Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 문장 구조와 문법을 정확히 고치고 불필요한 반복을 제거하세요. 주제문으로 시작한 다음 이유와 예시를 한두 문장으로 명확히 연결하세요. 예: 'I usually wear jeans because they are very comfortable, but I sometimes wear skirts when I want a more feminine look.'처럼 연결어(because, but, when)를 사용해 자연스럽게 말하세요.

例: I usually wear jeans because they are very comfortable, but I sometimes choose skirts when I want a more feminine look.

提案: 의미 전달은 되지만 문법과 어휘 선택에서 오류가 많습니다. 'prepared to wear' 같은 표현 대신 'prefer'를 사용하고, 이유는 한두 개의 구체적 근거로 정리하세요. 연결어로 이유를 제시하고 결과를 덧붙이세요. 예: 'I prefer comfortable clothes because they help me focus and move naturally when I study.'

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they help me focus and allow me to move naturally when I study at my academy.

提案: 문법(단수·복수)과 어순을 고치고 이유를 더 간결하게 표현하세요. 'because they come in many designs and colors'처럼 자연스러운 표현을 쓰고 예를 하나 덧붙이면 좋습니다.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they come in many designs and colors, so I can wear a different one almost every day.

提案: 시제와 동사구 사용을 바로잡으세요. 평소와 특별한 경우를 대비하여 대조 구조(if/when, but)를 사용해 명확히 표현하세요. 예: 'I don't usually spend much time choosing clothes, but I take longer when I have an important meeting.'

例: I don't usually spend much time choosing my clothes, but I spend more time selecting an outfit when I'm meeting friends or attending an important event.

× I like to wear skirts or jeans.

✓ I like to wear skirts or jeans.

No change needed but note: both 'skirts' and 'jeans' are plural nouns; the sentence is grammatically acceptable. Keep consistent plurality when listing items.

× I usually wear jeans but because it it is very comfortable.

✓ I usually wear jeans because they are very comfortable.

The original has repeated 'it it' and uses singular 'it' to refer to plural 'jeans'. Use the plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'are' to agree with 'jeans'. Also remove the extra 'but' or place conjunction correctly.

× But when I want to become a feminine then I wear a skirt.

✓ But when I want to look more feminine, I wear a skirt.

Use 'look' rather than 'become' to describe appearance; 'feminine' is an adjective so use 'more feminine' for comparative context. Also include a comma before the result clause for clarity.

× Well, I prepared to wear comfortable and casual clothes because it's it is easy to book especially when I go to my Academy then it's very comfortable so I can study with natural my gesture.

✓ Well, I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes because they are easy to move in, especially when I go to my academy; they are very comfortable so I can study naturally and move in a relaxed way.

'Prepared to' is incorrect for habit or preference; use 'prefer'. 'It is easy to book' is wrong meaning; likely 'easy to move in' or 'comfortable to wear'. 'Academy' is fine but not capitalized. Pronoun agreement: use 'they' for 'clothes'. 'natural my gesture' is ungrammatical; use adverb 'naturally' and rephrase to 'move in a relaxed way'.

× Yeah, I like wearing T-shirt because it is many have many design and many color, so I can wear every day another color T-shirts.

✓ Yeah, I like wearing T-shirts because they have many designs and many colors, so I can wear a different color T-shirt every day.

Use plural 'T-shirts' and plural agreement 'they have'. 'Design' and 'color' should be plural. Use 'a different color T-shirt every day' for singular daily item. Ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Umm usually I didn't spend to choosing my clothes but especially when I meet my friends or like having important meeting then I choose think close long time.

✓ Umm, usually I don't spend much time choosing my clothes, but especially when I meet my friends or have an important meeting, I choose my clothes carefully and take longer.

The original mixes past and present. Use present simple 'don't spend' for habitual actions. Correct collocations: 'spend time choosing', 'have an important meeting', 'choose my clothes carefully' and 'take longer' to express spending more time. Remove incorrect 'think close long time'.