Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and avoid filler words (e.g., “umm”). Start with a clear topic sentence, add one brief specific detail and use a linking word if needed. Use slightly more precise vocabulary (e.g., ‘sweatshirts’, ‘athleisure’, ‘casual wear’).

例: I prefer comfortable clothes, such as sweatpants and sweatshirts. For example, I often wear athleisure when I travel because it’s warm and easy to move in.

提案: Avoid repetition and hesitations. Give a clear direct answer, then provide a reason using a linking word (because, since) and one short supporting detail. Keep it to two or three sentences.

例: I prefer comfortable and casual clothes because I’m an active person. For instance, I choose clothes that allow me to move freely when I commute and exercise.

提案: Remove repeated words and fillers. Start with a clear statement, then give one specific reason and an example. Use correct noun forms (prints, a cute print).

例: Yes, I do. I especially like T-shirts with cute prints because they show my personality. For example, I often wear graphic tees with animals or cartoons.

提案: Good concise answer. Improve by adding a linking word and a brief specific detail (how you choose or why). Avoid vague phrasing like ‘the ones that I used to wear’ — be specific.

例: Not really. I usually pick familiar outfits that I know are comfortable and look good, so I don’t spend much time deciding in the morning.

提案: Eliminate fillers and repetition. Give a clear comparison using a linking word (whereas, while) and finish the sentence with a specific weekend activity. Keep it within two to three sentences.

例: Yes. While I wear comfortable, practical clothes for work on weekdays, I dress more casually or fashionably on weekends when I hang out with friends or go to cafés.

提案: Avoid informal or unclear phrases (‘goes everywhere’). Give a clear topic sentence, a reason, and one specific example of how you wear those colours. Use correct collocations (go well with).

例: I prefer black because it goes well with many outfits and looks tidy. I also like white and blue; for example, I often pair a black jacket with blue jeans or a white T-shirt for a simple look.

× I like to wear comfortable ones such as umm, sweatpants, sweat shirts like that.

✓ I like to wear comfortable clothes such as sweatpants and sweatshirts.

Use of 'ones' is awkward here; 'comfortable' should modify 'clothes' and items should be joined with 'and'. Also 'sweat shirts' should be one word 'sweatshirts'. Suggestion: use clear noun 'clothes' and standard spelling.

× I prefer to wear comfortable and comfortable ones because I am active person so I like to I pre I prefer to wear them.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable ones because I am an active person, so I prefer to wear them.

Missing article 'an' before 'active person' and repeated/hesitant fragments removed. 'Prefer' must agree with subject; simplifying to 'I prefer' fixes clarity. Suggest speaking in complete concise sentences and include articles where needed.

× Yes I do. I love to wear T-shirts. Umm especially especially there is some cute printings on it.

✓ Yes, I do. I love to wear T-shirts, especially when there are some cute prints on them.

'There is' with plural 'printings' is incorrect; use 'there are' for plural. 'Printings' is unnatural; use 'prints'. Pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to match plural 'T-shirts'. Suggest matching singular/plural and using natural noun choices.

× Not really, I usually go for the ones that I used to wear.

✓ Not really, I usually go for the ones that I usually wear.

'Used to wear' implies a past habitual action not current habit. The question asks about current practice, so present habitual 'usually wear' is correct. Suggest align tense with meaning.

× MMM yes I think so because on weekdays I usually go to work so I prefer to wear comfortable comfortable clothes but on weekends I usually go out for hanging out with my friends or.

✓ Yes, I think so. On weekdays I usually go to work, so I prefer to wear comfortable clothes, but on weekends I usually go out to hang out with my friends.

Redundant words ('comfortable comfortable') and incorrect phrase 'go out for hanging out' are ungrammatical. Use the infinitive 'to hang out' and complete the clause. Break into clearer sentences and remove fillers.

× I like black clothes because it goes everywhere it go, it goes well with everything and I also like white and blue ones.

✓ I like black clothes because they go with everything, and I also like white and blue ones.

Pronoun 'it' is incorrect for plural 'clothes'; use 'they'. 'Goes everywhere' is informal and awkward; 'go with everything' is idiomatic. Ensure pronoun number agreement and natural preposition 'with'.