Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details (when, why, examples). Correct small errors (use, daily basis → on a daily basis).

例: I usually wear traditional clothes because they’re comfortable and suit my daily routine. However, when I travel I prefer modern, practical clothes like jeans and a jacket because they’re easier to wash and more versatile.

提案: Open with a direct answer (prefer comfortable clothes), then give two clear reasons using linking words (because, moreover). Avoid repeating the same idea twice and correct grammar (stress-free, on a daily basis).

例: I prefer comfortable and casual clothes because they’re stress-free and allow me to move easily. Moreover, they’re more practical for long journeys since they dry quickly and don’t require special care.

提案: Be careful with pronunciation/word choice (T-shirts, not ‘teeth’ or ‘teas’). Give a concise answer and one or two specific reasons/examples. Keep sentences short and clear.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they’re lightweight and comfortable. For example, on long bus trips I usually wear a cotton T-shirt because it breathes well and keeps me comfortable.

提案: Give a direct answer and explain briefly why you take time. Avoid fillers and incomplete sentences. Use specific examples of when you choose quickly and what mistake happens. Correct grammar (sometimes, short of time → lack of time).

例: Yes, I often spend a lot of time choosing clothes because comfort is important to me. However, when I’m in a hurry before a trip I sometimes buy unsuitable items that aren’t comfortable because I didn’t try them on.

提案: Answer directly (yes/no + main difference), then give one clear reason for each. Avoid repeating phrases and finish the thought. Use linking words like whereas or but to contrast weekday vs weekend styles.

例: Yes. On weekdays I mostly wear traditional clothes because they’re comfortable and suitable for work, whereas at weekends I prefer casual outfits like jeans and a T-shirt for relaxation and socialising.

提案: Start with a clear statement of preference, then give specific reasons and an example. Avoid repetition and minor grammar errors (black colour → black, it’s appropriate).

例: I usually choose black clothes because they look professional and are easy to match at work. On weekends I wear brighter colours like blue or green to feel more relaxed and cheerful.

× I I use traditional clothes on daily basis, but sometimes I wear modern clothes whenever I go for a whenever I go for a travel.

✓ I use traditional clothes on a daily basis, but sometimes I wear modern clothes whenever I travel.

Remove the repeated word 'I' and correct 'on daily basis' to 'on a daily basis' (article + noun phrase). Replace the awkward 'go for a travel' with the correct verb 'travel'. Also remove the repeated fragment 'whenever I go for a'. These corrections fix word choice and sentence fluency.

× Yes, I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because it's stress free and easy to move in and I wear it on daily basis.

✓ Yes, I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because they are stress-free and easy to move in, and I wear them on a daily basis.

Use plural pronoun 'they' to refer to 'clothes' (plural), not 'it'. Add a hyphen in 'stress-free' and include the article 'a' in 'a daily basis'. These changes correct pronoun agreement and adjective form.

× Moreover, I prefer casual and modern attire also because they are more practical for long journeys.

✓ Moreover, I also prefer casual and modern attire because it is more practical for long journeys.

Use 'also' before the verb for natural word order. 'Attire' is a noncount noun and should take singular pronoun 'it', not 'they'. This fixes pronoun agreement and conjunction placement.

× Yes I pref. I like wearing teeth because they are stress free and allow me to move easily.

✓ Yes, I prefer wearing T-shirts because they are stress-free and allow me to move easily.

Correct the abbreviation 'pref.' to 'prefer' and correct the misspelled 'teeth' to 'T-shirts'. Add a comma after 'Yes'. Use hyphen in 'stress-free'. These address spelling and clarity; pronoun use 'they' is correct for plural 'T-shirts'.

× I often choose teas for long journeys because they are more practical and keep me comfortable during travel.

✓ I often choose T-shirts for long journeys because they are more practical and keep me comfortable during travel.

Correct the misspelling 'teas' to 'T-shirts'. The rest of the sentence is acceptable; ensure consistent spelling and terminology.

× Yes, I I spend a lot of time on choosing clothes because I want to buy only comfortable clothes which are stress free and easy to move.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I want to buy only comfortable clothes which are stress-free and easy to move in.

Remove the duplicated 'I'. Use 'choosing' without the preposition 'on' after 'time' (correct phrase: 'spend time choosing'). Add hyphen in 'stress-free' and include 'in' after 'move' for natural phrasing.

× But sometime I choose the wrong clothes because of the short of time.

✓ But sometimes I choose the wrong clothes because of a shortage of time.

Use plural adverb 'sometimes'. Replace awkward 'the short of time' with 'a shortage of time' or 'lack of time' for correct quantifier and noun phrase.

× That's uh, that's why they.

✓ That's why that happens.

The original is an incomplete sentence and unclear. Provide a complete clause: 'That's why that happens' or 'That's why I sometimes choose the wrong clothes.' This corrects sentence fragment and clarifies meaning.

× Yes, I I style different clothes on weekends because on weekdays I usually wear traditional clothes because they are comfortable and easy to wear.

✓ Yes, I wear different styles of clothes on weekends because on weekdays I usually wear traditional clothes since they are comfortable and easy to wear.

Remove duplicated 'I' and use the verb 'wear' not 'style' (or 'wear different styles of clothes'). 'Different styles' is the natural noun phrase. Also replace repeated 'because' with 'since' to avoid repetition. This fixes verb choice and redundancy.

× But when I go outside in the weekends I choose casual clothes because they are.

✓ But when I go out on weekends I choose casual clothes because they are more comfortable.

Change 'go outside in the weekends' to 'go out on weekends'. Complete the trailing clause by specifying why (e.g., 'more comfortable'). This fixes preposition use and completes the sentence.

× Well, most of the time I choose black color because it it's appropriate for for my work and in the weekends I I choose different colors for relaxing and going out.

✓ Well, most of the time I choose black because it is appropriate for my work, and on weekends I choose different colors for relaxing and going out.

Do not say 'black color'—use 'black'. Remove duplicate 'it' and duplicate 'for'. Use 'on weekends' not 'in the weekends'. Remove duplicated 'I'. These changes correct adjective/noun usage and preposition errors.