Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は内容が伝わりますが、文法ミスや冗長さがあり、文をはっきりと構成する必要があります。まず主題文（I like casual clothes.）で直接答え、次に理由を1〜2文で簡潔に述べてください。動詞の時制と語形（doing → do／want to more flexible → want a more flexible）が重要です。接続詞（because, so）を適切に使い、冗長なフレーズを省きましょう。具体例（which activitiesやどんな場面で着るか）を1つ加えるとよいです。

例: I like casual clothes. Because I often play sports like soccer and basketball after school, I prefer outfits that are flexible and supportive. For example, I usually wear athletic shorts and a breathable T-shirt so I can move easily.

提案: 答えは直接ですが、繰り返しや文法の誤り（So I so comfortable clothes give me a give me more support）があります。まず短い主語文で選択を示し、その後に理由を1文で明確に述べましょう。重複を避け、代わりに接続表現（because, so）を一度だけ使います。具体的な語彙（supportive, breathable, lightweight）を使うと良い印象を与えます。

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes. Because I often play soccer and basketball after school, I choose supportive and breathable clothes that let me move easily.

提案: 理由は明確ですが、言い換えやフィラー（umm）を減らして流暢さを改善しましょう。主題文の後、理由を1文でまとめ、最後に短い具体例か感想で締めます。形容詞の使い方を正しく（hot and humid, easy to move in）し、自然な表現にします。

例: Yes, I do. I like wearing T-shirts because Japan is often hot and humid, so T-shirts are comfortable and easy to move in. For example, I wear a cotton T-shirt when I go out in summer.

提案: 意味は伝わりますが、文法（my clothes is → my clothes are／I don't have to choosing → I don't have to choose）と語順を直す必要があります。まず簡潔な主文で答え、続けて理由を1文にまとめてください。具体性を出すために、服の数や色の理由（ほとんど黒だから合わせやすい、など）を加えると良いです。

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes. I have a small wardrobe and most of my clothes are black, so it's easy to mix and match and I can get dressed quickly.

× I like casual clothes because I usually doing sports with my friends like soccer, basketball in after school so I want to more flexible and supportable outfit is nice.

✓ I like casual clothes because I usually play sports with my friends, like soccer and basketball after school, so I want a more flexible and supportive outfit.

The phrase 'usually doing' incorrectly uses the -ing form; after 'usually' use the base verb 'play' (present simple) to express habitual actions. 'Want to more flexible' is ungrammatical: use 'want a more flexible and supportive outfit' with an article and adjectives. 'Supportable' is the wrong adjective; use 'supportive'. Also add commas for clarity and change word order. Suggestion: use present simple for routines, include necessary articles, and use correct adjective forms.

× I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because I usually play soccer and basketball after school with my friends. So I so comfortable clothes give me a give me more support.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because I usually play soccer and basketball after school with my friends, so comfortable clothes give me more support.

The sentence has redundancy 'So I so' and awkward structure 'give me a give me more support.' Remove duplicate words and the unnecessary 'a'. Use present simple 'give' to state a general truth. Suggestion: proofread to remove repetitions and ensure correct article use (no 'a' before uncountable 'support') and maintain consistent tense.

× I like wearing T-shirts because I live in Japan and Japan is very hot and umm, wet. So wearing T-shirts is comfortable for me and easily moving. It's very nice.

✓ I like wearing T-shirts because I live in Japan and it is very hot and humid, so wearing T-shirts is comfortable for me and allows me to move easily. It's very nice.

'Umm' is a filler; replace with precise word 'humid' rather than 'wet'. 'Easily moving' incorrectly uses -ing; use 'allows me to move easily' or 'helps me move easily'. Also replace repeated 'Japan' with 'it' to avoid redundancy. Suggestion: use precise adjectives and correct verb patterns for clarity.

× I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I don't have a lot of clothes and my clothes is almost black color, so I don't have to choosing clothes.

✓ I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I don't have many clothes and my clothes are almost all black, so I don't have to choose clothes.

'A lot of clothes' is acceptable but 'many clothes' is more natural with countable items; 'my clothes is' is subject-verb agreement error—'clothes' is plural so use 'are'. 'Almost black color' should be 'almost all black' or 'mostly black'. 'Don't have to choosing' incorrectly uses -ing after 'have to'; use base verb 'choose'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement with plural nouns, use correct quantifiers, and use infinitive after 'have to'.