Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a direct topic sentence, correct grammar (plural/singular, verb forms), and avoid redundancy. Use one clear reason and a brief specific detail. Aim for 2–3 sentences only.

例: I prefer casual clothes, especially T-shirts and shorts. They are comfortable and keep me cool when the weather is warm.

提案: Answer directly (choose one option) then give a concise reason. Remove filler words and correct phrases (e.g., “helps me feel refreshed,” “hot or warm weather”). Keep to 2 sentences with a linking word.

例: I prefer comfortable and casual clothes rather than smart clothes because they help me feel refreshed. For example, loose cotton shirts are ideal in hot weather.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence and reduce hesitation. Use correct verb forms and more precise phrasing (e.g., “comfortable for my skin” → “comfortable on my skin” or “breathable”). Optionally add a brief example.

例: Yes, I do. I often wear T-shirts in hot weather because they are breathable and comfortable on my skin.

提案: Be concise and avoid repeating ideas. Use natural expressions (“I am picky about clothes” or “I’m choosy when buying clothes”) and give a specific reason or example of what makes it difficult.

例: Yes, I do. I’m quite picky about styles and colours, so I often take time to find clothes that suit me.

提案: Answer directly and use clear contrast language (e.g., “On weekdays... but on weekends...” ). Correct grammar (it depends, I wear). Give one specific example for each case and avoid fillers.

例: It depends. On weekdays I usually wear casual T-shirts for comfort, but on weekends I dress more stylishly if I’m meeting friends or going out.

提案: State your preferred colours clearly and give a short, specific reason without repetition. Use correct grammar (colours, make me look brighter). Keep it to 2 sentences.

例: I prefer neutral colours like white, black and grey. These shades make my appearance look sharper and are easy to match with other items.

× I like a lot of type of clothes, but in particular I would like to wear some thing T-shirts and shorts because it's feel like comfortable.

✓ I like a lot of types of clothes, but in particular I like to wear T-shirts and shorts because they feel comfortable.

Original sentence has pluralization errors: 'type' should be 'types' and 'some thing T-shirts' is incorrect; use 'T-shirts' plural without 'some thing'. Also subject-pronoun agreement: 'it's feel' is wrong; 'they feel' agrees with plural 'T-shirts and shorts'. Use simple present 'I like' to match habitual preference.

× Uh, yes, I like to prefer something comfortable and casual clothes.

✓ Yes, I prefer comfortable and casual clothes.

'Like to prefer' is redundant and awkward. Use 'prefer' as the modal/verb expressing preference. Also remove 'something' and place adjective before 'clothes' to be grammatical.

× Uh, this is because, uh, it fills me to help refresh myself and uh, I really enjoyed in particular in hot weather and something warm weather.

✓ This is because it helps me feel refreshed, and I especially enjoy it in hot or warm weather.

Pronoun 'it fills me to help refresh myself' is incorrect. Use 'it helps me feel refreshed' to express cause and effect. 'I really enjoyed' should be present 'I especially enjoy' to match habitual preference. 'Something warm weather' is incorrect; use 'hot or warm weather'.

× Yes, absolutely. I like to wearing a T-shirt, uh, in particular in some hot weather.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I like wearing T-shirts, especially in hot weather.

After 'like', use either 'to wear' or gerund 'wearing'. 'Like to wearing' mixes forms. Also use plural 'T-shirts' for general statement and 'especially' is more natural than 'in particular in some'.

× This is because, uh, it is a very comfortable for my skin as well.

✓ This is because it is very comfortable for my skin as well.

Use 'comfortable' without article 'a' when describing an uncountable quality. Remove extra 'a' and article. 'Very' intensifies the adjective correctly.

× Yes, of course, this is because I'm a very choosy person in the clothes, so it is a very difficult task when it comes to on clothes.

✓ Yes, of course. I'm a very choosy person about clothes, so choosing them is a very difficult task for me.

'Choosy person in the clothes' is incorrect preposition; use 'about clothes'. 'When it comes to on clothes' is ungrammatical; use 'choosing them' or 'when it comes to clothes'. Rephrase for clarity and correct pronoun reference.

× Uh, well, it's depend on my situation.

✓ Well, it depends on the situation.

Use third person singular present 'depends' (subject-verb agreement) not 'depend'. Also 'my situation' can be simplified to 'the situation' for naturalness.

× Uh, if I want to go out with my friends and family members, uh, then I wear something stylish.

✓ If I want to go out with my friends or family, I wear something stylish.

Original is mostly acceptable but remove filler and use 'friends or family' for natural phrasing. No -ing issue here but simplified.

× Uh, but uh, in the normal day, I just wearing T-shirts and some, uh, comfortable clothes, uh, because it feels, uh, like a refresh and it is a very helpful.

✓ But on a normal day, I just wear T-shirts and comfortable clothes because they feel refreshing and very helpful.

Use 'wear' not 'wearing' after subject; 'in the normal day' should be 'on a normal day'. 'Feels like a refresh' is unnatural; use 'feel refreshing'. 'It is a very helpful' is incomplete; 'very helpful' needs an object or refer to 'they are very helpful'.

× Uh, there are many colours that I like, in particular when it's come about, uh, clothes, but uh, I like, uh, white, black and grey colour, uh, because, uh, it in this type of colour, my body, uh, become a very bright.

✓ There are many colours I like when it comes to clothes, but I like white, black and grey because these colours make my body look brighter.

Use 'when it comes to' not 'when it's come about'. Use plural 'colours' and 'these colours' to refer back. 'Colour' after listing should be plural. 'My body become a very bright' incorrect verb and adjective use; use 'make my body look brighter'.