Parks— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the response grammatically correct, slightly expand with a brief reason or specific memory, and keep it concise (1–3 sentences). Use linking phrases if adding details.

例: Yes, I really enjoyed going to parks when I was a child. I often went there with my family to play on the swings and have picnics, which made those visits very fun and memorable.

提案: Avoid repetition and improve grammar. Give a clear direct answer, then add a brief reason with a linking word. Keep to 2–3 sentences and correct verb forms.

例: Not very often, because my schedule is quite busy nowadays. However, I try to visit a park when I have free time to relax and get some fresh air.

提案: Give a direct answer and add a specific reason or benefit using linking words. Use precise language (city vs country) and avoid repeating the same idea.

例: Yes, definitely. I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide green space for exercise and improve residents' wellbeing.

提案: Clarify which park you mean and correct grammar. State the park's name or location and explain why you want to visit, using linking words and 2–3 concise sentences.

例: Yes, there is a park in my home village that I want to visit in the future. It is famous for its lake and walking trails, and I would like to go there to relax and enjoy the scenery.

× 'Yes, I really enjoyed going to park when I was child.'

✓ 'Yes, I really enjoyed going to the park when I was a child.'

'park' and 'child' require articles here. Use 'the park' for a specific place type and 'a child' for nonspecific singular noun. Suggestion: add 'the' before 'park' and 'a' before 'child'.

× 'No, because nowadays my schedule is very busy, so that's why I'm not going parks nowadays.'

✓ 'No, because nowadays my schedule is very busy, so I don't go to parks.'

'I'm not going parks' is ungrammatical: present continuous with 'go' needs a gerund or to express habitual action use simple present. Also missing preposition 'to' and redundant 'nowadays'. Use 'I don't go to parks' to indicate habitual lack of attendance.

× 'Yes, definitely. I like to see more parks in my country.'

✓ 'Yes, definitely. I would like to see more parks in my country.'

This sentence is grammatically acceptable but sounds unnatural with 'I like to see' when expressing desire for future or change. Using 'would like' correctly conveys desire. No article error in 'parks' or 'my country', but correction improves modality and intention (fits question about desire for more parks). Note: if strictly correcting articles, none needed; primary issue is modal verb usage and nuance, so replace 'like to' with 'would like'.

× 'Yes, I remember that one park that I want to go in my future for in my village literal.'

✓ 'Yes, I remember one park that I want to go to in the future in my village.'

'want to go in my future' is incorrect phrasing for future intention; use 'in the future' and include preposition 'to' after 'go'. 'literal' is incorrect word choice and position; remove it. The corrected sentence places 'in my village' appropriately. Also consider 'I want to visit one park in my village in the future' for a smoother phrasing.