Parks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is too short, unclear and doesn't address the question. Give a direct response (yes/no or sometimes), add one or two specific supporting details, and keep it natural and concise. Use linking words if adding reasons or examples.

例: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. For example, I used to play on the swings and have picnics with my family, which made weekends special.

提案: Again, the response is non-committal. State a clear position (yes/no/occasionally), then give a brief reason and a specific detail to support it. Keep to a maximum of about 3–4 short sentences.

例: Yes, I still like going to parks. I go at least once a week to jog and relax because the fresh air helps me unwind after work.

提案: Avoid vague answers. Express your opinion directly and support it with a reason and a concrete example or comparison. Use a linking word (because/so/therefore) to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because we have limited green space. For instance, new pocket parks near apartment blocks would give residents places to exercise and socialize.

提案: Provide a clear response about future intentions and add specific details (which park, when, and why). Use phrases indicating future plans (I plan to/I want to/I hope to) and one supporting reason.

例: I plan to visit the Botanic Garden next spring because I've heard it has lovely seasonal displays and walking paths, which would be perfect for photography and relaxation.

× I don't know

✓ I don't know.

The original reply is grammatically acceptable as a short answer, but it lacks punctuation. Add a full stop. No change in tense or structure is needed; this phrase correctly uses the present simple negative contraction 'do not' for a general present-time statement. Suggestion: include appropriate punctuation and, if you want to sound more natural in conversation, expand the response (for example, 'I'm not sure' or 'I don't remember').

× I don't know

✓ I don't know.

Same as above: the phrase is grammatically correct for expressing uncertainty in the present, but should include a period. For clearer spoken responses, consider alternatives such as 'I'm not sure' or 'I can't remember.'

× I don't know

✓ I don't know.

As above: correct grammar for a present-tense negative statement; add punctuation. To better fit the question 'Would you like to see more parks in your city?' a more direct response would be 'I'm not sure' or 'Yes, I would'/'No, I wouldn't' depending on opinion.

× I don't know

✓ I don't know.

Same correction and explanation: present simple negative is correct; add punctuation. For the future-oriented question 'Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?' a more fitting response would be 'Yes, I want to go to [park name] in the future' or 'I'm not sure yet.'