Parks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答过于简短且没有信息量。请直接回答问题并补充1-2句具体细节，比如你小时候是否喜欢公园，为什么喜欢或不喜欢，举例说明一次印象深刻的经历。使用连接词（比如 because, so, for example）使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I liked going to parks as a child because they had playgrounds and open space to run around. For example, I used to go every weekend with my family and we often had picnics under a big oak tree.

提案: 你的回答没有给出立场或细节。请明确回答（Yes/No）并说明原因，描述你现在去公园的频率或喜欢做的活动，使用连接词如 nowadays, because, however 来组织句子。

例: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks nowadays because they help me relax and exercise. I usually visit the park twice a week to jog or read on a bench.

提案: 回答没有观点或理由。请说明你是否希望城市有更多公园，并给出具体理由（例如改善环境、提供运动场所或儿童活动空间），可以提到一个比较或预测来丰富内容。

例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve air quality and provide safe places for children to play. For instance, adding small neighborhood parks would make it easier for families to spend time outdoors.

提案: 回答没有目标或计划。建议说明你未来想去的公园名称或类型（比如国家公园、植物园），并说明原因和具体计划（什么时候、和谁一起、想做什么），使用连接词如 next month, because, with to 使表达清晰。

例: Yes, I want to visit the botanical garden next spring because I enjoy seeing different plants and taking photos. I plan to go with my friend on a weekend and spend the afternoon exploring the greenhouses.

× I don't know

✓ Yes, I did.

句子原文“I don't know”在上下文中作为对过去喜好的回答不合适。考官问“Did you like going to parks as a child?”使用的是一般过去时，回答应使用过去时态或直接肯定/否定。建议用“Yes, I did.”或“No, I didn't.”来明确回答。要点：根据问句时态选择相应的时态，保持句子完整并包含动词。

× I don't know

✓ Yes, I do.

考官问“Do you still like going to parks now?”这是现在时的一般疑问句，正确的肯定简短回答是“Yes, I do.”或否定回答“No, I don't.”。原句“I don't know”没有直接回答问题的内容，建议根据实际情况使用现在时态并包含助动词do。

× I don't know

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city.

问句“Would you like to see more parks in your city?”使用情态动词would来表示愿望，回答应使用与之对应的礼貌形式，例如“Yes, I would”或更完整的“Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city.”原句“I don't know”未响应愿望或礼貌请求，建议用情态动词would或简短肯定/否定回答。

× I don't know

✓ Yes, there are some parks I want to visit in the future.

考官问“Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?”涉及将来愿望或计划，回答应使用现在或将来相关表达，例如“Yes, there are some parks I want to visit in the future.”或“I plan to visit X park next year.”原句“I don't know”没有明确时态信息，也没有回应存在性问题（there are...）。建议根据问题使用正确时态并明确回答。