Parks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. To improve, answer directly with a topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences).

例: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks a lot as a child. For example, I used to play on the swings and have picnics with my family, which made weekends special. Also, I liked watching birds and learning to ride my bike there.

提案: Again you repeated the question instead of responding. Give a clear opinion first, then briefly explain why with a specific detail and a linking word to connect ideas. Aim for natural phrasing and varied vocabulary related to parks.

例: Yes, I still like going to parks because they help me relax and exercise. For instance, I often go jogging there in the mornings and sometimes meet friends for coffee, so parks are both restful and social for me.

提案: You repeated the question and made pronunciation/word errors ("barks"). Answer directly, correct vocabulary ("parks"), and give a reason with a specific example. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to make your response coherent.

例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because green spaces improve air quality and provide places for families to relax. For example, adding small neighborhood parks would give children safe places to play and encourage people to exercise.

提案: You repeated the examiner's question rather than answering and omitted preposition "to". Respond with a clear statement about a park you want to visit and give a specific reason or detail. Use linking words like "because" or "for example" to add coherence.

例: Yes, I would like to visit the central botanical garden next year because it has many rare plants and themed gardens. For example, I want to see the tropical greenhouse and take photographs of the flowers.

× Would you like see more barks in your city?

✓ Would you like to see more parks in your city?

The student omitted the infinitive marker 'to' after 'like' when forming 'would you like to see'. This is a verb + to-infinitive structure. Also 'barks' is a misspelling of 'parks' (word choice). Suggestion: use the full infinitive 'to see' after 'would you like' and correct 'barks' to 'parks'. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× Are there any parks you want to go in the future?

✓ Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

The verb phrase 'go to' requires the preposition 'to' when indicating a destination. Omitting 'to' makes the sentence ungrammatical. Suggestion: include the preposition 'to' after 'go' when referring to going somewhere: 'go to the park' or 'go to any parks'. Grammar problem type ID: 11