Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cần sửa ngữ pháp, số ít/ số nhiều và phát triển câu rõ ràng hơn. Tránh lỗi như "it make" → phải là "they make"; thêm linking để mở rộng phần giải thích (ví dụ: vì sao cảm thấy thoải mái và đẹp). Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu tự nhiên.

例: I like wearing T-shirts and short skirts because they make me feel comfortable and attractive. For example, the fabrics are light and easy to move in, so I can walk around all day without feeling restricted.

提案: Cần rõ ràng trong ý và dùng cấu trúc hoàn chỉnh. Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'I prefer comfortable clothes' và không dùng cụm 'rest firmly'). Nên giải thích lý do cụ thể bằng linking words như 'because' hoặc 'so'. Tránh mâu thuẫn (nói 'only wear it for work' khi trước đó nói thích mặc thoải mái).

例: I prefer comfortable clothes because they make me feel younger and are easy to mix and match. I usually wear them at work because my job requires moving around a lot, so comfort is important.

提案: Cần sửa từ vựng sai ('tissues' → 'T-shirts' và 'dessert' → irrelevant) và cấu trúc câu. Tránh thông tin không liên quan. Trả lời trực tiếp với chủ đề, giải thích ngắn gọn và cụ thể. Dùng linking words như 'because' và cung cấp ví dụ đơn giản.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and versatile. For example, I often wear a plain T-shirt with jeans when I go shopping or meet friends on the weekend.

提案: Cần diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp/idiom ('have a hard time using clothes' → 'have a hard time choosing clothes'; 'in everyone eyes' → 'in other people's eyes'). Nên mô tả chi tiết cụ thể về quá trình chọn đồ (ví dụ: thử nhiều món, cân nhắc màu sắc) và giới hạn 2–3 câu.

例: Yes, I do. I often spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I want to look good in other people's eyes; I usually try on several outfits and think about colors and accessories before deciding.

× I like wearing T-shirt and short skirt because it make me feel comfortable and beautiful.

✓ I like wearing T-shirts and a short skirt because they make me feel comfortable and beautiful.

The nouns 'T-shirt' and 'short skirt' need correct singular/plural forms and agreement with the verb. Use 'T-shirts' (plural) if referring generally, and 'a short skirt' (singular) or 'short skirts'. Also the verb must agree with the plural subject 'T-shirts and a short skirt' -> use 'they make'. Suggestion: decide singular or plural consistently and match verb: 'I like wearing T-shirts and short skirts because they make me feel comfortable and beautiful.'

× I like to wear comfortable because they look younger and easy to mix if I rest firmly. I only wear it for work.

✓ I prefer wearing comfortable clothes because they make me look younger and are easy to mix and match. I only wear them for work.

Multiple errors: verb agreement 'they look younger' is okay but 'easy to mix' needs 'easy to mix and match' and 'I only wear it' should match plural 'clothes' -> 'them'. Also 'prefer to wear comfortable' requires a noun: 'comfortable clothes'. 'Make me look' uses correct causative structure. Suggestion: use plural pronouns for 'clothes' and standard phrase 'mix and match'.

× Says I like wearing tissues because it make me feel comfortable and I often choose a dessert for every day.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they make me feel comfortable, and I often choose a different outfit every day.

Several problems: 'Says' is incorrect filler; remove it. 'tissues' is wrong word; use 'T-shirts'. Pronoun 'it make' wrong: plural 'they make'. 'choose a dessert for every day' is nonsensical in clothing context; likely meant 'choose an outfit every day' or 'a different outfit every day'. Suggestion: use correct clothing vocabulary and match plural verbs and pronouns.

× Yes I do, I have a hard time using clothes because I always want to look beautiful in everyone eyes.

✓ Yes, I do. I have a hard time choosing clothes because I always want to look beautiful in everyone's eyes.

'Using clothes' is incorrect collocation; use 'choosing clothes'. 'in everyone eyes' needs possessive: 'in everyone's eyes'. Also run-on sentence: split into two sentences or connect properly. Suggestion: use correct verb collocations and possessive forms: 'in everyone's eyes'.