Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with one clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct small grammar/word-choice errors (e.g., “used for running” → “for running”).

例: I usually wear jeans and T-shirts because they are comfortable for daily life. For example, the relaxed fit lets me move easily when I walk or go for a run, and the simple style makes it quick to dress in the morning.

提案: This answer is clear and relevant but can be improved by avoiding small grammatical errors and adding a brief contrast phrase. Use a linking word to connect reason and example.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes because they suit my everyday activities. For instance, loose jeans and a T-shirt allow me to move freely when I walk or exercise.

提案: Remove fillers (e.g., “uh”) and correct word choice (“orbits” → “outfits”). Use one clear topic sentence and one specific example with a linking word. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and versatile. For example, a T-shirt with jeans makes it easy for me to go for a run or take a long walk.

提案: Good direct answer, but fix small grammar issues and improve coherence. Use a linking word to explain how a simple wardrobe saves time and give a short specific detail.

例: Not really. I keep my wardrobe simple, so I can choose outfits quickly in the morning. For example, I have a few casual combinations of jeans and T-shirts that I rotate, which saves me time.

× I feel most comfortable in jeans and T-shirt.

✓ I feel most comfortable in jeans and T-shirts.

Use plural for countable clothing when speaking generally. 'T-shirt' should be plural to match 'jeans' and indicate any T-shirt in general. Suggestion: Use 'T-shirts' when referring to the garment in general.

× I like simple, simple and relaxed outfits.

✓ I like simple and relaxed outfits.

Redundant repetition of 'simple' creates an adjective error. Remove the duplicate adjective. Suggestion: Use each adjective once and separate with a comma if there are three or more.

× It's easy to wear and it can be used for the running.

✓ They are easy to wear and I can use them for running.

Mismatch of subject and reference pronouns and incorrect article 'the' before 'running'. 'Running' as an activity does not need 'the'. Also use plural pronouns to refer to 'jeans and T-shirts'. Suggestion: Keep subject-pronoun agreement and avoid 'the' before general activities.

× I feel most comfortable wearing jeans and T-shirt because casual clothes suits my everyday activities.

✓ I feel most comfortable wearing jeans and T-shirts because casual clothes suit my everyday activities.

Subject 'casual clothes' is plural so verb should be 'suit' not 'suits'. Also 'T-shirt' should be plural for general statement. Suggestion: Match verb number to plural subjects.

× I prefer simple and relaxed outfits since they are easy to move and ideal for walking and running or exercise.

✓ I prefer simple and relaxed outfits since they make it easy to move and are ideal for walking, running, or exercising.

Awkward phrasing 'they are easy to move' needs a clearer expression: 'they make it easy to move'. Use parallel gerund forms 'walking, running, or exercising' for consistency. Suggestion: Use verbs/gerunds consistently and ensure clarity of subject-action relationship.

× I feel most comfortable wearing jeans and T-shirt because casual orbits suits my everyday activities.

✓ I feel most comfortable wearing jeans and T-shirts because casual outfits suit my everyday activities.

Multiple errors: 'T-shirt' should be plural; 'orbits' is a misspelling of 'outfits'; 'suits' should be 'suit' for plural subject. Correct all to match plural forms. Suggestion: Proofread for typos and ensure plural forms for general statements.

× I like uh, simple and relaxed outfit.

✓ I like simple and relaxed outfits.

'Uh' is filler and should be removed in written answers; 'outfit' should be plural to match general preference. Also keep register appropriate for test responses. Suggestion: Avoid fillers in formal answers and use plural for general statements.

× For example, I can run or I can walk or I can do exercise.

✓ For example, I can run, walk, or exercise.

Sentence is wordy and repetitive. Combine verbs in parallel structure and use 'exercise' without 'do' or use 'do exercise' -> better 'exercise'. Suggestion: Use parallel verb forms and concise phrasing.

× Not really. I don't spend a great deal of time of choosing clothes.

✓ Not really. I don't spend a great deal of time choosing clothes.

The phrase 'spend time' does not take 'of' before the gerund. Remove 'of' to correct the prepositional structure. Suggestion: Use 'spend time doing something' without 'of'.

× I try to make my wardrobe simple, which is easily for me to save my time.

✓ I try to keep my wardrobe simple, which makes it easy for me to save time.

Awkward adjective/adverb use: 'easily for me to save my time' is incorrect. Use 'makes it easy for me to save time' and 'keep' is more natural than 'make' for maintaining a wardrobe. Suggestion: Use 'make it easy for someone to' structure and omit unnecessary articles like 'my' before 'time' in this context.