Headphones— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make your response direct and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and long awkward phrases.

例: Yes, I often use headphones. I usually wear them at my computer to concentrate while I study, and I also use them to listen to music or watch films because they give better sound and reduce background noise.

提案: Answer directly about the type and explain why. Use correct verb forms and a specific description (e.g. over-ear, in-ear). Keep it concise and coherent with a linking word.

例: I prefer comfortable over-ear headphones because they are softer on my ears and block out noise. If I need something portable, I choose compact in-ear earbuds for convenience.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence and organise supporting details with linking words. Correct small grammar errors and avoid repetition. Mention specific situations and purposes.

例: I use headphones in several situations. For example, I wear them when watching films or listening to music at home, and I also use them at my desk while practising IELTS to focus on listening exercises.

提案: Reply clearly with one or two conditions and use correct grammar. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'when' to make the idea coherent. Avoid filler words and hesitations.

例: I don't wear headphones when I need to hear other people. For example, I avoid them at home when my parents are speaking to me, or when I am walking on a busy street and must stay aware of traffic.

提案: Start with a clear opinion and follow with specific reasons. Fix subject-verb agreement and eliminate repetition. Use linking words to connect opinion and reasons.

例: Yes, I find headphones comfortable, especially for concentrating on study or watching films. Over-ear models are comfortable for long sessions and help reduce distractions, which improves focus.

× Sure, I usually use headphones to listen due to my desk in my computer and I also do use it to listen to music and watch a film.

✓ Sure, I usually use headphones to listen at my desk with my computer, and I also use them to listen to music and watch films.

The original has awkward phrasing and incorrect noun forms. 'to listen due to my desk in my computer' is incorrect preposition and noun order; use 'at my desk with my computer'. 'I also do use it' is redundant and uses singular pronoun 'it' for plural 'headphones'; change to 'I also use them'. Use plural 'films' for general habits. Use present simple for habitual actions.

× To be honest, I'm not really understand it anymore because I don't know more about devices, but I will choose the type which are comfortable for me.

✓ To be honest, I don't really understand them anymore because I don't know much about devices, but I would choose the type that is comfortable for me.

Mixes present continuous with base verb incorrectly: 'I'm not really understand' should be 'I don't really understand' (present simple). 'it' should refer to 'devices' (plural) so use 'them'. 'don't know more about' is unidiomatic; use 'don't know much about'. 'which are comfortable' must agree in number with 'type' (singular), so 'that is comfortable'. Use 'would choose' to sound natural for a hypothetical preference.

× I usually use headphones to watch your films, listen to music or mostly when I do my desk in my computer because I I am practicing IELTS.

✓ I usually use headphones to watch films, listen to music, or mostly when I work at my computer because I am practicing for the IELTS.

'watch your films' is inappropriate; use 'watch films'. 'do my desk in my computer' is incorrect; use 'work at my computer'. Keep present continuous 'I am practicing for the IELTS' for an ongoing activity; include preposition 'for'.

× Sometimes I really don't need headphones anymore because it to allowed for me to hear other people say what? So if I want to hear my mum or my dad say to me I I need to avoid use headphones.

✓ Sometimes I don't need headphones because they make it difficult for me to hear other people. So if I want to hear my mum or my dad, I avoid using headphones.

Pronoun confusion: 'it to allowed for me' is incorrect; use 'they make it difficult for me' where 'they' refers to headphones (plural). Remove filler 'say what?' and redundant repetition. 'I need to avoid use headphones' should be 'I avoid using headphones' or 'I need to avoid using headphones' and use gerund after 'avoid'.

× In my opinion headphones is comfortable for any for who is need to concentrate in in the test or they anything they want to watch.

✓ In my opinion, headphones are comfortable for anyone who needs to concentrate during a test or when they watch something.

Subject-verb agreement and pronoun issues: 'headphones is' should be 'headphones are' (plural). 'any for who is need' should be 'anyone who needs' (use 'anyone' and present simple 'needs'). 'concentrate in in the test' should be 'concentrate during a test'. 'they anything they want to watch' is ungrammatical; use 'when they watch something'.