Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng; rút gọn để tránh lặp từ và thêm chi tiết cụ thể. Cụ thể: (1) Sửa động từ 'I'm prefer' thành 'I prefer'. (2) Dùng số ít/phủ định đúng: 'short' -> 'shorts'. (3) Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu, bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rồi thêm 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ với liên từ (for example, so, because).

例: I prefer comfortable clothes that fit well. For example, I usually wear casual items like T-shirts, shorts and sneakers because they allow me to move easily. In colder weather, I add a coat or jacket, but in summer I stick to light, breathable fabrics.

提案: Làm rõ ý chính và sửa cấu trúc câu sai; tránh cụm từ mơ hồ ('for me to say a casual call'). Nên nêu lý do rõ ràng với liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'so' và một ví dụ cụ thể. Giữ câu ngắn gọn và tự nhiên.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I follow a minimalist style. For example, in summer I choose loose T-shirts and cotton shorts so I can stay cool and comfortable all day.

提案: Sửa lỗi cấu trúc và sử dụng từ: 'easy to breathe' -> 'breathable'; 'I can wearing for last long lasting time' -> 'they last a long time'. Thêm một câu chủ đề ngắn, lý do cụ thể và ví dụ về hoàn cảnh sử dụng.

例: Yes, I do. T-shirts are comfortable and breathable, so they’re perfect for school, work or hanging out with friends. I usually buy New Balance T-shirts because they fit my body well and last a long time.

提案: Sắp xếp câu rõ ràng: mở đầu với câu chủ đề, sau đó nêu ngoại lệ. Sửa ngữ pháp ('don't spend much time choosing', 'shorts', 'when I go to an event'). Tránh tiếng lắp và từ thừa ('Umm or maybe').

例: I’m basically a minimalist, so I don’t spend much time choosing clothes and usually wear a simple T-shirt and jeans or shorts. However, when I go to an event or festival, I sometimes spend more time choosing an outfit and wear a shirt or blazer to look more formal.

提案: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng: 'Yes, I do' hoặc 'No, I don't' rồi giải thích bằng 1–2 câu cụ thể. Sửa ngữ pháp ('on the weekend' -> 'on weekends', 'top trouser' -> 'a polo with trousers', 'suitable' dùng đúng). Tránh mơ hồ 'formal sneaker' — nếu ý là giày lịch sự, nói 'smart shoes'.

例: Yes, I do. On weekends or special occasions I usually wear a polo shirt with trousers and smart shoes, while on weekdays I prefer casual clothes like T-shirts and jeans.

提案: Sử dụng cấu trúc câu mạch lạc và sửa lỗi nhỏ: 'because they are easy to mix together' và 'they always make my outfit look neat and versatile'. Thêm một câu giải thích ngắn về lợi ích của việc chọn màu trung tính.

例: I prefer grey, black and sometimes white. I stick to a few neutral colours because they’re easy to mix together and always make my outfits look neat and versatile.

× I'm prefer comfortable clothes that fit well, so I usually wear casual items like T-shirt, short and sneakers.

✓ I prefer comfortable clothes that fit well, so I usually wear casual items like T-shirts, shorts and sneakers.

'I'm prefer' is incorrect because the verb prefer is a stative verb and should use simple present 'I prefer' not present continuous. Also countable nouns need plural forms 'T-shirts' and 'shorts'. Use commas and 'and' to list items correctly.

× I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because I always follow to minimalism and for me to say a casual call.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because I always follow minimalism and would call my style casual.

Remove the unnecessary preposition 'to' after 'follow' and rephrase 'for me to say a casual call' which is ungrammatical; use 'would call my style casual' to express opinion. 'Follow minimalism' is the correct collocation.

× This makes me feel like easy to breathe in the summer and always the season.

✓ This makes me feel comfortable and allows me to breathe easily in the summer and in all seasons.

Original sentence mixes structures and has incorrect adjective/adverb use. 'Feel like easy to breathe' is ungrammatical; use 'feel comfortable' and 'breathe easily'. Add 'in all seasons' for intended meaning.

× Yes I do, I always wear T-shirt because they are comfortable and easy to breathe so they are perfect for school, work or just hang out with friends.

✓ Yes, I do. I always wear T-shirts because they are comfortable and breathable, so they are perfect for school, work or just hanging out with friends.

Use plural 'T-shirts'. 'Easy to breathe' should be 'breathable' (adjective) and 'hang out' requires the gerund 'hanging' after 'just' in this context.

× I usually prefer New Balance brand T-shirt because they fit for my body and I can wearing for last long lasting time.

✓ I usually prefer New Balance T-shirts because they fit my body and last a long time.

'Fit for my body' should be 'fit my body'. 'I can wearing for last long lasting time' is ungrammatical; use 'last a long time' to describe durability. Remove redundant words.

× I basically am minimalist and usually don't spend much time to choosing clothes because I prefer simple T-shirt and jeans.

✓ I am basically a minimalist and usually don't spend much time choosing clothes because I prefer simple T-shirts and jeans.

Use article 'a minimalist'. Do not use 'to' before gerund 'choosing'. Use plural 'T-shirts' and 'jeans' as typical collocations.

× Umm or maybe like a short.

✓ Umm, maybe shorts.

Fragment 'like a short' is unclear and ungrammatical. Use 'shorts' as the likely intended plural noun.

× However I go to an event or festival I sometimes spend more time choosing an outfit and my wear a shirt or blazer to look.

✓ However, when I go to an event or festival I sometimes spend more time choosing an outfit and wear a shirt or blazer to look more formal.

Add 'when' to form a correct subordinate clause. Remove 'my' before 'wear' and add purpose 'to look more formal' for clarity.

× I always say yes in the weekend or event or something holiday.

✓ I would usually say yes on weekends or for events and holidays.

Use 'on weekends' and 'for events and holidays'. 'I always say yes' is better as 'I would usually say yes' depending on habitual preference; restructure for natural English.

× I always wear polo on the top trouser.

✓ I always wear a polo shirt with trousers.

'Polo' should be 'a polo shirt'. Use 'with trousers' or 'with pants'. 'Top trouser' is incorrect order and word choice.

× Uh, after that is the formal sneaker because these are formal festival or formal events.

✓ I often choose formal sneakers because they suit formal festivals or events.

'After that is the formal sneaker' is awkward; rephrase to 'I often choose formal sneakers'. Use 'suit' to show appropriateness and 'festivals or events' plural.

× So I need to suitable for this.

✓ So I need to be suitable for them.

'Need to suitable' is incorrect; use 'need to be suitable' or better 'need to dress suitably for them'. Ensure pronoun agreement with plural 'events'.

× I prefer grey, black and sometimes white.

✓ I prefer grey, black and sometimes white.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed.

× I stick to just a few colors because the easy mix together and always make my outfit look neat and versatile.

✓ I stick to just a few colors because they easily mix together and always make my outfit look neat and versatile.

Replace 'the easy' with 'they easily' and use adverb 'easily' to modify 'mix together'. Ensure subject 'they' refers to 'colors'.