Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. “I usually wear comfortable clothes.”), avoid fillers like “uh”, and give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Keep to 2–4 short sentences and correct small grammar errors (e.g. “they suit my everyday activities” rather than “they switch my everyday activities”).

例: I usually wear comfortable clothes, such as T-shirts and a light jacket. They suit my everyday activities because they allow me to move easily, for example when I run or go to training.

提案: Give a clear opinion first (“I prefer casual clothes”), then explain why with specific reasons and one example. Reduce repetition and correct word choice (e.g. “jeans” and “sweater”). Use linking words like “because” or “for example.”

例: I prefer casual clothes because they are more comfortable. For example, I often wear a soft sweater and jeans with trainers, since this combination is relaxing and practical for daily activities.

提案: Answer directly and avoid repetition. State a clear reason and one specific situation where you wear T-shirts. Use correct verbs and phrasing (e.g. “they keep me cool and allow easy movement”).

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable. I wear them every day for casual outings and when I exercise, since they keep me cool and allow me to move easily.

提案: Keep the answer relevant to the question: say how much time you spend and why. Avoid unrelated personal details about family and finance. Use one reason and a brief example. Correct grammar (e.g. “I usually spend a short time choosing clothes because I know what I like”).

例: No, I don’t spend a lot of time choosing clothes. I usually decide quickly because I already know what I like and I prefer simple, comfortable outfits.

提案: Give a clear contrast between weekdays and weekends using linking words like “on weekdays” and “on weekends.” Provide specific styles for each and a reason for the difference. Avoid repetition.

例: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear smart-casual clothes, such as shirts and chinos, because I go to work or study. On weekends I prefer trainers and casual outfits for running errands or meeting friends.

提案: State your preferred colours clearly and give a concise reason. Avoid irrelevant personal information unless it answers the question. Use correct phrasing (e.g. “dark colours hide stains and are practical”). Limit to two or three sentences.

例: I prefer dark colours like black because they are practical and hide stains, which is helpful for everyday wear. I also sometimes wear pink when I want a brighter look.

× I prefer uh, wearing comfortable T-shirts or jacket and uh, because uh, they switch my everyday activities and I easy to move and run to the training.

✓ I prefer wearing comfortable T-shirts or a jacket because they suit my everyday activities and make it easy for me to move and run during training.

The sentence had issues with verb+ing form and other constructions. 'Prefer wearing' is acceptable; added article 'a' before 'jacket' (article error) and changed 'switch' to 'suit' (wrong verb). 'I easy to move' is ungrammatical: corrected to 'make it easy for me to move', using a causative structure and appropriate infinitive. Ensure verbs agree with phrasing and include necessary articles. Note: This correction addresses verb+ing usage and related wording to make the sentence grammatical and clear.

× OK, I prefer wearing comfortable comfortable T-shirt or trainers casual clothes.

✓ OK, I prefer wearing comfortable T-shirts or trainers (casual clothes).

Use plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally and include 'trainers' as plural. The article 'a' is not needed when listing general items. Also removed duplicated 'comfortable' and reordered words to 'trainers (casual clothes)' for clarity. This corrects article and number usage.

× I'm not. I don't like it because the casual cook, casual classic clothes and the so few no relaxing.

✓ I don't like smart or formal clothes because they feel restrictive and are not very comfortable.

Original sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect words ('cook', 'so few no relaxing'). Rewrote to a clear sentence matching intended meaning: negative preference for formal clothes because they are restrictive. This fixes sentence structure and word choice errors.

× For example, I often choose genes of soft sweeter.

✓ For example, I often choose jeans made of soft sweater-like material.

Incorrect nouns and prepositions: 'genes' should be 'jeans'; 'of soft sweeter' is wrong—use 'made of' and correct noun 'sweater' or 'sweater-like material'. This fixes pronoun/noun usage and prepositional phrase.

× Hey, yes, I like wearing T-shirts because there is a comfortable, uh, clothes and I.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable clothes.

'There is' is unnecessary and incorrect with plural 'clothes'. Use 'they are' to refer to T-shirts and match plural agreement. This addresses 'there be' misuse and subject-verb agreement.

× I often wear T-shirt and every day and is wearing so hot So hot for casual outing and exercise since they keep me cool and low easy movement.

✓ I often wear T-shirts every day; they are great for casual outings and exercise because they keep me cool and allow easy movement.

Corrected tense and plurality: 'T-shirt' to 'T-shirts', removed redundant 'is wearing so hot', and rephrased to 'they are great' and 'allow easy movement'. Fixed awkward phrasing and ensured present tense consistent.

× Yes, I really, I usually spend a short time choosing clothes because I like clothes and my family like clothes because.

✓ Yes, I usually spend only a short time choosing clothes because I like simple outfits, and my family also likes clothes.

Removed filler and fixed tense and article issues. 'Spend a short time' -> 'spend only a short time'; clarified reason and completed the sentence for coherence. Ensures consistent present tense.

× And, uh, my family is so, uh, many rich family.

✓ My family is quite rich.

Original had redundant and incorrect structure. Use concise adjective phrase 'quite rich' to describe family. This corrects wrong pronoun and noun usage.

× My dad's in the work in a bank and, uh, have a business, uh, that closes and the restaurants and the car by.

✓ My dad works in a bank and also owns several businesses, such as a restaurant and a car repair shop.

Original sentence was ungrammatical and vague. Rewrote to convey the likely intended meaning: father's job and businesses. Fixed verb forms ('works'), added articles, and clarified nouns.

× Yes, I usually wear different styles on weekdays because I like and uh OFT often like usually weekends clothes and I prefer smart casual rides and the trainers trainers outfits and then I like it running errands or meeting friends.

✓ Yes, I usually wear different styles on weekdays and prefer smart-casual outfits and trainers on weekends when I am running errands or meeting friends.

Removed redundant words and corrected pronoun/verb forms. Reordered for clarity: 'prefer smart-casual outfits and trainers on weekends' conveys the contrast between weekdays and weekends. This fixes pronoun and sentence structure issues.

× I like prefer wearing black clothes colors and for example and a darker colors also hide the stains before be better, which is practical for everyday use and I like it black clothes and the pink because and I like it. I'm gay.

✓ I prefer wearing black and darker colors because they hide stains and are practical for everyday use; I also like pink. Also, I am gay.

Fixed preposition and word order: 'prefer wearing black and darker colors' is concise. 'Hide the stains before be better' was nonsense; corrected to 'hide stains and are practical'. Separated the personal statement 'I am gay' into a clear sentence. This addresses incorrect prepositions, article usage, and sentence structure.