Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your reply simply repeated the examiner's question rather than answering. In Part 1 you should answer directly with a topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 4–5 sentences). For example, say what type of clothes you prefer and why, using a linking word to add a reason.

例: I prefer casual clothes such as jeans and T‑shirts because they are comfortable and easy to move in. For instance, I usually wear casual outfits when I go to college or meet friends, since they suit most informal situations.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but is repetitive and disfluent. Use one clear topic sentence stating your preference, then add 1–2 specific reasons with linking words (because, so, for example). Avoid filler words and repetition. Keep sentences short and grammatically correct.

例: I prefer comfortable casual clothes to smart clothes because they suit my daily activities. For example, casual outfits like jeans and a sweater are suitable for classes or weekend outings, so I feel relaxed and confident in them.

提案: You answered the question but your explanation is unclear and contains hesitation. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I do), then add a specific condition when you avoid T‑shirts, using a linking word (but, however, when). Use one concise example to illustrate.

例: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts because they are comfortable. However, I avoid them for formal events or job interviews, where I choose a shirt or blazer to look more professional.

提案: Your answer is direct but contains hesitation and repetition. Give a concise topic sentence and add a clear reason or brief example using a linking word (because, so). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

例: No, I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I usually pick whatever I like at first sight. For example, if I see a T‑shirt I like, I buy it without comparing many options.

提案: Your answer partially responds but is confusing and contradictory (mentioning both casual and formal for weekdays). Structure your response: state the difference, then give specific examples for weekdays and weekends with linking words (for example, whereas, while).

例: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear smart‑casual clothes for college, such as chinos and a shirt, because I want to look neat. On weekends, however, I wear relaxed outfits like T‑shirts and shorts when I go out with friends.

提案: You communicated your preference but with hesitation and vague phrases. State a clear topic sentence (I prefer blue and light colours), then give a specific reason and an example of combinations, using linking words (because, for example). Avoid repetition.

例: I generally prefer blue and other light colours because they look fresh and suit my skin tone. For example, I often wear light‑blue shirts paired with navy trousers because the contrast makes me look tidy and presentable.

× Oh, like I prefer to wear casual, casual clothes, uh, instead of smart clothes because of casual clothing is a, like everywhere is suitable and at every occasion, every place or every, uh, every interview weekend where casual wear instead of smart clothing because casual wear, uh, casual clothes suits.

✓ I prefer to wear casual clothes instead of smart clothes because casual clothing is suitable for many places and occasions, including interviews and weekends.

The original sentence has run-on structure, repetition, and unclear connectors. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Simplify by removing fillers and repetitions, use clear cause-and-effect phrasing ('because'), and list examples concisely. Ensure a single main clause with supporting clauses: 'I prefer... because... including...'.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, but, uh, at sometimes, uh, like at some occasions or at any places where, uh, we have to present ourself a better there, we there, I can't wear T-shirt like, uh, want to show the formal, I formal formalize.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, but sometimes, on occasions or in situations where we need to present ourselves better, I cannot wear T-shirts because I want to appear more formal.

This contains incorrect use of adverbs/prepositions and pronouns requiring correction (IDs 11 and 12) and sentence structure problems. Use 'sometimes' (not 'at sometimes'), 'on occasions' or 'in situations', and the reflexive pronoun 'ourselves'. Use 'cannot' and 'appear more formal' for clarity.

× No, I generally do not spend a lot of time doing on choosing clothes. Like, uh, at uh, first time, at, at first sight, uh, which clothes I like, I'll buy and uh, I don't uh, spend lot of time choosing clothes.

✓ No, I generally do not spend a lot of time choosing clothes. At first sight, if I like an item, I buy it, and I do not spend a lot of time deciding.

Remove the incorrect preposition 'doing on' and fix article usage ('a lot of time'). Use 'At first sight' or 'at first' and correct verb phrases: 'if I like an item, I buy it'. This fixes preposition and article errors (IDs 11 and 22) and clarifies sentence structure.

× Yes, like on a weekdays like for a study or or for a college or for a jobs, I prefer to wear casual clothes. Like for former clothes to to like uh professional and uh on a weekends for generally on a trip I wear casual T-shirts and shorts.

✓ Yes, on weekdays for studying, college, or work, I prefer to wear casual clothes. For more formal or professional occasions, I wear formal clothes. On weekends or when I go on trips, I usually wear casual T-shirts and shorts.

Fix plural/article and tense issues: use 'weekdays' (no 'a'), 'work' (not 'jobs' with 'a'), and 'usually' for habitual actions. Correct 'former' to 'formal' and structure sentences into clear statements. This addresses singular/plural and article errors (IDs 1 and 22) and tense/word choice issues (ID 6).

× Uh, I like to generally blue cloth, blue color Co clothes, uh, uh, light, uh, light, light colors clothes and uh, I want to wear uh, like contrast, contrast color clothes, uh, like on which I look like, uh, like look like, uh, good appearance.

✓ I generally like blue and light-colored clothes, and I also want to wear contrasting colors that make me look good.

The original has word choice problems and redundancy. Use 'blue and light-colored clothes' and 'contrasting colors' for clarity. Remove repeated words and fix adjective placement ('light-colored' before 'clothes'). This corrects adjective/adverb misuse and sentence structure (IDs 13 and 26).