Parks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer in the past tense when describing your childhood: use “liked” and “when I was a child.” Add one specific detail, such as what you did at the park. Avoid combining the past and present in the same phrase.

例: Yes, I liked going to parks when I was a child. I often played on the swings with my friends, and it was a fun way to spend time outdoors.

提案: Use “go to the park” and explain what you enjoy doing there. “I enjoy working with my husband” does not clearly answer the question; if you mean walking, say “I enjoy walking.” Avoid fillers and finish with a relevant supporting detail.

例: Yes, I still enjoy going to the park, usually with my husband or friends. We often walk along the paths and chat, which is a relaxing way to spend time together.

提案: Your answer gives a clear opinion and relevant reasons. Improve the grammar by saying “adding more green spaces” and “go for a walk every day.” Use “walk” rather than “work” if you mean outdoor exercise, and include a comma after “In my city.”

例: Yes, I’d like to see more parks in my city. We have only a few public parks, so adding more green spaces would give people places to exercise and relax with their families. For example, a small park near my home would make it easier for me to go for a walk every day.

提案: Answer the future-focused question by naming a park you hope to visit and giving a reason. “Quiet” is the correct word, not “quite,” and “the parks are quiet” agrees with the plural subject. If you do not have a specific destination in mind, explain what kind of park you would like to visit.

例: Yes, I’d like to visit a large national park in the future because I enjoy peaceful outdoor places. For now, I usually go to Timelik Park or a nearby public park with my friends. They are quiet and have pleasant paths for walking.

× Yes, I like going to the park in my child and now.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks as a child, and I still do now.

The question asks about a past experience, so use the past-tense verb liked to describe your childhood. The phrase and I still do now correctly adds that you continue to enjoy parks.

× Yes, I like going to the park in my child and now.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks as a child, and I still do now.

In my child is not the correct expression for describing when you were young. Use as a child or when I was a child. Remember to learn prepositions as part of common phrases.

× Yes, I still like going to park, uh, but now with my husband and my friends, uh, I enjoy work.

✓ Yes, I still like going to the park, but now I go with my husband and my friends. I enjoy working with my husband.

The singular countable noun park needs an article. Use the park when referring to a specific park or a park when referring to any park. The correction also keeps the sentence clear while preserving the intended meaning.

× In my city we have only a few public parks, so add in more green spaces would give people more places to work, exercise, and relax with their families.

✓ In my city, we have only a few public parks, so adding more green spaces would give people more places to work, exercise, and relax with their families.

The phrase that acts as the subject of would give should use a gerund, adding, rather than the base form add. Use a verb ending in -ing when an action functions as the subject of a sentence.

× For example, a small neighborhood park near my home would make it easier for me to go for daily.

✓ For example, a small neighborhood park near my home would make it easier for me to go there every day.

Go for needs a noun after it, such as go for a walk. In the original sentence, daily has no noun to complete that phrase. You can instead say go there every day.

× There are many parks I want to visit in the future, but for now I usually go to Timelik Park and the public park with my friends because they are quite and good for walking.

✓ There are many parks I want to visit in the future, but for now I usually go to Timelik Park and the public park with my friends because they are quiet and good for walking.

Quite is an adverb meaning fairly or very, while quiet is an adjective describing a place with little noise. Use quiet to describe the parks.