts and jeans at home because they are very comfortable.

Original uses a comma to list items and contractions informally; also 'jeans' is plural and should be joined with 'and'. 'It's' refers to singular but comfort refers to clothes (plural), so use 'they are'. Use 'because' for formal written grammar.

× It depends on a occasion.

✓ It depends on an occasion.

The article 'a' before a word starting with a vowel sound 'occasion' is incorrect; use 'an'. This is an article/quantifier error; choose 'an' for words beginning with vowel sounds.

× If I like wearing comfortable clothes, I wear T-shirts and jeans and casual clothes.

✓ If I like wearing comfortable clothes, I wear T-shirts, jeans, and other casual clothes.

Original repeats 'and casual clothes' redundantly. Also list items should be separated by commas; 'other casual clothes' clarifies category. This fixes plural/listing and improves clarity.

× I like to wear some vessels shorts and T-shirts.

✓ I like to wear loose shorts and T-shirts.

'Vessels' is incorrect word choice; likely meant 'loose' or 'casual'. Replace with appropriate adjective 'loose' to modify 'shorts'. Ensure adjective precedes noun.

× I like wearing T-shirts with jeans when I was at home.

✓ I like wearing T-shirts with jeans when I am at home.

The subordinate clause refers to a habitual present situation, so use present tense 'am' not past 'was'. Maintain consistent present tense for habits.

× It feels like comfortable, I can breathe and it makes me feel better.

✓ It feels comfortable, I can breathe, and it makes me feel better.

Remove 'like' which is unnecessary before adjective; use commas to separate clauses and keep 'comfortable' as adjective. This corrects adverb/adjective misuse and punctuation.

× Not really. I prefer to keep clothing choices simple and practical. To save time.

✓ Not really. I prefer to keep my clothing choices simple and practical to save time.

Fragment 'To save time.' should be connected to previous sentence; combine to form a complete sentence expressing reason. This fixes sentence structure.

× I usually pick T-shirts and shorts or jeans. In terms of feet, I will take more care but.

✓ I usually pick T-shirts and shorts or jeans. I pay more attention to footwear, though.

'In terms of feet' is awkward; use 'footwear' and rephrase 'I will take more care but' to 'I pay more attention... though' for correctness and natural pronoun/reference. Avoid dangling 'but'.

× In weekends I prefer to wear T-shirts, simple clothing and in weekends I prefer to wear dresses, like tops, rituals.

✓ On weekends I prefer to wear T-shirts and simple clothing, and on weekends I also prefer to wear dresses, like tops and skirts.

Use 'on weekends' not 'in weekends'. Also 'rituals' is wrong word; likely 'skirts'. Parallel structure needs 'and' and commas. Fix articles and word choice.

× I like black colors because it complements my skin color and it I look so fresh.

✓ I like black because it complements my skin tone and makes me look fresh.

Use singular 'black' or 'black clothes' rather than 'black colors'. 'It complements my skin color' should be 'it complements my skin tone' and remove extra 'it'. Use 'makes me look' for correct verb phrase. Fix adjective/adverb usage and redundancy.