Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct and natural: give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Avoid fillers and repetition. Use linking words if adding details.

例: I usually wear casual clothes, especially T-shirts, because I prefer a simple, comfortable style. For example, I often choose plain or minimal patterned T-shirts that are easy to match with jeans.

提案: Start with a clear main idea, then add brief specific examples and a linking word. Watch grammar: use correct verb forms and articles.

例: It depends on the occasion and the weather. Usually I wear comfortable casual clothes for daily activities, but if I attend a formal event I choose smart clothes such as a shirt and blazer.

提案: State your opinion clearly, then give concise reasons with correct sentence structure. Avoid repeating phrases and check singular/plural and word order.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and suitable for our hot climate. For instance, lightweight cotton T-shirts keep me cool during the long, hot summers.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence, then contrast situations using linking words (however, but, or). Reduce fillers and use correct tense and phrasing.

例: I don't usually spend much time choosing clothes; however, I take more time when I prepare for a formal event or a dinner. In those cases I plan my outfit carefully to look appropriate.

提案: Answer directly, explain reasons briefly and coherently, and fix grammar (use correct pronouns and verbs). Use linking words to connect reason to statement.

例: At the moment I wear similar clothes on weekdays and weekends because I am not working. Since I stay at home most days, my style is casual and unchanged.

提案: Provide a clear answer then add a short reason or example to enrich your response. Use smoother phrasing and avoid redundancy.

例: I mostly wear black T-shirts because they are versatile and easy to match with other clothes. For example, a black T-shirt goes well with both jeans and shorts.

× I like T-shirt.

✓ I like T-shirts.

The noun 'T-shirt' is countable and the student speaks generally about a type of clothing, so it should be plural 'T-shirts' (or use 'a T-shirt' for a single item). Use plural for general preferences. Grammar problem type's ID: 22

× A simple, a simple fashion.

✓ I prefer simple fashion.

The original is a fragmented, repetitive phrase. Combine into a clear sentence 'I prefer simple fashion' to express preference. Ensure subject and verb present. Grammar problem type's ID: 26},{