Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid hesitation and incorrect word forms, and provide one specific supporting detail. Use simple linking words if needed.

例: I prefer comfortable clothes. For example, I usually wear soft cotton shirts and loose trousers because they allow me to move freely and feel relaxed throughout the day.

提案: Answer the question directly (choose one option) and give a clear reason with a specific example. Avoid double negatives and repeated phrases, and use a linking word to connect reason to preference.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes because I work in a relaxed environment. For instance, I usually wear jeans and a simple shirt to the office because they are practical and comfortable.

提案: Good content and specific cultural detail. Make the answer more fluent by removing fillers, using stronger linking words, and keeping it within 2–4 sentences. Clarify the point about 'different perspective' with a brief reason or example.

例: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and look modern. For example, in my region most people wear formal shirts, so when I wear a T-shirt I feel more casual and expressive.

提案: Organize your answer: start with a direct statement about how much time you spend, then list 2–3 specific criteria using linking words (first, then, finally). Reduce hesitations and incorrect verb forms.

例: I don't spend much time choosing clothes. When I shop, I first consider the material and comfort, then the pattern and color, and finally the price, because I want clothes that feel good, look attractive, and are affordable.

× I do wear clothes which is comfortable to me.

✓ I wear clothes that are comfortable for me.

The relative pronoun 'which' is not appropriate for people/objects in this context and 'that' is better; also 'clothes' is plural so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'; use 'for me' rather than 'to me' to express suitability.

× Normally I'm not a fascinated person.

✓ Normally I'm not a fashionable person.

'Fascinated' is a past participle meaning 'interested'; the intended meaning is 'fashionable' (interested in fashion). Use the adjective 'fashionable' to convey that meaning.

× Clothes are important to us because it gives us a confident.

✓ Clothes are important to us because they give us confidence.

Subject 'clothes' is plural so use 'they give' not 'it gives'; 'confident' is an adjective, but the noun 'confidence' is required here.

× Yes, as I mentioned earlier, I wear comfortable which suits me.

✓ Yes, as I mentioned earlier, I wear comfortable clothes that suit me.

The word 'comfortable' needs a noun 'clothes' after it; 'which' should be 'that' and the verb must agree with plural 'clothes' so 'suit' not 'suits'.

× I'm not a person who was not fashion it and moreover I do not.

✓ I'm not a very fashionable person, and I don't follow fashion closely.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear: 'was not fashion it' is incorrect. Use 'fashionable' to describe a person and 'follow fashion' or 'keep up with fashion' to express not paying attention to fashion; use appropriate tense and negation 'I don't'.

× I make myself simple and do not concentrate more on clothing.

✓ I keep my style simple and don't focus much on clothing.

'Make myself simple' is awkward; use 'keep my style simple'. 'Do not concentrate more on' is unnatural; use 'don't focus much on'.

× Yes, I love to wear T-shirt because it is comfortable and moreover uh it looks attractive and gives a different perspective to the people because in our state people do wear only shirts and quite often people avoid T-shirts but I prefer to wear T-shirts.

✓ Yes, I love to wear T-shirts because they are comfortable, look attractive, and give a different impression to people. In our state people usually wear only shirts and often avoid T-shirts, but I prefer to wear T-shirts.

Use plural 'T-shirts' to match general statement and plural verbs 'they are'; 'perspective to the people' is awkward—'impression to people' or 'give a different impression' is better. Break long sentence into clearer parts and use 'usually' and 'often' appropriately.

× Now I won't spend much time in spending, uh, in choosing the clothes, umm, I prefix, uh, my type of clothes.

✓ Now I don't spend much time choosing clothes; I decide what type of clothes I prefer beforehand.

'Won't' implies future but speaker means present habit so use 'don't'; 'spend much time in spending' is redundant—'spend much time choosing' is correct. 'I prefix' is wrong; intended verb is 'prefer' and the structure 'decide/prefer beforehand' clarifies meaning.

× If I'm going to buy, I choose the pattern, the color and the, uh, cloth material and the, finally the price.

✓ When I'm going to buy clothes, I choose the pattern, the color, the fabric, and finally the price.

Use 'when' instead of 'if' for a typical action and 'fabric' is more natural than 'cloth material'; order and commas improved; 'finally the price' repositioned for clarity.

× So these are the criteria for me. I choose everywhere It feels if I, it feels, uh, comfortable and looks attractive.

✓ These are my criteria. I choose clothes that feel comfortable and look attractive wherever I find them.

Original sentence is disfluent and ungrammatical. Combine ideas into clear sentences: 'These are my criteria' and 'I choose clothes that feel comfortable and look attractive wherever I find them.' Use relative clause 'that feel' to modify 'clothes' and correct word order.