Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use linking phrase to add one specific detail. Correct noun plurals and remove filler words.

例: I usually wear T-shirts and trousers because they are comfortable. For example, I prefer cotton T-shirts and slim-fit trousers for most activities because they are breathable and let me move easily.

提案: Use correct comparison structure and clearer linking words. Give one specific reason and correct verb forms. Replace unclear words and avoid redundancy.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes to smart clothes because they allow me to move freely. For instance, loose trousers and soft T-shirts are better for my daily routine and physical activities.

提案: Answer directly and avoid confusing phrases. Use one clear reason with proper grammar and a short example. Remove irrelevant pronouns and repeated statements.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and allow me to move easily. For example, I wear T-shirts when I play sports or run errands.

提案: Organise chronology clearly and use simple past and present correctly. Explain briefly what changed and use linking words like 'but' and 'now'. Clarify vocabulary (e.g., 'outfit planning').

例: A few years ago I used to spend a lot of time choosing clothes, but now I plan my outfits in advance. For example, I pick my clothes the night before school to save time in the morning.

提案: Answer directly, use correct tense and sentence structure, and organise by days with linking words. Use specific vocabulary for occasions and avoid awkward phrasing.

例: Yes, I wear different styles. On weekdays I usually wear comfortable clothes like T-shirts for school. On Saturdays I dress casually but neater when I visit family, and on Sundays I wear smart-casual clothes for church.

提案: Use accurate vocabulary and correct minor errors. List colours clearly and give a concise reason with one linking phrase. Correct spelling and phrasing like 'hat' and 'wardrobe'.

例: I like black, brown and grey, but black is my favourite because it suits my skin tone and is easy to match with other items in my wardrobe.

× I I usually wear trouser and T-shirt because they are comfortable.

✓ I usually wear trousers and a T-shirt because they are comfortable.

Use plural 'trousers' for the clothing item and include the article 'a' before a singular countable noun 'T-shirt'. Also remove the duplicated 'I'. Suggestion: say 'trousers' and 'a T-shirt'.

× For instance I like cotton T-shirt and slim fit trouser for every activity since that like since they let me move easily.

✓ For instance, I like cotton T-shirts and slim-fit trousers for every activity because they let me move easily.

Pluralize 'T-shirt' and 'trouser' to match general preference. Use 'because' for cause and hyphenate 'slim-fit'. Remove redundant words 'since that like'. Suggestion: 'cotton T-shirts and slim-fit trousers'.

× I prefer to wear comfortable clothes than smart clothes.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes to smart clothes.

After 'prefer', the correct preposition is 'to' when comparing two things (prefer A to B), not 'than'. Suggestion: use 'prefer X to Y'.

× The reason for that is comfortable clothes hermit to do every activities since they allow me to move freely.

✓ The reason is that comfortable clothes help me do every activity because they allow me to move freely.

Several issues: 'hermit' is incorrect word; use 'help' or 'enable'. 'Every activities' should be singular 'every activity' or 'all activities'. Use 'because' for cause. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'clothes help me do'. Suggestion: 'comfortable clothes help me do every activity'.

× Of course, I like when she shared because I feel comfortable with T-shirt and T-shirt makes me to move easily and make a lot of activity.

✓ Of course, I like wearing T-shirts because I feel comfortable in them and they let me move easily and do many activities.

Pronoun 'she' is incorrect; refer to 'wearing' or 'T-shirts'. Use 'in' with 'comfortable' for clothing. 'T-shirt makes me to move' is wrong: use 'they let me move'. Use 'many activities' not 'a lot of activity'. Suggestion: 'I like wearing T-shirts; they let me move easily and do many activities'.

× Yes, I can say about 3 years ago I was one of the person who spent a lot of time choosing clothes, but now I'm having.

✓ About three years ago I was one of the people who spent a lot of time choosing clothes, but now I don't.

Use past reference 'three years ago'. 'One of the person' should be 'one of the people'. 'I'm having' is incomplete and incorrect; replace with 'I don't' (spend a lot of time now). Suggestion: 'one of the people who spent' and clarify present change.

× But now I'm having a hooting, I'm having outfit, which means I prepared my outfit before the day or before the time of school.

✓ Now I have a routine: I prepare my outfit before the day or before school.

'Having a hooting' is unclear; likely meant 'habit' or 'routine'. Use 'prepare my outfit' in present simple for habitual action. Simplify and correct word choice. Suggestion: 'I have a routine; I prepare my outfit before the day'.

× Of course are you precisely wore different style of clothes on weekends?

✓ Of course. Do you wear a different style of clothes on weekends?

The original mixes words and tenses. Form a proper question with 'Do you wear' for present habit and use 'a different style' or 'different styles'. Suggestion: 'Do you wear a different style on weekends? '

× My weekends are make up of Fridays, Saturday and Sunday which every Friday are wear comfortable cloth with T-shirt for me to move easily and on Saturday when going to visit my family I wear some trouser.

✓ My weekends are made up of Friday, Saturday, and Sunday. On Fridays I wear comfortable clothes with a T-shirt to move easily, and on Saturdays when I visit my family I wear trousers.

Use 'made up of' for composition. Days listed should be singular forms. Use 'Fridays' for habitual action or 'on Fridays'. 'Comfortable cloth' should be 'comfortable clothes' and 'some trouser' should be 'trousers'. Suggestion: 'My weekends are made up of Friday, Saturday and Sunday. On Fridays I wear comfortable clothes...'.

× On Sunday I'm going to church I wear comfort.

✓ On Sundays I go to church and I wear comfortable clothes.

'I'm going to church' is okay for a single occurrence but habitual action uses present simple 'I go'. 'Wear comfort' is incorrect; use 'wear comfortable clothes'. Suggestion: 'On Sundays I go to church and wear comfortable clothes.'

× I like black, brown, and hat, but black is my favorite.

✓ I like black, brown, and khaki, but black is my favorite.

'Hat' is likely a typo for a colour like 'khaki' or 'white'; if intended 'hat' isn't a color. Replace with a valid color. Ensure parallel list of colors. Suggestion: confirm intended colour; use 'khaki' or another color.

× I prefer black because it suits my skin tone and it's easy to match with other items in my war in my wardrobe.

✓ I prefer black because it suits my skin tone and it's easy to match with other items in my wardrobe.

Remove extra words 'in my war in'. Keep 'in my wardrobe'. Preposition use was fine but sentence had extra erroneous text. Suggestion: 'match with other items in my wardrobe'.