Tidiness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更自然简洁，注意时态和单复数，一句话表达主要观点，然后用一到两句具体原因或例子支持。避免重复词（如“untidy”重复）并修正语法（made→makes，you you→you）以提高流畅度和准确性。

例: Yes, I do. Keeping things tidy makes the environment feel cleaner and helps you find items quickly instead of searching through a messy table. For example, when my desk is organized, I can locate my notes within seconds, which saves time.

提案: 回答应直接用过去习惯表达（used to），句子不要冗长且避免重复。给出具体原因或简短例子来支持观点。注意主谓一致和词汇选择（例如 use 'necessary' 单次）。

例: No, I didn’t use to keep my room tidy. As a child I preferred to leave toys around because it was easier to play anytime, and my parents didn’t insist on strict tidiness.

提案: 回答需要更清晰的步骤表述并减少填充词（uh）。使用主语一致并避免奇怪的短语（'keep your dad steady tidy' 不合适）。可以列出两到三个具体做法并用连接词衔接。

例: I keep my study space tidy by arranging all my books on a shelf, sorting stationery into containers, and regularly removing or recycling things I no longer need. This routine keeps the area organized and helps me focus.

提案: 回答要更自然，用更准确的表达（e.g. 'a happier mood' 而不是 'more happy emotion'）。提供一两个具体理由或结果并用连接词衔接，使论述更有说服力。

例: Yes, I do. A tidy environment usually puts people in a happier mood and reduces distractions, which can improve productivity. For instance, when my room is organized I complete tasks faster and with fewer mistakes.

× keeping things tidy made the environment seem more clean, and you may be easier to find something you you want rather than looking for it through an untidy, untidy table.

✓ Keeping things tidy makes the environment seem cleaner, and it is easier for you to find something you want rather than looking for it on an untidy table.

句中使用了“more clean”是不正确的比较级形式，正确的形容词比较级是“cleaner”。此外，存在代词和词序问题：将“you may be easier to find something”改为“it is easier for you to find something”更符合英语表达习惯；重复的“you”与“untidy, untidy”应删除重复。建议掌握形容词比较级的构成并注意句子主语与不定式/介词短语的搭配。

× Well, as I was a child, I didn't keep my room tidy because I think that is unnecessary, unnecessary for a child to keep their bedroom tidy because they always, uh, we always put our toys everywhere so that we can play it everywhere.

✓ Well, when I was a child, I didn't keep my room tidy because I thought it was unnecessary for a child to keep their bedroom tidy; we always put our toys everywhere so that we could play with them anywhere.

句子时态不一致：叙述过去的习惯应使用过去时，所以“think”应改为“thought”，“is unnecessary”改为“was unnecessary”。此外，‘so that we can play it everywhere’中的代词与动词搭配错误，应为“play with them anywhere”。建议在叙述过去经历或习惯时统一使用过去时态，并注意动词与代词搭配。

× we always put our toys everywhere so that we can play it everywhere.

✓ we always put our toys everywhere so that we could play with them anywhere.

代词使用错误：英语中“play”通常与“play with something”搭配，不能直接用宾格代词代替动作对象的介词结构。‘it’与复数‘toys’不匹配，应使用‘them’。同时词语重复和副词位置调整为“anywhere”。建议注意动词短语的固定搭配以及代词的单复数一致性。

× you want rather than looking for it through an untidy, untidy table.

✓ you want rather than looking for it on an untidy table.

介词使用不当：对于在桌子表面寻找东西，应使用“on”而不是“through”。“through”表示穿过或通过，不适用于在桌面上寻找。并去掉重复的“untidy”。建议记忆常用介词与场景的搭配，例如“on the table”“in the drawer”。

× Well, that is quite easy because to keep the, uh, study space tidy, you just have to put all, all the books together on the shelf and clean the, uh, unused materials and throw them away and it could keep your dad steady tidy.

✓ Well, it is quite easy: to keep the study space tidy, you just have to put all the books together on the shelf, clean the unused materials and throw them away, and it will help keep your desk tidy.

时态和词语选择问题：句首描述一般事实应使用一般现在时，“that is quite easy”改为“It is quite easy”。原句中“could keep your dad steady tidy”有多重错误：可能是想表达“it can help keep your desk tidy”或“it will help keep your desk tidy”。“dad steady tidy”毫无意义，需改为“help keep your desk tidy”。建议学习常用表达和固定搭配，注意主语与谓语的一致性，并检查是否有拼写或词汇错误（dad vs desk）。

× Well, I think yes, because tidy environments often give people a more happy emotion and it can improve the efficiency when people work.

✓ Well, I think so, because tidy environments often make people happier and can improve work efficiency.

形容词/副词使用不当：原句“give people a more happy emotion”不符合英语表达，应该用“make people happier”或“give people a happier mood”。此外“improve the efficiency when people work”更自然的表达是“improve work efficiency”。建议学习常见的动词+形容词搭配（make sb. + adj.）以及简洁表达方式。