Music— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap doğrudan ve anlaşılır, fakat dilbilgisi hataları ve biraz tekrara yer var. Cümleleri daha doğal hale getirmek için uygun artikeller ve fiil çekimleri kullanılmalı (ör. "listen to sad music"). Ayrıca bir konu cümlesi kurup ardından kısa bir neden vererek cevap yapılandırılmalı ve 2-3 cümleyi aşmamalısınız.

例: I usually prefer happy music because it lifts my mood. However, when I feel down I sometimes choose sad songs to reflect my feelings.

提案: Cevap net ama tekrar eden fikirler ve bazı dilbilgisi hataları var (ör. "make" → "makes"). İki fikri birleştirmek yerine önce doğrudan cevap verin, sonra kısa açıklama ve örnek verin. Bağlaçlar (because, so) doğru yerlerde kullanılmalı.

例: Yes, happy music makes me feel more energetic because of its upbeat tempo. For example, I listen to lively pop songs when I need a boost, while I choose classical pieces when I want to relax.

提案: Zaman kullanımı ve kelime sıralaması geliştirilmesi gerekiyor. "Currently, I have taken" yerine daha uygun present perfect continuous veya simple present yapılarını kullanın (ör. "I am taking piano lessons" veya "I have been taking piano lessons for four months"). Ayrıca son cümledeki kelime sırası hatalı: "playing piano" yerine "playing the piano" veya "playing piano" düzeltin.

例: I have been taking piano lessons for four months and I really enjoy playing the piano. I practice about 30 minutes a day to improve.

提案: Cevap net ve anlaşılır; fakat "some other things" yerine daha spesifik örnekler vererek cevap güçlendirilebilir. Ayrıca akıcılığı artırmak için bağlaç kullanımı ve kısa örnekler ekleyin.

例: Yes, I often listen to music while doing homework and cleaning because it helps me concentrate. For instance, I play instrumental tracks when I study to avoid distractions.

× I usually prefer happy music for a good mood, but sometimes I don't feel happy and I want to listen sad music.

✓ I usually prefer happy music to be in a good mood, but sometimes I don't feel happy and I want to listen to sad music.

The phrase 'listen sad music' is incorrect because the verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before its object. Also, 'prefer happy music for a good mood' is awkward; a clearer phrasing is 'prefer happy music to be in a good mood' or better 'prefer happy music to lift my mood'. Suggestion: use 'listen to' + noun, and rephrase 'prefer ... for a good mood' to 'prefer ... to lift my mood'.

× Yeah, happy music make me feel more excited. Also, I listen to classical music to relax my mind, so I usually prefer happy music.

✓ Yeah, happy music makes me feel more excited. Also, I listen to classical music to relax my mind, so I usually prefer happy music.

The subject 'happy music' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' not 'make' (subject-verb agreement). Suggestion: for singular nouns use the third person singular form 'makes' in the present simple.

× Currently, I have taken piano courses. I have been learning the piano for four months. I am really into the playing piano.

✓ Currently, I have taken piano courses. I have been learning the piano for four months. I am really into playing the piano.

'I am really into the playing piano' is incorrect because after 'into' we use a gerund without an additional article: 'into playing'. Also 'playing the piano' is correct; keep the article with the instrument. Suggestion: use 'into' + gerund ('playing') and 'the piano' for the instrument.

× I listen to music while doing my homework or some other things because music makes me feel more focused.

✓ I listen to music while doing my homework or other things because music makes me feel more focused.

'Some other things' is awkward; 'other things' is idiomatic. No grammatical verb problem, but phrasing can be improved by removing 'some'. Suggestion: use 'other things' or specify activities.