Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Clarify and simplify your response. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “I prefer comfortable clothes.”), then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid unclear words (e.g., “red” seems out of place) and grammatical errors (article use, verb forms, and pronouns). Keep it to 2–4 concise sentences.

例: I prefer comfortable clothes because they allow me to move freely and feel relaxed. For example, when I wear soft jeans or a loose sweater, I don’t feel embarrassed or self-conscious at social events. Therefore I usually choose comfort over style for everyday outings.

提案: Give a direct answer first and then support it with a clear reason and a short example. Use linking words like ‘because’ and ‘so’ correctly. Fix grammar: use proper comparative expressions and complete clauses (e.g., “rather than” followed by a clause). Keep sentences concise and focused.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes because they make it easier to do activities. For instance, when I wear trainers and a hoodie I can walk and run without worrying about my outfit being restrictive.

提案: Answer directly and add one or two specific supporting points with linking words. Use correct noun forms and verb agreement, and avoid repetition. Mention a concrete example of a T‑shirt style or situation to make your answer more specific.

例: Yes, I love wearing T‑shirts because they are comfortable and versatile. For example, a plain cotton T‑shirt is great for exercising, while a graphic T‑shirt with a unique design works well for casual outings.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence that states how much time you usually spend. Then contrast the normal case with special occasions using linking words like ‘however’ or ‘but’. Correct articles and verb forms (e.g., “an important event,” “I don’t”). Be specific about what you consider when you choose clothes for special events.

例: I usually don’t spend much time choosing clothes, but I take more care for special events. For example, for my graduation I would spend an hour choosing an outfit that looks smart and tidy, making sure the colours match and the clothes are ironed.

× I like to wear a comfortable clothes red compared to fixed or uncomfortable.

✓ I like to wear comfortable clothes rather than tight or uncomfortable ones.

The noun 'clothes' is plural so the adjective 'a' should be removed; 'a comfortable clothes' is incorrect (singular article with plural noun). 'red' seems to be a typo for 'rather'; 'fixed' is incorrect in context and should be 'tight' or 'restrictive'; add 'ones' to avoid repetition and make the comparison clear. Suggestion: match articles and noun number and use appropriate comparative words.

× It will make me embarrassed when and don't confident to get things out with my friends or attend some event.

✓ It makes me embarrassed and not confident to go out with my friends or attend events.

The original sentence has incorrect structure and mixed verb forms. Use present simple 'makes' to match habitual context, replace 'don't confident' with 'not confident', and 'get things out' is incorrect for 'go out'. Use plural 'events' for general meaning. Suggestion: use correct verb forms and common collocations ('go out', 'attend events').

× I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes that smart clothes.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes to smart clothes.

The conjunction 'that' is incorrect here. Use the preposition 'to' when expressing preference 'prefer A to B'. Suggestion: use 'prefer X to Y' structure for comparisons.

× It's because I think comfortable is the most important that made me get carried out the activity easily, rather that if I wear smart clothes, I will be fixed on my.

✓ It's because I think comfort is the most important; it helps me carry out activities easily, whereas if I wear smart clothes, I will feel restricted.

Use the noun 'comfort' rather than the adjective 'comfortable' after 'think'. 'Made me get carried out the activity' is ungrammatical; use 'helps me carry out activities'. 'Rather that' should be 'whereas' or 'rather if', and 'fixed on my' is incorrect—use 'feel restricted'. Suggestion: choose correct noun/verb forms and clearer connectors.

× Yes, I absolutely like to wear T-shirt this because it's comfortable and look simple, but it also can be beautiful and some design will be unique.

✓ Yes, I absolutely like to wear T-shirts because they're comfortable and look simple, but they can also be attractive and some designs are unique.

Use plural 'T-shirts' for general preference and plural agreement 'they're'. 'This' is unnecessary and incorrect here. 'Look' must agree with plural subject, and 'some design will be unique' should be 'some designs are unique'. Suggestion: ensure noun number consistency and subject-verb agreement.

× So I think T-shirt is a good choice, better choice for me to carry out my activity.

✓ So I think T-shirts are a good choice, a better choice for me when carrying out my activities.

Use plural 'T-shirts' for general statements and plural verb 'are'. Add article 'a better choice' and use gerund phrase 'when carrying out my activities' for fluency. Suggestion: match noun number and use natural verbal phrases.

× If I attend a important event such as graduate graduation anniversary, I will take some time on choosing my clothes.

✓ If I attend an important event such as a graduation or anniversary, I will take some time to choose my clothes.

Use 'an' before a vowel sound 'important'. 'Graduate graduation anniversary' is awkward; use 'a graduation or anniversary' or 'my graduation anniversary'. Use 'take time to choose' rather than 'take some time on choosing'. Suggestion: correct articles and use natural noun phrases and infinitive 'to choose'.

× If don't, I won't spend too much time on choosing clothes because I don't think is important.

✓ If not, I won't spend too much time choosing clothes because I don't think it's important.

Subject 'I' is missing after 'If'; use 'If not' or 'If I don't' for clarity. Use 'choosing' without 'on' or use 'spend time choosing'. Include 'it's' contraction for 'it is'. Suggestion: include subject and use correct verb forms and prepositions.

× I just make sure that I am tidy.

✓ I just make sure that I am tidy.

This sentence is grammatically correct but included here to confirm pronoun and verb usage. 'I' subject and 'am' verb agree. Suggestion: none needed; sentence is acceptable though 'keep myself tidy' is an alternative.