Teachers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and natural. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one specific detail about why you like him using a linking word. Avoid short choppy sentences and minor grammar errors (e.g., use 'teaches' not 'teaching', 'funny' could be 'fun' or 'entertaining').

例: Yes — my favorite teacher is Mr. Edema, who teaches mathematics. I like him because he explains difficult concepts clearly and makes lessons entertaining, which helped me understand the subject better.

提案: Provide a clear topic sentence and one or two concise supporting reasons linked logically. Use correct verb forms (e.g., 'I go to regular training' or 'I train regularly') and avoid fillers like 'uh'.

例: No, I don't plan to be a teacher because I want to pursue a career in football. I train regularly with a club and hope to become a professional player, so I am focusing on sports rather than teaching.

提案: Answer directly and combine details into fluent sentences. Use past or present appropriately ('taught me' not 'teaches me') and give a specific example of what made the teacher memorable.

例: Yes, I still remember my tenth-grade teacher, Mr. Rahul, who taught biology. He had an entertaining way of teaching and often used hands-on experiments, which made the lessons memorable.

提案: Correct grammar and be concise. Use a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms ('connected with them' or 'in touch with them') and avoid awkward phrases ('favorite persons'). Mention one specific app or reason briefly with linking words.

例: Yes, I'm still in touch with some of my primary school teachers through Instagram and WhatsApp. Because social media makes communication easy, we can share updates and stay connected.

提案: Be specific and consistent in number and tense (use singular/plural correctly). Start with a clear statement, then give one concrete example of help, using linking words. Avoid repetition and minor errors ('they helped me', 'some teachers give motivational talks').

例: My favourite teacher helped me by giving personal support and practical advice when I struggled with exams. For example, she gave me extra coaching sessions and motivational talks, which improved my study habits and problem-solving skills.

提案: Make the comparison clear with proper grammar and one specific reason, using linking words like 'because' or 'because of'. Avoid vague phrases ('don't hurt me')—explain politely (e.g., 'were kinder' or 'more supportive'). Keep it to two or three sentences.

例: Yes, I prefer my primary school teachers to my high school teachers because they were kinder and more patient. They made lessons fun and created a comfortable classroom atmosphere, so I felt more supported there.

× He's teaching mathematics.

✓ He teaches mathematics.

The present simple is used for habitual actions or states. 'He is teaching' (present continuous) suggests an action happening now, but in this context the student describes a fact about the teacher. Also verb must agree with third person singular: 'he teaches.' Suggestion: use present simple for facts or regular activities: 'He teaches mathematics.'

× His class is very funny.

✓ His class is very fun.

'Funny' usually means causing laughter; 'fun' describes something enjoyable. Saying a class is 'very funny' implies it makes people laugh a lot; likely the student means the class is enjoyable. Use 'fun' to describe enjoyment. Suggestion: choose 'fun' for enjoyable experiences and place adverb before adjective as done.'

× I'm going regular training to become a footballer.

✓ I go to regular training to become a footballer.

The structure 'I'm going regular training' is ungrammatical. For habitual activities use present simple: 'I go to regular training.' Also include the preposition 'to' and use 'regular training' or 'regular training sessions.' Suggestion: 'I go to regular training sessions to become a footballer.'

× So, uh, due to these reasons, I don't prefer to be a teacher.

✓ So, due to these reasons, I don't prefer to be a teacher.

The filler 'uh' is unnecessary in a written answer. More importantly, 'due to these reasons' is clumsy; better: 'for these reasons' or 'because of these reasons.' Suggestion: 'So, for these reasons, I don't prefer to be a teacher.'

× He teaches me the subject Biology.

✓ He taught me Biology.

The student refers to a past teacher from 10th standard, so past tense is appropriate: 'taught.' Also 'the subject Biology' is awkward; 'taught me Biology' is natural. Suggestion: use past simple for past events.'

× His learning style is funny and entertaining.

✓ His teaching style is funny and entertaining.

'Learning style' refers to how a student learns; for a teacher's approach use 'teaching style.' The rest is fine. Suggestion: say 'teaching style' when describing a teacher's methods.'

× Yes, I'm still connected them with social media apps through Instagram, WhatsApp and Twitter.

✓ Yes, I'm still connected with them through social media apps like Instagram, WhatsApp and Twitter.

Pronoun placement is wrong: 'connected them' is incorrect. Correct pattern is 'connected with them.' Also add 'like' before examples and adjust word order. Suggestion: 'I'm still connected with them through social media apps like Instagram, WhatsApp and Twitter.'

× Nowadays, it's very easy for everyone to stay in touch with their favorite persons, so I'm keep in touch with my teachers.

✓ Nowadays, it's very easy for everyone to stay in touch with their favorite people, so I keep in touch with my teachers.

'I'm keep in touch' mixes present continuous with base verb; correct is 'I keep in touch' for habitual action. 'Favorite persons' is unnatural; use 'favorite people.' Also keep tense consistent. Suggestion: 'I keep in touch' for regular contact.'

× They help me to improve my skills whenever I face a difficult situation in my life.

✓ They help me improve my skills whenever I face a difficult situation in my life.

Sentence is mostly correct; minor change: remove 'to' after 'help' (both forms are acceptable, but 'help me improve' is more natural). Subject-verb agreement is correct ('They help'). Suggestion: use 'help me improve' for smoother flow.'

× Some teacher give me motivation class that really really helped me too improve my career and also it would increase my ability to solve problems.

✓ Some teachers give me motivational classes that really helped me to improve my career and increased my ability to solve problems.

Multiple errors: 'Some teacher' should be plural 'Some teachers.' 'Motivation class' -> 'motivational classes.' Tense should match: if speaking about past help, use past 'helped' and 'increased.' 'too' is wrong; use 'to.' Also avoid redundant 'really really.' Suggestion: use plurals and consistent past tense: 'Some teachers gave me motivational classes that really helped me to improve my career and increased my problem-solving ability.'

× Yes, I do like my primary school teacher, then the high school lectures.

✓ Yes, I like my primary school teachers more than my high school teachers.

Use 'more than' for comparison. 'Then' is wrong; should be 'than.' 'Teacher' vs 'teachers' consistency: use plural if comparing groups. 'Lectures' is incorrect for people; use 'teachers.' Suggestion: 'I like my primary school teachers more than my high school teachers.'

× The most significant reason is that they are very funny.

✓ The most significant reason is that they were very funny.

If referring to past primary school teachers, maintain past tense 'were.' Also context earlier indicates primary teachers (past), so adjust tense. Suggestion: keep tense consistent with reference time.'

× They don't hurt me.

✓ They didn't hurt me.

Past reference: if speaking about past teachers, use past tense 'didn't hurt me.' Also 'hurt' in present may imply current state; match time frame. Suggestion: use past tense for experiences with past teachers.'

× So this is the reason I like the most.

✓ So this is the main reason I like them the most.

Original word order is awkward and missing object. Specify 'them' (teachers) and place 'the most' after object. Suggestion: 'So this is the main reason I like them the most.'