Teachers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the answer more concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, use singular/plural consistently, and add one specific example. Keep it under 4–5 sentences and use linking words (for example, because, so).

例: My favorite teacher is Mr. Vikram, who taught me math. He is kind and very supportive, and he regularly gives me practical advice about my career. For example, he helped me choose subjects for college, which made my decisions much clearer.

提案: Answer directly and organize reasons with linking words. Fix tense and article errors, avoid repetition, and give one concrete reason or example why you might consider teaching in future.

例: At the moment I don't plan to become a teacher, but I enjoy advising friends, so I might consider it later. For instance, if I wanted a stable job that allows me to help young people, I would consider training as a teacher.

提案: Make the response clear and grammatically correct. Use a topic sentence, then provide specific memories or examples. Avoid unclear phrases and pronoun errors.

例: Yes — I still remember my math teacher, Mr. Vikram. He taught me problem-solving skills and gave career advice, such as suggesting useful elective courses, which influenced my study choices.

提案: Use correct verb forms and pronouns, and be specific about how you stay in touch. Limit to 2–3 sentences and include one example of communication method or recent contact.

例: Yes, I'm still in touch with some of my primary school teachers. For example, I message one teacher on WhatsApp when I need career advice, and she recently helped me choose a university course.

提案: Be specific about the ways the teacher helped; use linking words to organize points and correct pronoun use. Give one concrete example of help and its result.

例: He helped me with both academic and career guidance. For example, when I struggled with calculus, he spent extra time explaining concepts, which improved my grades and confidence.

提案: Give a clear, direct answer (yes/no or 'I like both'), then support it with 1–2 concise reasons and one specific example. Avoid repetition and fix grammar.

例: I like both equally because teachers at every level supported me. For instance, my primary teachers encouraged my confidence, while high school teachers helped me prepare for university entrance exams.

× He is a physical teacher as he is very kind and supportive Whenever I have any problem regarding to my career and my future goals they always give me advice and they advice always helpful for me.

✓ He is a physical education teacher; he is very kind and supportive. Whenever I have any problems regarding my career and future goals, he always gives me advice and his advice is always helpful to me.

Errors: 'physical teacher' is incorrect collocation; use 'physical education teacher'. Missing punctuation and run-on sentence. 'problem' should be plural 'problems' to match context. Incorrect preposition 'regarding to' should be 'regarding' or 'about'. Pronoun shift: sentence mixes singular 'he' with plural 'they'; keep singular 'he'. Verb form: 'give' should be 'gives' for third person singular (Third person singular issue, ID 2 / Subject-verb agreement ID 27). 'they advice always helpful' incorrect structure; correct to 'his advice is always helpful to me'. Suggestion: keep pronouns consistent, ensure subject-verb agreement, use correct collocations and prepositions, and split into shorter sentences. Grammar problem type ID:13,2,27,11

× So he's very kind and they motivate me in anytime so he is my favorite teacher.

✓ So he's very kind and he motivates me at any time, so he is my favorite teacher.

Errors: Pronoun inconsistency: 'they' used for a singular person; should be 'he' (Incorrect use of pronouns ID 12). 'in anytime' is incorrect preposition and expression; use 'at any time' (Incorrect use of prepositions ID 11). Use of present simple 'motivates' for third person singular (Third person singular issue ID 2). Suggestion: Keep pronouns consistent and use 'at any time'. Grammar problem type ID:12,11,2

× To be honest currently I have no plan to become a teacher but I love to give advice and help my friends in anytime so if I got a chance in future I definitely do because a teacher is a very good profession as they have number of children who love them and I love to help people.

✓ To be honest, I currently have no plans to become a teacher, but I love giving advice and helping my friends at any time, so if I get a chance in the future I would definitely do it because teaching is a very good profession; teachers have a number of children who care for them and I love to help people.

Errors: 'have no plan' -> 'have no plans' (Singular/plural issue ID 1). 'love to give advice and help' better as gerunds 'love giving advice and helping' (Verb + -ing form ID 8). 'in anytime' -> 'at any time' (Preposition error ID 11). 'if I got a chance' should be 'if I get a chance' for future possibility (Present/future tense issue ID 6/7) and 'would definitely do it' fits conditional. 'a teacher is a very good profession' wrong article and noun choice; use 'teaching is a very good profession' (Incorrect use of nouns/adjectives ID 13 / Article errors ID 22). 'they have number of children' -> 'teachers have a number of children' (Pronoun and article errors ID 12,22). Suggestion: keep tense consistent, use gerunds for general likes, correct articles and prepositions, and maintain subject-pronoun agreement. Grammar problem type ID:1,8,11,6,22,12

× Yes, I remember 1 teacher he's my teacher of math subject as he is a very kind person.

✓ Yes, I remember one teacher; he's my math teacher and he is a very kind person.

Errors: Use numeral '1' in informal transcript should be 'one' (Style). 'teacher of math subject' is awkward; use 'math teacher' (Incorrect use of adjectives or nouns ID 13). Missing punctuation between clauses. Suggestion: use natural noun phrases and proper punctuation. Grammar problem type ID:13

× Name of my teacher is Mr. Vikram and he is also a taught me number of things regarding to my career and also be a helpful and supportive teacher in my life as I will standing according to their device.

✓ My teacher's name is Mr. Vikram, and he taught me a number of things regarding my career. He has been a helpful and supportive teacher in my life and I will follow his advice.

Errors: 'Name of my teacher is' should be 'My teacher's name is' (Sentence structure ID 26). 'he is also a taught me' incorrect verb form; use past simple 'he taught me' (Past tense issue ID 5). 'number of things' needs article 'a number of things' (Article/quantifier ID 22/14). 'regarding to' -> 'regarding' (Preposition ID 11). 'also be a helpful' -> 'has been a helpful' (verb tense/structure ID 6/5). 'I will standing according to their device' is unclear and has pronoun error 'their' for singular and wrong noun 'device' likely 'advice'; correct to 'I will follow his advice' (Pronoun and word choice ID 12,13). Suggestion: use correct verb tense, articles, prepositions, and clearer sentence structure. Grammar problem type ID:26,5,22,11,12

× Yes, I still in touch with my my primary school teachers as he helped me in my career so I cannot forget them and whenever I have any problem regarding to my career and future plans, I shared my problems with them.

✓ Yes, I am still in touch with my primary school teachers because they helped me in my career, so I cannot forget them. Whenever I have any problems regarding my career and future plans, I share my problems with them.

Errors: Missing verb 'am' in 'I still in touch' (Sentence without a verb ID 23). Repetition 'my my'. Pronoun inconsistency: 'my primary school teachers as he helped me' uses singular 'he' for plural 'teachers' (Incorrect use of pronouns ID 12). 'regarding to' -> 'regarding' (Preposition ID 11). Tense mismatch: 'I shared my problems' should be present 'I share' to match habitual action (Present tense issue ID 6). Suggestion: include the verb 'am', keep pronouns consistent, and use present simple for regular actions. Grammar problem type ID:23,12,11,6

× They give me advice and I easily solved my problems.

✓ They give me advice and I easily solve my problems.

Errors: Tense mismatch: 'I easily solved my problems' is past; should be present 'I easily solve my problems' to match ongoing habit (Present tense issue ID 6). Sentence otherwise okay; keep pronouns plural 'they' to match 'teachers'. Suggestion: use consistent tense for habitual actions. Grammar problem type ID:6

× In many ways my favorite teacher helped me.

✓ In many ways, my favorite teacher has helped me.

Errors: Tense choice: use present perfect 'has helped' to indicate past actions with present relevance (Present tense issue ID 6). Missing comma after introductory phrase. Suggestion: use present perfect for experiences that affect the present. Grammar problem type ID:6

× For instance, whenever I have any problem in my future planning or in my career, they helped me.

✓ For instance, whenever I have any problems in my future planning or in my career, he helps me.

Errors: Pronoun inconsistency: 'they helped me' vs 'I have' and singular teacher; should be 'he helps me' (Incorrect use of pronouns ID 12). Tense mismatch: 'have' (present) with 'helped' (past); use present 'helps' for habitual support (Tense issue ID 6,2). 'problem' -> 'problems' (Singular/plural ID 1). Suggestion: keep pronouns and tenses consistent and use plural for general references. Grammar problem type ID:12,6,1

× As well as whenever I stuck in any question or anything which he taught me, I he definitely helped me.

✓ Also, whenever I am stuck on a question or anything he taught me, he definitely helps me.

Errors: 'whenever I stuck' missing auxiliary 'am' (Sentence without verb/Present tense ID 23/6). Preposition 'in' should be 'on' for 'stuck on a question' (Preposition ID 11). Pronoun and word order errors 'I he definitely helped me' should be 'he definitely helps me' (Pronoun and tense ID 12,6). Suggestion: use correct auxiliary verbs, prepositions, and maintain subject-verb order. Grammar problem type ID:23,11,12,6

× To be honest I like both of them because I have a very good bonding with my primary school and high school teachers as they always help me in man in many ways.

✓ To be honest, I like both of them because I have a very good bond with my primary and high school teachers; they always help me in many ways.

Errors: 'bonding' should be 'bond' (Incorrect use of adjectives or nouns ID 13). 'in man in many ways' is garbled and redundant; should be 'in many ways' (Sentence structure ID 26). Missing commas. Suggestion: use correct noun 'bond' and remove extra words. Grammar problem type ID:13,26

× For example whenever I was stuck in my questions and having a doubt regarding to my future planning they always help me.

✓ For example, whenever I was stuck with my questions or had a doubt regarding my future planning, they always helped me.

Errors: Mixed tenses: 'was stuck' (past) and 'they always help' (present) should match; use past 'they always helped me' if referring to past (Past tense issue ID 5). Preposition 'stuck in my questions' -> 'stuck with my questions' (Preposition ID 11). 'regarding to' -> 'regarding' (Preposition ID 11). 'having a doubt' -> 'had a doubt' (Tense/verb form ID 5). Suggestion: keep tense consistent and use correct prepositions. Grammar problem type ID:5,11

× So both both both of are my favorite and I like both. Schools. Teachers.

✓ So both groups of teachers are my favorites; I like both school and high school teachers.

Errors: Repetition 'both both both' and fragmented phrases 'Schools. Teachers.' (Sentence structure ID 26). 'both of are my favorite' incorrect order; correct to 'both groups of teachers are my favorites' or simply 'I like both'. Suggestion: remove repetitions, combine fragments into a complete sentence, and use plural 'favorites' if referring to multiple people. Grammar problem type ID:26