Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make a clear topic sentence stating the kind of clothes you prefer, then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Avoid fillers and unclear phrases. Use linking words (for example, because, so) to connect ideas and keep sentences short (max 4–5).

例: I prefer casual, comfortable clothes, especially loose T‑shirts and jeans. For example, I usually wear a relaxed T‑shirt and denim because they let me move freely and feel comfortable at parties or when I go out with friends.

提案: Begin with a direct answer, then give two concise reasons with linking words. Use correct verb forms and simpler vocabulary rather than repeating ideas. Avoid adding irrelevant words like “thank you.”

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they give me more freedom to move. Also, wearing tight or formal clothes makes me feel distracted and uncomfortable, so I choose casual clothes most of the time.

提案: Answer directly, then provide a clear specific detail (quantity or situations when you wear them). Avoid unclear numbers and filler. Use linking words like ‘in fact’ or ‘for example’ to support your statement.

例: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts. In fact, about 90% of my wardrobe is T‑shirts, and I wear them at home and on casual outings because they are easy to mix with different trousers.

提案: Give a short direct answer, then explain briefly how you decide what to wear. Use correct verb tense and clear linking words like ‘because’ or ‘so’. Keep sentences concise and avoid repetition.

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because most of my clothes are T‑shirts. When I go out I usually pick a T‑shirt and a pair of jeans, so choosing is quick and easy.

提案: Start with a clear contrast sentence (weekdays vs weekends). Use linking words such as ‘however’ or ‘on weekends’. Avoid unrelated information or unclear cultural references unless explained. Provide one specific example of weekend clothing.

例: Yes. On weekdays I wear a school uniform, but on weekends I wear casual clothes. For example, I usually put on a T‑shirt and chinos or jeans when I go out with friends on Saturday.

提案: Give a direct answer naming the colours you prefer, then explain why with a brief, clear reason. Use correct colour words and avoid unclear phrases. One or two sentences are enough.

例: I prefer cool colours like blue and green. I find these colours calming and easy on the eyes, so I often choose shirts and jackets in those shades.

× Like a free sign, clothes and all, many style because the freestyling is uh, most of the time I wear the freestyle because it was most, uh, free.

✓ I like free-style clothes and many styles because freestyling is comfortable; most of the time I wear freestyle clothes because they are free and comfortable.

The original sentence has sentence structure errors: fragments, repetitions and unclear references. Rearranged into a clear subject + verb + object structure and replaced vague 'free' with 'comfortable' for clarity. Use plural agreement for 'clothes' and 'they are' for referring to clothes. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Then I get a free then and then, uh, woman is dying is like, uh, when I go out and when I go to the a party or some kind of.

✓ Then I get ready, and women dress up when I go out or to a party.

The original is ungrammatical and fragmented. 'Get a free' is unclear; likely intended 'get ready'. Removed repetitions and rephrased into a coherent sentence with correct verb forms and article usage. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because it was it gave me more freedom for me.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because they give me more freedom.

The original mixes past tense 'was' and 'gave' with present preference 'prefer'. Use present simple 'give' to match 'prefer' and replace 'it' with plural 'they' referring to clothes. Grammar problem type ID:6

× And when I wear uncomfortable clothes, it was very disturbful and frustration.

✓ And when I wear uncomfortable clothes, I feel very uncomfortable and frustrated.

'Disturbful' is not a correct adjective and 'frustration' is a noun; use adjective 'frustrated' to describe the speaker's feeling. Also change 'it was' to 'I feel' to correctly express personal experience. Grammar problem type ID:13

× So I most of the time I wear the comfortable clothes.

✓ So most of the time I wear comfortable clothes.

Unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'comfortable clothes' and redundant 'I'. Simplify to natural English: 'most of the time I wear comfortable clothes.' Grammar problem type ID:22

× Yeah, I like to will AT shirt umm in my house in my cupboard, they have a so many T-shirts and 90% of my cupboard is with T-shirts full of T-shirts.

✓ Yes, I like to wear T-shirts. At home in my cupboard I have so many T-shirts; about 90% of my cupboard is full of T-shirts.

Replace incorrect modal 'to will' with 'to wear'. Correct word order and article use: 'at home' and 'I have'. Use 'about' for approximate percentage and 'full of T-shirts' for natural expression. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Uh, other ten person was like the like, Oh, many dress T-shirt is get me.

✓ The other ten percent are different; they prefer dresses, but many people choose T-shirts.

Original is unintelligible. Interpreted as 'other ten percent' needing plural agreement and clear pronouns. Use 'percent' and plural verbs 'are' and 'they prefer'. Grammar problem type ID:12

× No, because most of my clothes were T-shirts, so I didn't need to choose.

✓ No, because most of my clothes are T-shirts, so I don't need to choose.

The speaker is describing a current, habitual situation. Use present simple 'are' and 'don't' instead of past 'were' and 'didn't' to match habitual context. Grammar problem type ID:5

× I take when I need to go outside, I take the teachers and I will wear it as some kind of a trouser or some kind of a pants with AT shirt so it will it doesn't spend.

✓ When I need to go out, I take a T-shirt and wear it with trousers or pants, so it doesn't take much time.

Original contains many errors: 'take the teachers' should be 'take a T-shirt'; corrected noun forms 'trousers or pants' and improved verb phrases 'take much time'. Reorganized sentence into clear sequence. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yeah, in weekday I need to go to school, so I wear a uniform.

✓ On weekdays I need to go to school, so I wear a uniform.

Use plural 'weekdays' or phrase 'on weekdays' for habitual actions. 'A uniform' is acceptable; added preposition 'on' for time expressions. Grammar problem type ID:17

× No, in the weekend I wear a T-shirts and some kind of trouser.

✓ No, on weekends I wear T-shirts and some kind of trousers.

Use 'on weekends' and plural 'T-shirts' and 'trousers' for general habits. Remove unnecessary article before plural nouns. Grammar problem type ID:17

× And sometime I will, umm, like in our country is called as Japan, like it was Gav.

✓ Sometimes I will wear different clothes; in our country, Japan, there is a traditional garment called a 'ghaghra' (or specify the correct name).

The original is unclear and ungrammatical. Clarified intent: speaker meant to mention a traditional garment. Suggested structure and indicated speaker should provide the correct local term. Use 'sometimes' and proper commas. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I like to wear that clothes like peer clothes, like green pier, blue pier eyelid, that kind of color because it's cool for our eyeballs.

✓ I like to wear clothes in pale colors, like pale green or pale blue, because they are gentle on the eyes.

Original uses incorrect words 'peer' and 'pier eyelid'. Corrected to 'pale' and 'pale green/pale blue'. Use plural agreement 'clothes' and replace 'cool for our eyeballs' with idiomatic 'gentle on the eyes'. Grammar problem type ID:13