Parks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ слишком короткий и неясный. Следует давать полные предложения, прямо отвечать на вопрос, добавлять конкретную деталь или причину. Используйте связку (например, because, and) для плавного расширения ответа. Ограничьтесь максимум 3–4 предложениями.

例: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because I enjoyed playing on the swings and meeting friends. We often had picnics there, which made the visits very special.

提案: Студент повторил вопрос экзаменатора вместо ответа. Нужно давать прямой ответ в виде полного предложения, затем при необходимости добавить одно или два поясняющих предложения с причинами или примерами, используя связки (for example, because, so).

例: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they help me relax and exercise. For example, I often go jogging there on weekends.

提案: Опять же студент повторяет вопрос вместо ответа. Дайте чёткий ответ (Yes/No/Maybe) и обоснуйте его конкретной причиной или примером. Используйте связки (because, so, therefore) и не более 3–4 предложений всего.

例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because green spaces improve air quality and provide places for families to relax. New parks could also include playgrounds and bike paths for children and adults.

提案: Студент снова повторил вопрос. Нужен прямой ответ с указанием конкретного парка или типа парка и кратким объяснением, почему вы хотите туда пойти. Добавьте связку (for example, because) и максимум 3 предложений всего.

例: Yes, I would like to visit the central botanical garden next summer because I am interested in its rare plant collection. I think it would be a peaceful place to take photos and learn about different species.

× Me.

✓ I did.

The student used a fragment 'Me.' which lacks a verb and subject structure; it should be a full clause. Use 'I did.' to answer 'Did you like going to parks as a child?'. This provides a subject and past tense verb, matching the examiner's past tense question. Suggestion: Always respond with a subject and verb when answering yes/no questions, e.g., 'Yes, I did.' or 'No, I didn't.'

× Do you still like going to parks now?

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks now.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering it. Provide a statement with a subject and verb that matches the present tense of the question. If affirming, include 'Yes' and a present tense verb phrase: 'I still like...'. Suggestion: When asked a question, avoid repeating it; answer directly with 'Yes, I.../No, I...'."

× Would you like to see more parks in your city?

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city.

The student echoed the question rather than answering. Use a response in the conditional/modal form that matches 'Would you like...': include subject 'I' and modal 'would' plus base verb 'like'. Suggestion: Respond with 'Yes, I would like...' or 'No, I wouldn't like...'."

× Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

✓ Yes, there are some parks I would like to go to in the future.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Provide a clause that uses 'there are' for existence and a modal phrase 'would like to' to express future desire. This matches the question's tense and meaning. Suggestion: Answer existence questions with 'Yes, there are...' or 'No, there aren't...'; add specifics if possible.'