Parks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更完整並用正確的語法連接句子。避免片段句，並加一兩句具體細節（例如玩什麼遊戲或喜歡哪個部分）以豐富內容。注意時態一致（過去式）。

例: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks with my friends when I was a child because we often played tag and climbed trees. Those active games made me very happy and I looked forward to weekends.

提案: 回答語法和句子結構需要改進，避免口頭填充詞（umm）和語序錯誤。提供頻率細節時，用清楚的連接詞說明原因或習慣。

例: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. Even if my friends are not available, I go there every weekend to relax and get some fresh air.

提案: 注意詞彙準確性（perks → parks；Mercedes 不相關），句子需更清晰地表達原因和效果。用連接詞說明為何需要更多公園並給出具體好處。

例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide green space for relaxation and exercise, which improves people's health and mood.

提案: 句子需語法改正並避免混淆表達（“That will perfect New York” 不合邏輯）。應說明為何想去該公園，提供具體原因或期待的活動。

例: Yes, I would like to visit Zhongshan Park in the future because I have heard it has beautiful gardens and a peaceful lake, so I hope to walk around and take photos there.

× Yes, I like going to parks with my friends 'cause I play with them. Makes me happy.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks with my friends because I used to play with them. It made me happy.

原句時態使用不一致。題目問「作為小孩（過去）」所以應使用過去時。將 like 改為 liked，play 改為 used to play 或 played，單獨的片語 "Makes me happy" 需完整句子並改為過去時 "It made me happy"。建議：回顧過去習慣用 used to 或過去簡單式記述單一過去事件。

× Yes, I still like going to parks. Umm, even not my friend play with me, I go parks, Yeah. Every weekend.

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks. Even if my friends don't play with me, I go to the parks every weekend.

原句有多處時態、主謂一致和介詞使用錯誤：1) "even not my friend play with me" 語序錯誤且缺少條件連詞，應為 "Even if my friends don't play with me"（第三人稱複數需用 don't）。2) "I go parks" 缺介詞，正確為 "go to the parks" 或 "go to parks"。3) "Every weekend" 放句尾合適但需和前句連接成完整句。建議：注意條件句用法（even if），主語與動詞一致，以及固定搭配 "go to" + 地點。

× Yes, I would like to see more perks Mercedes because it made me relax and I like it.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they help me relax and I like them.

原句有多個問題：1) "perks Mercedes" 顯然是拼寫或詞選錯誤，應為 "parks in my city"（或類似）。2) 時態和代詞不一致：前半用 would like（現在/將來願望），後半用過去時 "made me relax" 與前文不搭，應用一般現在時 "help me relax"（表一般事實或偏好），並將單數/複數代詞一致（parks → they/them）。建議：檢查拼寫，保持時態一致（在表達習慣或喜好時用一般現在時），代詞與先行詞在數量上一致。

× Yes, I want go to Zhongshan Park in the future. That will perfect New York.

✓ Yes, I want to go to Zhongshan Park in the future. It would be perfect for me.

原句有結構與語意錯誤：1) 動詞不定式缺少 to：應為 "want to go"。2) "That will perfect New York" 語法錯誤且語意不清，猜測想表達對自己的完美/很棒，應改為 "It would be perfect for me" 或若指觀光地很完美則 "It would be perfect"。建議：使用正確的不定式結構（want to do），並用合適的主語和補語表達意圖；如果表達假想或個人評價，常用 would/ would be 來表禮貌或假設語氣。