Parks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your reply is too short and doesn't directly answer the question. Give a clear opinion (yes or no), add 1–2 specific supporting details, and use a linking phrase if you expand. Keep it natural and under 5 sentences.

例: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they were a place to run around and play with my friends. For example, we often had picnics near the pond and played on the swings, which I always enjoyed.

提案: Again, the response must state a clear stance and include specific reasons or activities you do now. Use a linking word such as "because" or "so" to make your answer coherent. One to three sentences are enough.

例: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they help me relax and exercise. For instance, I usually go jogging there twice a week and sometimes read on a bench.

提案: Provide a definite opinion and justify it with concrete reasons or anticipated benefits. Use linking words like "because" or "therefore" and limit to a few concise sentences.

例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve air quality and provide safe spaces for families. Therefore, adding small community parks would encourage outdoor activities and social interaction.

提案: Answer directly whether you have specific parks in mind, then give a brief reason or plan (what you want to do there or when). Use a linking word such as "because" or "for example" to add clarity.

例: Yes, I want to visit the botanical gardens next summer because I've heard they have rare plants and beautiful walking paths. For example, I'd like to take photos and learn more about the different species there.

× I don't know

✓ I don't know.

The student's response lacks punctuation and is a fragment but in context is acceptable; however to be grammatically correct it needs appropriate punctuation. Suggestion: include the period and, if providing a fuller answer, expand the sentence (e.g., 'I'm not sure' or 'I don't remember').

× I don't know

✓ I still enjoy going to parks now.

The original reply is uninformative rather than grammatically incorrect. The question asks about current preference, so provide a full sentence in present simple tense. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual states: 'I still enjoy going to parks' or 'I don't enjoy them much now' depending on meaning.

× I don't know

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city.

The question uses 'Would you like', a polite conditional; the answer should use a modal structure ('would like') or a full affirmative sentence. Suggestion: respond with 'Yes, I would like...' or 'No, I wouldn't' rather than 'I don't know.'

× I don't know

✓ Yes, there are some parks I would like to visit in the future.

The question asks about future intention; answer should match future/modal structure ('would like') or use 'plan to'. Suggestion: use 'would like to' or 'plan to' for future desires: 'I would like to visit...' or 'I plan to go to...'."}]}