Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Reduce hesitations and filler words, give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Keep answers concise (max 5 sentences) and use linking words to contrast casual and professional clothing.

例: I prefer comfortable clothes most of the time, especially breathable fabrics like cotton or linen because they keep me cool. However, when I’m at the office I wear professional attire, such as a shirt and tailored trousers, to look presentable.

提案: Finish your sentence and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then use a linking phrase to contrast with work clothing. Be specific about situations and give one short reason.

例: My first preference is casual and comfortable clothes because I find them more practical for daily activities like shopping or meeting friends. On the other hand, for work I wear smart clothes to maintain a professional image.

提案: Avoid exaggerated or informal phrases like “literally obsessed” in a formal test. Provide a concise reason and a specific example of the type of T-shirt you prefer, using linking words for clarity.

例: Yes, I enjoy wearing T-shirts because they are very comfortable. For example, I often choose graphic tees with simple designs or slogans when I go out with friends because they are casual but expressive.

提案: Be more fluent and use clear sequence linking words. Give one or two brief specific practices (e.g., planning outfits, using a capsule wardrobe) to illustrate. Avoid small grammatical errors and keep within 3–4 sentences.

例: I don’t spend much time choosing clothes; usually I pick something quickly. For work I plan my outfit the night before, but for casual outings I just grab something comfortable that looks neat.

× I like most of the time to wear uh, comfortable clothes such as umm, cotton or uh, linen fabric which are breathable to my skin.

✓ I like to wear comfortable clothes most of the time, such as cotton or linen, which are breathable against my skin.

The original sentence misorders 'most of the time' and uses 'fabric' awkwardly and 'breathable to my skin' which is unnatural. Move the adverbial phrase 'most of the time' after the verb phrase for natural word order, use plural/uncountable forms correctly ('cotton' and 'linen' without 'fabric'), and use 'breathable against my skin' or simply 'breathable' to describe the fabric. Also remove filler words for clarity.

× Otherwise, uh, most uh, whenever I am in office I would be wearing the professional attire.

✓ Whenever I am in the office, I wear professional attire.

The phrase 'in office' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Would be wearing' is an incorrect modality here; simple present 'I wear' is appropriate for habitual actions. Also 'the professional attire' should be 'professional attire' or 'the professional attire' with clearer context; here 'professional attire' is natural.

× If you ask my first preference, so definitely it is a casual and comfortable clothes as uh, whenever I am at home or going somewhere out for shopping or dining outside, I always wear comfortable clothes.

✓ If you ask for my first preference, it is definitely casual and comfortable clothing; whenever I am at home or going out shopping or dining, I always wear comfortable clothes.

Use 'ask for my preference' not 'ask my preference'. 'A casual and comfortable clothes' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'casual and comfortable clothing' or 'casual and comfortable clothes'. Remove redundant fillers and correct 'going somewhere out for shopping' to 'going out shopping' or 'going out to shop'. Maintain parallel structure.

× On the other hand, whenever I am in my professional life, I.

✓ On the other hand, in my professional life I wear smart clothes.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb/complement. Provide a complete clause describing the habitual action in professional life. 'In my professional life, I wear smart clothes' is concise and matches context.

× Whether it is a graphic printer or some kind of messages uh given to uh in the T-shirt, I love to wear it because they are much more umm, comfortable as compared to any other outfit.

✓ Whether it is a graphic print or some kind of message printed on a T-shirt, I love to wear them because they are much more comfortable than other outfits.

Use 'graphic print' not 'graphic printer'. 'Message' should be singular or plural consistently and 'printed on a T-shirt' clarifies meaning. 'I love to wear it' mismatches plural 'T-shirts' so use 'them'. Use 'more comfortable than' for comparisons, not 'as compared to'. Remove fillers and correct agreement.

× Personally speaking, I don't spend lot of time in choosing any type of clothes.

✓ Personally, I don't spend a lot of time choosing any type of clothes.

Missing article 'a' before 'lot'. 'In choosing' is wordy; simply 'choosing' is natural. 'Personally speaking' can be shortened to 'Personally' for conciseness.

× If I have to go for my professional work, then definitely I do it in an advance a night before and then in the morning wake up and then go.

✓ If I have professional work the next day, I definitely prepare in advance the night before and then wake up and go in the morning.

'In an advance a night before' is ungrammatical; use 'in advance the night before' or 'the night before'. Reorder for clarity: mention preparing 'in advance' and correct verb forms 'wake up and go'. Use simple present for habitual arrangements about future events.

× When I have to go out just I see whatever is good.

✓ When I have to go out, I just choose whatever looks good.

Word order 'just I see' is incorrect; use 'I just choose' or 'I just pick'. 'Whatever is good' is vague; 'whatever looks good' is clearer and more natural.