Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be clearer and more natural. Start with a concise topic sentence, correct vocabulary (e.g. “bodycon” or “well-fitted” instead of “body safe”), avoid filler words, and give one or two specific supporting details. Keep it under 5 sentences.

例: I prefer wearing Western-style, well-fitted formal clothes because they make me feel confident and elegant. For example, I often choose a tailored dress or blazer when I go to restaurants because they look polished and comfortable.

提案: Reduce hesitations and repetition. Give a clear direct answer, then support with a specific reason and an example. Use linking words like “because” or “so” to connect ideas.

例: I usually prefer smart clothes because they boost my confidence and energy. For instance, wearing an elegant dress or a blazer to work helps me feel more professional and motivated.

提案: Use correct vocabulary and simpler sentence structure. If you mean “T-shirts,” say that. Answer directly, then add a brief reason or example. Avoid grammatical errors and plural agreement mistakes.

例: Yes. I usually wear T-shirts at home because they are loose and comfortable. For example, I have several cotton T-shirts that I wear for relaxing and doing household chores.

提案: Make the response grammatical and concise. Start with a clear statement about how much time you spend, then explain why with a specific detail. Avoid repeated phrases and incorrect tense/word order.

例: Yes, I spend quite a long time choosing clothes because I am picky and want items that fit well and suit my style. For example, I often try on several outfits before buying to make sure the cut and color are right.

提案: Answer directly and give a clear contrast between weekdays and weekends. Use linking words like “but” or “however” and provide a specific example of each style to support your answer.

例: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear smart, professional clothes like blouses and trousers for work, but at the weekend I prefer casual outfits such as jeans and a T-shirt because I want to relax.

提案: Be precise and natural. Start directly with your preference, explain why, and give a brief example of how you wear those colours. Correct awkward phrasing like “I don't like colours” to “I prefer neutral colours.”

例: I prefer neutral colours, mostly black and white, because they look elegant and versatile. For example, I often wear a black blazer or a white shirt because they are easy to match and always smart.

× I'd like to wear western dress, mostly formal, umm body safe dress which make me classic and sick and also give me confident.

✓ I'd like to wear western dresses, mostly formal, modest dresses that make me look classic and chic and also give me confidence.

Errors: missing plural form 'dresses', incorrect article use before adjectives, wrong adjective 'body safe' and 'sick' (word choice), missing 'look' before 'classic', and 'confident' should be the noun 'confidence'. Suggestion: use plural for general preference, choose appropriate adjectives ('modest', 'chic'), include verbs like 'look' for appearance, and use the noun form 'confidence'.

× And I prefer to wear formal dresses in restaurant.

✓ And I prefer to wear formal dresses in restaurants.

Error: singular 'restaurant' used with a general statement; use plural 'restaurants' or add an article 'the' for a specific restaurant. Suggestion: use plural when speaking generally about locations or add an article if referring to a specific place.

× I usually prefer to wear smart clothes because when I wear something, uh, attractive, like uh, classic elegant dresses, uh, which make me give some more confident and make me feel more active, which I love.

✓ I usually prefer to wear smart clothes because when I wear attractive, classic, elegant dresses they give me more confidence and make me feel more energetic, which I love.

Errors: unnecessary relative pronoun 'which' and wrong verb phrase 'make me give some more confident'. Use 'they give me more confidence' (subject-verb agreement and correct noun). Also replace 'active' with 'energetic' for natural collocation. Suggestion: remove extra filler words and use clear subject-verb structures.

× Is usually when I'm at home I like to wear Tissot which make me feel more comfortable and it's give me more loose and something really comfortable which we prefer to wear when we are stay at home.

✓ Usually when I'm at home I like to wear T-shirts which make me feel more comfortable and loose; they are the kind of clothes we prefer to wear when we stay at home.

Errors: 'Is usually' should be 'Usually'; 'Tissot' likely intended 'T-shirts'; subject-verb agreement 'which make' should be 'which make' only if plural subject (T-shirts) — corrected accordingly; 'it's give' incorrect auxiliary and verb; 'we are stay at home' incorrect verb form. Suggestion: start with 'Usually', use correct item name, ensure subject-verb agreement, and use correct verb forms ('they are').

× It is of course I'm so much choosy in clothes because I don't like easily everything and I saw I saw thing for so long to find out the one and it's make me so much time to take.

✓ Of course I'm very choosy about clothes because I don't like most things easily, and I look at items for a long time to find the right one, which takes me a lot of time.

Errors: awkward structure 'It is of course I'm so much choosy' and incorrect preposition 'in clothes' should be 'about clothes'; repetition 'I saw I saw' and wrong tense 'saw'; 'it's make me so much time to take' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: use natural adverbs ('very choosy'), correct prepositions, use present tense verbs for habits ('look at'), and a clear relative clause ('which takes me a lot of time').

× Uh, yes, every day is a different day. So I like to dress up differently in every day. It's, uh, depending on our mood. Uh, it's depending on my mood to wear what kind of dress, uh, going, uh, for me and I choose that.

✓ Yes, every day is different, so I like to dress differently each day. It depends on my mood which kind of clothes I wear, and I choose accordingly.

Errors: redundant 'every day is a different day', incorrect 'in every day' should be 'each day', incorrect pronoun 'our mood' when referring to personal preference should be 'my mood', and awkward passive 'it's depending' should be 'it depends'. Suggestion: simplify sentences, use correct pronouns for personal statements, and use 'depends' for habitual present.

× Mostly I don't like colours because I only for her black clothes or white clothes.

✓ Mostly I don't like bright colours; I usually wear only black or white clothes.

Errors: 'only for her' is meaningless and incorrect; word order and quantifier use wrong. Suggestion: state preference clearly: 'I usually wear only black or white' and specify 'bright colours' if contrast intended.

× I prefer neutral colours which make me look more bored and elegant.

✓ I prefer neutral colours which make me look more refined and elegant.

Error: 'bored' is incorrect adjective for appearance; likely intended 'bolder' or 'calmer' but 'refined' fits 'neutral colours'. Suggestion: choose adjectives that correctly describe appearance; 'bored' describes a feeling, not a look.

× So I'm not going for colour, I'm just minimal.

✓ So I'm not into colours; I'm just minimalistic.

Errors: 'not going for colour' is colloquial but awkward; punctuation should separate clauses; 'minimal' as noun is incorrect — use 'minimalistic' or 'minimalist' to describe style. Suggestion: use 'into' to express preference and an adjective for style.