Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a clear, direct topic sentence and avoid repetition. Use accurate clothing vocabulary and limit to maximum 3–4 short sentences. Include one specific reason or example to support your preference.

例: I prefer casual clothes like jeans and T-shirts because they are comfortable. For example, I usually wear a plain cotton T-shirt and slim-fit jeans when I go out with friends. I also like lightweight jackets when it is cooler.

提案: Start with a clear statement answering the question, then briefly explain when you choose smart clothes. Use linking words (however, when) to make it coherent and avoid grammatical errors.

例: I usually prefer comfortable, casual clothes. However, when I go to work meetings or formal events, I wear smart clothes like a shirt and trousers to look professional.

提案: Avoid irrelevant or misused words. Answer directly and give a specific reason why you like T-shirts, using clear vocabulary (comfortable, breathable, versatile). Keep it brief and natural.

例: Yes, I really like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and breathable. I often choose cotton T-shirts for daily wear since they keep me cool and are easy to wash.

提案: Answer directly and avoid fillers. Explain briefly how you decide quickly and give one specific habit (e.g., selecting by favourite colours or comfort). Use clearer vocabulary (decide, prefer, fitted).

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I usually decide quickly. I tend to pick my favourite T-shirts and jeans based on comfort, and occasionally I choose a fitted shirt for special occasions.

提案: Give a direct contrast between weekdays and weekends using linking words (for example, on weekdays... but on weekends...). Name the traditional garment correctly and give a short reason why you wear it.

例: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear T-shirts and jeans because they are practical for work or study. On weekends I often wear a traditional kurta because it feels comfortable and suits family gatherings.

提案: Answer clearly with preference and give a brief reason related to appearance or matching. Avoid vague phrases and repeated hesitations. Use correct phrasing for colours and describe why they suit you.

例: I prefer black and white because they are easy to match and look smart. For example, a white shirt with black trousers is my go-to outfit because it suits my style and is simple to combine.

× I love especially I love to wear curtainsural and jeans, pants and T-shirt that is comfortable to wear.

✓ I especially love to wear kurta, jeans, pants, and T-shirts that are comfortable to wear.

The original sentence has wrong word choice ('curtainsural') and repeated phrase 'I love especially I love'. This is a sentence structure and word choice issue; 'kurta' likely intended, and list items need commas. Also subject-verb agreement: plural noun 'T-shirts' requires plural verb 'are' not 'is'. Improve by removing repetition, using correct item names, and matching plural verbs. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Normally I love casual wear but sometimes I work like smart clothes also.

✓ Normally I prefer casual wear, but sometimes I dress in smart clothes for work.

The phrase 'I work like smart clothes' is ungrammatical. Use 'dress in smart clothes' to express wearing smart clothes for work. Also 'prefer' is a better verb than 'love' for habit. Reorder with a comma before 'but' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes, I love wedding dessert. Dessert is comfortable with our body. That's why I very, very love.

✓ Yes, I love wearing T-shirts. T-shirts are comfortable on our bodies. That's why I love them very much.

'wedding dessert' and 'Dessert' are incorrect word choices for 'wearing T-shirts'. 'Comfortable with our body' should be 'comfortable on our bodies'. 'That's why I very, very love' requires 'I love them very much'. Correct pronoun 'them' refers to T-shirts and add adverb placement 'very much'. Grammar problem type ID:13

× No, I could not uh, spend a lot of time to go, uh, choosing clothes because I already said in my mind, I always love oversight T-shirts. Sometimes uh, like uh, fitted tea also.

✓ No, I cannot spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I already decide in my mind. I always prefer simple T-shirts. Sometimes I also like fitted tees.

Use present ability 'cannot' instead of 'could not' for habitual present. Remove unnecessary 'to go' before 'choosing' and use gerund 'choosing'. 'Already said in my mind' is incorrect; use 'already decide in my mind' (better: 'I have already decided'). 'Oversight T-shirts' is wrong—likely 'simple' or 'plain' T-shirts. 'fitted tea' should be 'fitted tees'. This fixes verb tense, preposition, and word choice. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Yes I love different types of dress I'm wearing because sometimes I am wearing like a T-shirts and jeans pants and weekend I wearing the Samsari Kurt as well. I love the traditional dress.

✓ Yes, I like wearing different types of clothes because sometimes I wear T-shirts and jeans on weekdays, and on weekends I wear the Samsari kurt. I love traditional dress.

Use 'like wearing' instead of 'love different types of dress I'm wearing'. Match count: 'T-shirts' plural with 'wear' not 'a T-shirts'. Correct time expressions: 'on weekends' and 'on weekdays'. Use simple present 'I wear' for habitual actions. 'Samsari Kurt' corrected to 'Samsari kurt' as a garment name; avoid article 'the' before 'traditional dress' unless specific. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Personally, I love the black and white, but uh, different types of CLO uh, colors, uh, also I love, but especially I love is black and white with its suit on my body and its skin.

✓ Personally, I like black and white, but I also like different colors. Especially, black and white suit my body and skin tone.

Do not use 'the' before colors in this context. 'CLO colors' is unclear—use 'colors'. 'I love is black and white with its suit on my body and its skin' is ungrammatical; use 'black and white suit my body and skin tone'. This fixes article use, word choice, and sentence structure. Grammar problem type ID:22