Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. To improve, respond directly with a clear topic sentence stating the kinds of clothes you prefer, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep answers natural and within 3–4 sentences.

例: I prefer casual, comfortable clothes like jeans and soft knit sweaters. For example, I usually wear a plain T-shirt and jeans when I go out with friends because they are easy to move in and look relaxed. Also, I choose neutral colors so my outfits are simple to match.

提案: Again, the student repeated the question instead of answering. Give a direct preference in the first sentence, then explain why with a specific reason and an example. Use linking words (because, so, for example) to make the response coherent.

例: I prefer comfortable and casual clothes rather than smart clothes because I value ease of movement and comfort. For instance, I often wear chinos and a soft shirt for work-from-home days, so I can stay comfortable while still looking tidy.

提案: The student repeated the question rather than answering. Provide a direct yes/no with a brief explanation and a specific detail or example. Use a linking word to connect your reason to the main sentence.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are versatile and comfortable. For example, I own several cotton T-shirts that I wear for exercise and casual outings, and I often pair them with a jacket when the weather is cooler.

提案: The student repeated the examiner's question instead of giving an answer. State your habit clearly (yes/no), then add a specific reason or typical routine. Use linking words (usually, therefore, because) and keep it concise.

例: No, I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I prefer a simple wardrobe. Usually I pick outfits the night before or stick to go-to combinations, which saves me time in the morning.

× Do you prefer to wear comfortable and usual clothes or smart clothes?

✓ Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?

The student used 'usual' where 'casual' is the more appropriate adjective for clothing style. This is an incorrect use of adjectives (type 13). 'Usual' means 'normal' or 'habitual' and does not specifically describe informal clothing; 'casual' correctly describes comfortable, informal attire. Suggestion: use 'casual' when contrasting informal clothes with smart/formal clothes.