Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more specific and use natural, appropriate vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 supporting details with linking words. Avoid awkward or potentially inappropriate words like “sexy” unless context suits it; use “smart” or “stylish” instead.

例: I usually prefer smart and stylish clothes. For example, I like well-fitted dresses and blouses because they make me feel confident, and I avoid overly casual or sloppy outfits for social occasions.

提案: Answer directly and clearly. Use a topic sentence stating your preference, then explain why with a specific reason. Watch grammar (subject–verb agreement) and choose logical phrasing (e.g., “wear smart clothes” not “wears more clothes”).

例: I prefer to wear smart clothes because dressing neatly makes me feel more motivated and confident at work. For instance, when I wear a blazer and smart trousers I focus better and get more done.

提案: This is a clear, concise answer but can be improved by a smoother structure and a linking phrase. Use singular/plural correctly and add a brief explanation or example.

例: It depends on the activity. For example, I like wearing T-shirts when I go to the gym because they are comfortable and let me move freely, but I wouldn’t wear them to a formal meeting.

提案: Good structure and relevant details. Improve by using more formal language (avoid “gonna”), add a linking phrase, and correct minor grammar (e.g., “a fancy restaurant,” “choose my outfit/dress”).

例: It depends on the occasion. If I’m going to a fancy restaurant I usually take time to choose my outfit to look presentable; however, for hiking or a park visit I prefer a gym outfit because it’s practical and comfortable.

× I don't like lazy clothes, I like fancy dress, sexy dress or something like that.

✓ I don't like lazy clothes; I like fancy dresses, sexy dresses, or something like that.

The error is using singular 'dress' where plural 'dresses' is needed to match the plural noun 'clothes' and the list format. Use plural nouns when referring to types of clothes in general. Also use a semicolon or conjunction to separate independent clauses for clarity. Improve by matching number: 'fancy dresses' and 'sexy dresses'.

× I definitely prefer to wears more clothes, it makes me feel motivated.

✓ I definitely prefer to wear more clothes; it makes me feel motivated.

The verb 'prefer' is followed by the base form 'to wear', not 'to wears'. 'Wears' is third person singular present tense and is incorrect after 'to'. Also the two independent clauses should be separated with a semicolon or a coordinating conjunction. Improve by using infinitive 'to wear' and proper clause separation.

× On occasion if I go to the gym I like to wear T-shirt.

✓ On occasion, if I go to the gym, I like to wear a T-shirt.

The sentence lacks the article 'a' before 'T-shirt'. Also commas are needed to set off the introductory phrase. Ensure countable nouns have correct articles: 'a T-shirt'.

× If I go to restaurant, fancy restaurant, I'll take some time to choose my dress.

✓ If I go to a restaurant, a fancy restaurant, I'll take some time to choose my outfit.

The noun 'restaurant' is countable and requires the article 'a'. Repetition 'choose my dress' is awkward when referring to clothing choices; use 'choose my outfit' for natural phrasing. Also include commas for the appositive 'a fancy restaurant'.

× If I go to the park or hiking, I'm gonna wear gym outfit.

✓ If I go to the park or go hiking, I'm going to wear a gym outfit.

Parallel structure error: 'go to the park or hiking' mixes forms; make them parallel by 'go to the park or go hiking' or 'go to the park or go hiking'. Also replace informal 'gonna' with 'going to' and add article 'a' before 'gym outfit'. Use 'gym outfit' or 'gym clothes' with appropriate article. Improve by keeping verbs parallel and using standard future form.