Parks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a direct opinion first, then add one or two specific supporting details. Aim for natural, full-sentence responses (no more than 5 sentences). Use linking words such as "yes, because" or "no, although" to make your answer coherent.

例: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child because I loved playing on the swings and riding my bicycle along the paths. Also, my family often had picnics there, so it was a place for both fun and family time.

提案: State a clear current preference and give a brief reason and example. Use linking words like "however" or "because" to connect ideas and make your answer natural and informative.

例: Yes, I still like going to parks because they are peaceful and a good place to exercise. For example, I usually go for a jog in the park twice a week and sometimes read on a bench afterwards.

提案: Provide a clear answer (yes or no) and support it with specific reasons and consequences. Use linking words such as "because" or "so" to explain why more parks would matter.

例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve air quality and provide recreational space. As a result, residents would have more opportunities for outdoor activities and community events.

提案: Answer directly and mention a specific park or type of park with reasons and a short plan. Use linking words like "for example" or "such as" to add clarity and detail.

例: Yes, I would like to visit the new riverside park that opened recently, because it has walking trails and a botanical garden. For example, I plan to go there next month to take photographs and try the guided nature walk.

× I don't know

✓ I don't know.

The original sentence lacks a final full stop; add punctuation to complete the sentence. This is a sentence structure/orthographic issue rather than a grammatical tense or agreement problem. Suggestion: Always finish spoken-response transcriptions with appropriate punctuation to indicate completion. Note: The content "I don't know" is grammatically correct for all questions' tense and person, so no tense or subject-verb changes are needed.