Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct with a clear topic sentence, correct basic grammar (subject-verb agreement, prepositions), and add one brief specific detail. Use linking words if adding detail. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and avoid filler sounds (uh).

例: I usually choose clothes according to the weather. For example, when it snows I wear a warm, waterproof jacket and a wool sweater underneath to stay warm and dry.

提案: Answer the question directly (choose 'comfortable' or 'smart') and give a short reason or example. Fix sentence completeness and avoid repetition. Use one linking phrase to explain your preference.

例: I prefer comfortable and casual clothes because I work long hours and need to move freely. For instance, I often wear jeans and a soft sweater when I go out or work.

提案: This is a clear direct answer. Improve by adding one specific reason or example and a linking word to connect ideas. Correct minor grammar (plural 'T-shirts'). Keep it concise.

例: Yes, I do. I like wearing T-shirts because they are lightweight and keep me cool in hot weather, so I often choose cotton T-shirts when the temperature rises.

提案: Give a clear yes/no or partial answer, then provide a concise reason with specific details. Correct grammar (I am a woman; I spend a lot of time choosing clothes) and avoid hesitations. Use one linking word to elaborate.

例: Yes, I spend quite a lot of time choosing clothes because I like to coordinate outfits for work and social events. For example, I often try different combinations to match colors and accessories.

× It's depends of weather.

✓ It depends on the weather.

The verb 'depends' should be used with the subject 'it' in simple present; 'it's' (it is) is incorrect here. Also the correct preposition is 'on' not 'of'. Suggestion: use 'It depends on the weather.' to express general present-tense dependence.

× Uh, it's like now the weather is snowing so I wear a jacket like that.

✓ Right now it is snowing, so I am wearing a jacket like that.

Use 'it is snowing' for present continuous weather; 'I wear a jacket' is simple present and implies habitual action. For current action use present continuous 'I am wearing'. Also avoid contraction 'it's' twice; write 'it is' or 'it's'. Suggestion: use present continuous to describe current weather and clothing.

× Yes, in my province I I always.

✓ Yes. In my province, I always wear comfortable clothes.

The original sentence is incomplete and has repetition 'I I'. A full answer needs a verb and object. Based on context, complete the thought: 'I always wear...' Suggestion: form a complete clause with subject + verb + object.

× Yes I do, I like wearing T-shirt because now the weather is so hot.

✓ Yes I do. I like wearing T-shirts because the weather is very hot now.

Use plural 'T-shirts' for general preference or add an article 'a T-shirt' for singular. Also 'the weather' is more natural; 'so hot' is colloquial — 'very hot' is clearer. Suggestion: choose plural for general statements and place time adverb 'now' at end.

× Like me, I'm a women so.

✓ Like me, I'm a woman, so...

The singular subject 'I' must be followed by singular noun 'a woman', not 'a women' (women is plural). Suggestion: use 'a woman' when referring to oneself.

× I'm I'm all we're only lot of time to choosing clothes definitely I don't know.

✓ I spend a lot of time choosing clothes, but I'm not sure why.

The original contains repetitions and incorrect structure: 'we're only' is wrong, 'lot of time to choosing' mixes 'to' with gerund. Correct expression is 'spend a lot of time choosing' or 'take a lot of time to choose'. Suggestion: use 'spend a lot of time choosing' or 'take a lot of time to choose' and remove repetitions.