Music— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response repeats the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct opinion with a topic sentence (e.g., “I prefer happy music.”), then add one or two specific reasons or an example using a linking word (e.g., “because…, for example…”). Keep it natural and under five sentences.

例: I prefer happy music because it lifts my mood and helps me concentrate. For example, upbeat songs with a fast tempo motivate me when I exercise or work.

提案: You both repeated and misheard the question (“shopping” instead of “happy”). Always answer directly and correct any mishearing briefly (e.g., “Do you mean happy music?”). Then state your opinion and give a reason using a linking word (e.g., “Yes, it does because…”).

例: Yes, happy music usually makes me feel more excited because of its fast tempo and cheerful melodies. For instance, when I hear upbeat pop songs I feel energized and more willing to move.

提案: You repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Respond with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “Yes, I took piano lessons for two years.” or “No, I haven’t taken any.”) and add a specific detail or example to support your answer.

例: Yes, I took piano lessons for two years when I was a child, and those classes taught me basic theory and how to read sheet music. Because of that, I can play simple songs and accompany myself when singing.

提案: Again you repeated the question and used incorrect grammar (“another things”). Instead, answer directly and use correct grammar: “while doing other things.” Give one supporting detail and a linking word (e.g., “Yes, I do because…”).

例: Yes, I often listen to music while doing other things, such as studying or cooking, because it helps me focus and makes chores more enjoyable. For example, I usually play instrumental playlists when I study to avoid distractions.

× Does shopping music make you feel more excited?

✓ Does happy music make you feel more excited?

The student changed the adjective 'happy' from the examiner's question to 'shopping', which is not appropriate here. This is an incorrect use of adjectives (the wrong adjective choice). Replace 'shopping' with 'happy' to match the intended meaning. Suggestion: pay attention to the adjective that describes the noun 'music' and use one that fits the context (happy/sad).

× Do you listen to music while doing another things?

✓ Do you listen to music while doing other things?

The error is the combination of 'another' (which requires a singular noun) with the plural noun 'things'. Use 'other' with plural nouns. Correction: 'other things'. Suggestion: use 'another' + singular noun (another thing) or 'other' + plural noun (other things).