Parks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 用更自然和連貫的句子來表達，注意時態一致與單複數。開頭直接回答問題，然後用一兩句具體細節支持（例如誰和你去、公園裡做了什麼）。避免重複與碎片句。

例: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often went with my parents and siblings, and we would have picnics and play games like tag and hide-and-seek on the grass.

提案: 句子要更簡潔流暢，注意語法（主謂一致、時態）和詞序。先直接回答，再說明原因並給出具體例子（如帶孩子做什麼活動）。使用連接詞如 because 或 so 使語意清楚。

例: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because I have two young daughters who love playing outdoors. We often have family picnics and let them run around on the playground or fly a kite.

提案: 回答要完整並使用連貫句子，給出具體理由和建議。注意單詞拼寫和語法（park, trees），並用連接詞如 because 或 if to 表達條件或原因。可以提及為何樹和遊樂設施重要。

例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because green spaces improve air quality and provide places for families to relax. New parks with more trees and play equipment like swings and slides would be especially welcome.

提案: 回答需更具體和條理清晰。先說明你想去哪個公園或類型的公園，然後解釋為什麼以及現在的限制（例如人在泰國無法回鄉）。避免猶豫詞和片段語句，使用一兩句完整句子。

例: Yes, I would like to visit the large city park in my hometown because it has a beautiful lake and walking paths. However, I am currently living in Thailand, so I cannot travel back home at the moment.

× Yes, I like going to park.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks.

原句中時態與名詞數不匹配。“like”應該用過去式“liked”（因為是在回答“as a child”），且“park”應為複數或加定冠詞“the park”。建議：根據語境使用過去時，並將可數名詞變為複數或加上冠詞。例如：“I liked going to the park”或“I liked going to parks.”

× As a child.

✓ (合併到上一句：) Yes, I liked going to parks as a child.

單獨的片語“As a child.”不是完整句子，應與前句合併以表達完整意思。建議：把時間狀語放在句中或句末與主要動詞連接。

× When I was young, I like go to park.

✓ When I was young, I liked going to parks.

原句中主句時間是過去（was），從句動詞也應使用過去式“liked”。此外，動詞“go”需改為動名詞“going”，並且“park”應為複數或加定冠詞。建議：保持時態一致，使用動名詞表習慣性動作。

× Going to park with my family, we can have picnic and play a lot of games in the park.

✓ When we went to the park with my family, we could have picnics and play a lot of games.

開頭的動名詞短語結構不清楚，且時態應為過去（和前文一致）。“have picnic”需改為複數“have picnics”或加冠詞。建議：使用完整時間從句或過去式句子，動詞用過去式或情態動詞過去形式。

× Yes, of course, I still like going to park now because now I'm married, I have two daughters.

✓ Yes, of course, I still like going to parks now because I'm married and I have two daughters.

“going to park”中的“park”應為複數或加冠詞以表一般習慣。“now”在句中出現兩次冗餘，且連詞應使用“and”連接兩個並列分句。建議：刪除多餘的“now”，並使用複數形式或定冠詞。

× They very like to go outside for play special picnic in outside.

✓ They really like to go outside to have special picnics.

“very like”是不正確的搭配，應使用“really like”。“for play”應改為不定式“to have”或動名詞“playing”，且“picnic”需用複數或加冠詞。“in outside”冗餘且語序不正確，應為“outside”。建議：用常見搭配“really like to do something”並注意名詞單複數與介詞用法。

× Yes, of course I would like to see more part in my city if they have another tree and. Swings will be better.

✓ Yes, of course I would like to see more parks in my city. It would be better if they had more trees and swings.

“part”應為“park(s)”或“parks”；主從句時態與主謂一致需要使用虛擬語氣或條件式，“if they have”改為過去式“if they had”更符合禮貌或假設語氣。另外“another tree and. Swings”句子斷裂且標點錯誤，應合併並把名詞改為複數。建議：使用“parks”並修正條件句時態，確保句子連貫完整。

× Feature. MMM, yes. But now I'm in Thailand, I cannot go to my hometown.

✓ In the future, yes. But now I'm in Thailand, so I cannot go to my hometown.

“Feature”拼寫錯誤應為“future”或短語“In the future”。開頭的非語言填充“MMM”在書面語中應省略或改為“yes”。此外“But now I'm in Thailand, I cannot go to my hometown”可用連詞“so”使邏輯更清晰。建議：糾正拼寫並使用完整的時間短語，保持句子連貫。