Tidiness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答自然且信息明确，但可稍作精简并使用连接词使句子更流畅。同时可加入一两处更具体的细节（例如具体整理方法或频率），以增强内容的说服力。注意不要超过五句。

例: Yes, I like to keep things tidy because it helps me find things quickly and reduces stress. For instance, I always place my keys and wallet in the same drawer and label shelves for different items, so I never waste time searching in the morning.

提案: 回答直接但略显简单。可以增加一两个具体例子或对比来丰富内容，比如说明为什么会乱或什么时候开始改变。使用连接词使表达更连贯。保持句子数在五句以内。

例: Not really; I was quite messy as a child and often left toys and clothes all over my room. My mother had to tidy up for me every day, which is why I learned to be more organized as I grew older.

提案: 内容有用但表达不准确且语法错误影响理解。应使用正确的时态和短语（例如 'I make a to-do list'，'I tidy it once a week'）。另外可以加入具体做法（例如清理桌面、归类文件）并用连接词衔接。

例: I make a to-do list and tidy my workspace once a week: I clear unnecessary papers, wipe the desk, and organize files into labeled folders so everything is easy to find.

提案: 回答含义混乱且有语法和措辞错误（如 'there's a different opinion among the among people'，'it don't affect others'）。建议先给出直接立场句，然后用一两个原因支持，并用连接词衔接。注意主谓一致和代词使用。

例: I think it depends: being tidy is important if it affects others, but if someone's mess doesn't bother anyone, I don't mind. For example, a slightly untidy desk is fine for me as long as it doesn't create noise or inconvenience.

× I would make A to do list and stepped into it once a week to clean my workspace.

✓ I would make a to-do list and stick to it once a week to clean my workspace.

句中存在动词后接-ing形式和动词搭配错误：原句的“stepped into it”用法不当，语义想表达“遵守/坚持（计划）”，应使用短语“stick to”。另外“A to do list”中的大小写和连字符不正确，改为“a to-do list”。建议：注意固定搭配（stick to 表示坚持），以及名词短语的小写和连字符用法。

× It's hard to say there's a different opinion among the among people.

✓ It's hard to say — there are different opinions among people.

原句存在代词与数量不一致以及重复词语：“there's”为单数形式（there is），而后文应指多种不同意见，需用复数形式“there are”。另外重复了“the among”。建议：使用与后接名词数一致的there be 结构（there are），并删去重复词语。

× As long as it don't affect others, I really don't mind if they are being tidy.

✓ As long as it doesn't affect others, I really don't mind if they are tidy.

第一处错误为主语-动词不一致：主语it需与动词doesn't（第三人称单数）搭配，而原句用 don't。第二处“they are being tidy”中“being”多余，通常描述习惯或状态用形容词“tidy”即可，不需要进行时。建议：第三人称单数用doesn't；描述一般状态或习惯不用“being”。