Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be careful with grammar (subject-verb agreement and articles), avoid repetition, and make your answer more coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, give two concise supporting reasons with linking words, and finish with a short concluding phrase. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

例: I usually wear T-shirts because they are very comfortable and allow me to move freely. Besides, they are versatile, so I can pair them with jeans or a jacket and wear them almost anywhere, even to slightly dressier places.

提案: Correct vocabulary (gloves → clothes) and avoid repeating the same reason. Use a clear contrast between weekdays and non-working days. Use linking words (however, but) to show contrast and give a brief example of how you style casual clothes.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes most of the time. However, on working days I dress more smartly; for example, I might wear a button-down shirt and chinos to look professional, while at the weekend I usually stick to a T-shirt and jeans.

提案: Avoid repetition and fix pronoun/number agreement (it → them; is → are). Give a specific example of outfits and one reason (comfort or style). Use linking words such as because and for example.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and very versatile. For example, I often pair a plain T-shirt with jeans for casual outings or with a smart jacket when I need to look slightly smarter.

提案: Make your answer grammatically correct and concise. Use a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details showing why you don't spend much time (e.g., simple wardrobe, routine). Avoid filler sounds like 'umm' and unclear words.

例: I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I keep a simple wardrobe of casual items. Usually I just pick a T-shirt and a pair of trousers, which works for most places I go.

提案: This answer is clear but can be tightened and a little more specific. Keep it to 2–3 sentences, use a linking word to contrast (whereas, but), and give a short example of each style.

例: Yes, I wear different styles: on weekdays I dress professionally, for example a shirt and trousers for work, whereas on weekends I prefer casual outfits like T-shirts and jeans because they are comfortable and versatile.

提案: Use correct noun forms and avoid unfinished sentences. Explain reasons clearly and give one concrete example. Remove repetitions and filler words. Keep answer to 2–3 sentences.

例: I prefer black clothes because stains are less visible and they look neat for longer. For example, when I eat a curry, I don't worry about small splashes as much when I'm wearing black.

× I usually likes to wear T-shirts because it's very, very comfortable, which I can move around very easily and I wouldn't feel tight and I can wear it to anywhere.

✓ I usually like to wear T-shirts because they are very comfortable, so I can move around easily, I don't feel tight, and I can wear them anywhere.

The verb 'likes' is incorrect for the subject 'I'; use 'like' (third person singular rule). Also 'it's' (it is) should be plural 'they are' to agree with 'T-shirts'. Avoid redundant phrases and use 'anywhere' without 'to'. Improve cohesion by using conjunctions correctly and consistent pronoun reference.'

× Umm and even though like those high class place because even though we've.

✓ Umm, even in high-class places, I still wear them.

The original is incomplete and repetitive ('even though' used twice) resulting in a sentence fragment. Complete the idea with a subject and verb and remove redundant connectors. Use 'high-class places' plural to match context.'

× I would say I prefer to wear comfortable and casual gloves as long as I'm not I'm not during the working days because it's very, very comfortable, because it's very comfortable where I can wear it to anywhere and as long as I can pair it with them with any jeans or trousers that suitable to any.

✓ I would say I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes as long as I'm not at work, because they are very comfortable, I can wear them anywhere, and I can pair them with any jeans or trousers that are suitable.

'Gloves' is wrong word choice; context requires 'clothes'. 'I'm not during the working days' is ungrammatical; use 'I'm not at work'. Subject-verb agreement: 'they are' for plural 'clothes'. Add missing verb 'are' in 'that are suitable'. Remove redundant phrases and correct article/use of prepositions.'

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because I can wear it to anywhere. They are very, very versatile and it's very comfortable because I can pair it them with umm trousers or any umm jacket that is suitable to for me to go to anywhere like high.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because I can wear them anywhere. They are very versatile and very comfortable because I can pair them with trousers or a jacket that is suitable for going places, even to nicer venues.

Pronoun agreement: use 'them' for plural 'T-shirts' not 'it'. Remove 'to' before 'anywhere'. 'It's' should be 'they are' to match plural. Fix preposition 'suitable for' and rephrase awkward ending to complete the idea.'

× I would say umm, I actually not spending a lot of time dressing quills because I'm wearing casual clothes, which is dishes usually, so I just need to pair it with any trousers and I can go to any suitable place, any places, Umm, I will.

✓ I would say I actually do not spend a lot of time dressing because I wear casual clothes, which are usually simple, so I just need to pair them with trousers and I can go to suitable places.

Tense and auxiliary needed: use 'do not spend' instead of 'not spending'. Subject-verb agreement: 'I wear' and 'clothes...are'. Pronoun agreement: 'them' for 'clothes'. Remove unclear words ('quills','dishes') and redundant fragments. Ensure consistent present simple tense for habitual actions.'

× Yes, I would say so because on weekdays I have to wear it professionally because it's working days where I have to be professional, looks professional, while on weekends I usually will just wear casual outfits because it's easy to move around and they are very versatile.

✓ Yes, I would say so because on weekdays I have to dress professionally since they are working days and I need to look professional, while on weekends I usually wear casual outfits because they are easy to move in and very versatile.

Use 'dress professionally' rather than 'wear it professionally'. Replace 'it's working days' with 'they are working days' or 'because they are workdays'. Use 'look professional' (verb) not 'looks'. Match plural references and improve clarity and concision.'

× I like black clothes because it's not easy to be seen when it becomes dirty, like white gloves, which if there's a stain there, it usually will be very very difficult to remove.

✓ I like black clothes because dirt is not easily seen on them. For example, white clothes show stains, which are often difficult to remove.

Pronoun and preposition issues: 'it's not easy to be seen when it becomes dirty' is unclear; rephrase to state 'dirt is not easily seen on them'. 'White gloves' likely meant 'white clothes'; correct word choice. Use plural agreement and clearer structure.'

× And for example, like umm, when I'm eating Curry with wearing wearing with.

✓ For example, when I'm eating curry while wearing them, stains can be very noticeable.

Original is a fragment with repetition and missing elements. Complete the clause with subject and verb and remove repeated words. Use consistent capitalization ('curry' lowercase) and clarify the consequence (stains noticeable).