Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the answer grammatically correct, concise, and include a brief supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and use a linking phrase for the reason. Avoid redundancy and keep it within 1–3 sentences.

例: I usually wear casual clothes because they are more comfortable for me. For example, I prefer jeans and a soft sweater when I go out, since they let me move easily and feel relaxed.

提案: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, correct tense and phrasing, and add one concise reason using a linking word (e.g., because, since). Keep it to two sentences maximum and avoid extra filler words.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because most of my daily activities require ease of movement. For instance, casual clothes help me feel relaxed when I commute and run errands.

提案: There are several word choice and grammar errors. Use the correct noun 'T-shirts' and describe why you like them with specific details. Use linking words and keep sentences short and natural. Replace incorrect words (warranty/share/software/loose cards) with correct vocabulary like 'T-shirts', 'soft', 'loose' and 'comfortable'.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are soft and comfortable. For example, I usually pick loose, cotton T-shirts since they are practical and allow me to move freely.

提案: Make the reply grammatically correct and clearer. Use a natural short answer followed by a specific explanation using a linking phrase (e.g., because, so). Correct word order (e.g., 'the first to catch my eye') and vocabulary ('wardrobe' or 'closet').

例: Not really. I usually grab the first shirt that catches my eye in my wardrobe because I prefer to get ready quickly in the morning.

× I normally just wear some casual clothes because I feel that it more comfort to me.

✓ I normally just wear casual clothes because I feel that they are more comfortable for me.

The sentence uses incorrect pronoun/reference and missing verb form: 'it' should refer to 'clothes' (plural), so use 'they'. 'more comfort' is incorrect; use the adjective 'more comfortable'. Also add 'are' for correct verb agreement and 'for me' is the correct prepositional phrase. Suggestion: Use plural pronoun agreement and correct adjective form (comfortable) and include the linking verb 'are'.

× I would prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because in most of my daily routine and it made me relaxed.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because, in most of my daily routine, they make me feel relaxed.

The original mixes conditional 'would prefer' with present explanation and incorrect tense 'made'. Use present simple 'prefer' and 'make' to describe habitual actions. 'It' incorrectly refers to 'clothes' (plural), so use 'they'. Also use 'feel relaxed' rather than 'made me relaxed'. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent for habitual routines and ensure pronoun agrees with plural noun.

× I like warranty share because they help me feel relaxed during my daily routine.

✓ I like wearing T-shirts because they help me feel relaxed during my daily routine.

'warranty share' appears to be incorrect words; likely intended 'wearing T-shirts'. Correct noun/verb form 'wearing' and specific item 'T-shirts'. 'They' correctly refers to plural 'T-shirts'. Suggestion: Use the gerund 'wearing' and the correct noun for the clothing item.

× For example, I choose software and loose cards that practical and let me move easily.

✓ For example, I choose soft and loose clothes that are practical and let me move easily.

Several word choice errors: 'software' and 'cards' are incorrect; likely 'soft' and 'clothes'. 'that practical' needs the verb 'are' to form 'that are practical'. Use adjectives 'soft' and 'loose' to describe clothes. Suggestion: Use correct vocabulary for clothing and include linking verb 'are' before adjective phrases.

× Not really, I always choose the shirt that the first to entering my eye from my shirt cupboard.

✓ Not really, I always choose the first shirt that catches my eye from my shirt cupboard.

Original has word order and tense problems: 'that the first to entering my eye' is ungrammatical. Use the idiom 'the first shirt that catches my eye' (present simple for habitual action). Remove unnecessary articles and use proper verb 'catches' for 'eye'. Suggestion: Use common expressions like 'catches my eye' and present simple for habitual actions.