Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail. Avoid repetition and fix grammar (e.g., “I’m comfortable in that type of clothing”). Use one or two linking words if you add a reason.

例: I usually wear simple clothes, like a plain shirt and jeans. Because they are comfortable and easy to move in, I choose them for most daily activities.

提案: Give a clear opinion sentence and one specific reason. Avoid hesitations and repeated fragments. Use linking words (because, so) and correct verb forms (e.g., “they give me good vibes”).

例: I prefer casual clothes because they give me good vibes and help me feel relaxed. For example, when I wear jeans and a T‑shirt I can focus better and feel more confident.

提案: This answer is mostly clear but can be tightened: state the preference, give one specific reason and an example. Fix small grammar issues (e.g., “they give me a relaxed, comfortable feeling”).

例: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts and I wear them every day because they are relaxed and comfortable. For example, I often choose a red T‑shirt when I go out because it brightens my mood.

提案: Give a direct answer first, then one clear reason with a linking word. Remove repetitions and correct grammar (e.g., “I don’t spend much time choosing clothes because I usually wear simple outfits”).

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I usually wear simple outfits like a shirt and jeans. Therefore I only take a minute to decide what to wear in the morning.

× Well, I usually wear the simple clothes, simple shirt and jeans and I will.

✓ Well, I usually wear simple clothes: a simple shirt and jeans.

The article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'simple clothes' and 'simple shirt'. With general plural nouns like 'simple clothes' no article is needed. For a single countable noun 'shirt' use an indefinite article 'a'. Also streamline the sentence and remove the extraneous 'and I will'. Suggestion: say 'I usually wear simple clothes' and specify items with 'a'.

× I'm comfort in that, in that type of clothes.

✓ I'm comfortable in that type of clothes.

The adjective 'comfort' is a noun; the correct adjective is 'comfortable'. Also remove the repeated phrase 'in that'. Use 'comfortable in that type of clothes' to express feeling at ease. Suggestion: learn common adjective forms (comfortable, interested, surprised).

× I mostly prefer to wear the casual clothes.

✓ I mostly prefer to wear casual clothes.

When speaking about clothing in general, omit the definite article 'the'. 'Casual clothes' is a general plural noun phrase and does not require 'the'. Keep the adverb order 'mostly prefer to'.

× It give me the good good vibes and it would be be it should, it would be me the good and accurate with the and this is the gate of that.

✓ It gives me good vibes and makes me feel comfortable and confident.

Subject-verb agreement: 'it' requires the verb 'gives' (third person singular). The original contains many unclear and duplicated fragments; condense to a clear idea: 'It gives me good vibes' and 'makes me feel comfortable and confident.' Avoid duplicated words and unfinished clauses. Suggestion: identify the main subject and use a single clear verb phrase.

× Indeed I like wearing T-shirts and I wear the T-shirts daily and it give me the relax and comfortable feel and I mostly like the red colour T-shirts.

✓ Indeed, I like wearing T-shirts and I wear them daily; they give me a relaxed and comfortable feeling, and I mostly like red T-shirts.

Several issues: use pronoun 'them' to avoid repeating 'T-shirts'. 'The T-shirts' is unnecessary; use plural without article. 'It give' is wrong: use 'they give' (agreement) and adjective 'relaxed' or noun 'a relaxed feeling'. Use 'red T-shirts' rather than 'red colour T-shirts'. Add commas and a semicolon for clarity.

× No, I don't spend too much time to choosing the right clothes and where I I can only wear the simple clothes.

✓ No, I don't spend too much time choosing the right clothes; I can only wear simple clothes.

After 'spend time' use the gerund 'choosing', not 'to choosing'. Remove duplicate 'I' and change 'the simple clothes' to 'simple clothes' when speaking generally. Use a semicolon or conjunction to connect the related ideas.

× So that's why I can't get so many time and I only choose the clothes.

✓ So that's why I don't have much time, and I only choose a few items of clothing.

'Can't get so many time' is ungrammatical; use 'don't have much time' or 'don't have a lot of time'. 'I only choose the clothes' is vague; better 'I only choose a few items of clothing'. Adjust article and count noun usage accordingly.