Tidiness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 句子要更完整、语法更准确，并用一两句具体细节支撑观点。可以在回答开头直接给出主题句，然后用连接词补充原因或例子，避免冗长或重复。注意时态和主谓一致（例如“I am not super organized”）。

例: I don't always keep things tidy. I usually tidy up only when things become too messy, because I focus on work first. For example, when I'm studying for exams my desk can get chaotic for days until I finish an important task, then I take an hour to organize everything.

提案: 回答要有更明确的主题句并补充具体细节或对比，使用连接词提高连贯性。可以提到频率、原因或父母如何帮助，注意词汇准确（例如用“tools”改为“toys”或“schoolbooks”更自然）。

例: Not really — I was quite untidy as a child. My toys and schoolbooks were often scattered around, so my parents frequently reminded me to clean up. Sometimes they set a weekly cleaning time, which helped a little but I still left things messy between sessions.

× Not all the time, I clean up when things get too messy, but I not super organized.

✓ Not all the time. I clean up when things get too messy, but I'm not super organized.

原句缺少系动词“am”的缩写形式“'m”。在描述现在状态时，英语需要使用现在时的系动词。建议在“I … not super organized”中使用“I am not”或“I'm not”。此外，将句子分成两句可以使表达更清晰。

× Not really, my room got messy pretty easily, tools and books were everywhere.

✓ Not really. My room got messy pretty easily; tools and books were everywhere.

原句用逗号连接两部分，属于逗号拼接（comma splice）。虽然时态（过去时）本身正确，但句子结构不够规范。建议用句号或分号分开独立分句，保持句子结构清晰。

× My parents usually remind me to clean up.

✓ My parents usually reminded me to clean up.

在回答童年时期的习惯时，整个叙述应使用过去时。原句使用一般现在时“remind”与前文“Did you use to…/Not really”时间背景不一致。建议将“usually remind”改为过去式“usually reminded”以与过去时间背景一致。